RMT - My new team wifi/shoddy

[HollyGR]

Hi at all, this is my wifi team on d/p and now on platinum, but i want to use this also on shoddy with decently results, official and smogon server.

This is the team:

BaHaMuT (Salamence) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 80 Atk/176 Spd/252 SAtk
Rash nature (+SAtk, -SDef)
- Draco Meteor
- Brick Break
- Fire Blast
- Roost

This is the starter, help me with more starter,for now is good but i think is better outrage on roost?

Wall Hack (Bronzong) @ Lum Berry
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/84 Atk/46 Def/128 SDef
Sassy nature (+SDef, -Spd)
- Hypnosis
- Stealth Rock
- Explosion
- Gyro Ball

Normally Bronzong, help versus gengar and other, no other to say.

This is Ibiza (Heatran) (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 4 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Earth Power
- Fire Blast
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Explosion

Normal heatran.

The Fatal Fox (Alakazam) (M) @ Choice Specs
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: 4 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Focus Blast
- Grass Knot
- Shadow Ball
- Psychic

The fatal fox, in the true sense of the word XD, kill a lot of pokemon, grass knot is for swampert and little more, if i give trick at alakazam i go to give hidden power grass at heatran.

Lucifer Call :°D (Lucario) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Close Combat
- Extremespeed
- Swords Dance
- Ice Punch

JollyCario.

PorNoLaX (Snorlax) (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Thick Fat
EVs: 216 HP/236 Def/58 SDef
Careful nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Curse
- Return
- Rest
- Fire Punch

My adorable curselax, i prefer the more power of return on body slam.


I not have a big problem with this team[for now], but i want to fix them.
Thanks for the attention


ps: Sorry for my english.

 

[TAY]

You need to take a look at the RMT rules, specifically:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

If you add more useful content to this post then PM me and I will unlock the thread.