RMT - Ice Monotype:

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Shammers

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Good afternoon all, I hope you're all doing well!

I'm putting a monotype battle league together with my friends with a couple of rules - 1. no legendaries, and 2. no comp. banned moves or mons.

Whilst I've been a casual pokemon fan for a while, I'm still new to competetive battling, and would love some feedback on my ice team! Currently, I have:

Tusks (Mamoswine) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Oblivious
Tera Type: Ice
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Stealth Rock
- Earthquake
- Endeavor
- Ice Shard

Queenie (Ninetales-Alola) @ Light Clay
Ability: Snow Warning
Tera Type: Ice
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
- Aurora Veil
- Freeze-Dry
- Moonblast
- Blizzard

Claws (Weavile) @ Life Orb
Ability: Pressure
Tera Type: Dark
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Knock Off
- Icicle Crash
- Ice Shard
- Pursuit

Clamps (Cloyster) @ Waterium Z
Ability: Skill Link
Tera Type: Water
EVs: 112 Atk / 144 SpA / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Shell Smash
- Icicle Spear
- Hydro Pump
- Rock Blast

Barrak (Abomasnow-Mega) @ Abomasite
Ability: Snow Warning
Tera Type: Grass
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Modest Nature
- Blizzard
- Giga Drain
- Earthquake
- Ice Shard

Nessie (Lapras) @ Choice Specs
Ability: Water Absorb
Tera Type: Water
EVs: 80 HP / 252 SpA / 176 Spe
Modest Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Hydro Pump
- Freeze-Dry
- Surf
- Blizzard

Have I done anything right? What could I do to improve? Any mons I should look into switching in? If so, which should I get, and who should I trade out?

Thank you in advance for your help! Anything and everything is much appreciated!
 
You have posted this rate in the wrong area. Since your team is for Monotype, you should post your team rate here. You must also have 3 lines of explanation on each Pokémon, which can include what it does, what certain things (moves, items, etc) on the Pokémon do, what the Pokémon provides for the team and stuff in that general field. I recommend checking this thread to learn how to write an RMT.
 
Hi, welcome to smogon! I am locking your RMT for the time being as the forum rules require that you provide at least three lines of descriptions for each Pokemon to explain their roles. Please read the rules carefully and look at Team Showcase to see the detail we require. PM me with updated descriptions, and I will be happy to unlock this. Alternatively if you just want some quick tips feel free to post on the RMT section of the smogon discord.

To PM someone on Smogon, go over their name on any of their post. It will display a little pop-up with a summary of their profile. Then, hit the "Start conversation" button and you will be able to write a PM just like you write a regular thread.

Why did you choose this Pokemon? What do the EV spreads do and why do you have it? What are all 4 moves for?
 
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