RMT! my ou krazzy team.

[uu killer]

I don't know if my team is great so please help me out. This is my team.

peek at my team
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http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/gbc242.gif http://archives.bulbagarden.net/w/upload/e/ea/Spr_3e_376.gif

My Team

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Lead
Gengar@Focus Sash
Ability:Levitate
EVs: Spe 252/SpA 252/SpD 4
Nature:Timid
Move Set-
-Shadow Ball
-Focus Blast
-Thunder Bolt
- HP Fire/Explosion
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HE is not a normal leader but i like him. He is fast and can take on many other leaders.He could OHKO Max Tyranitar and 2HKO for Gyrados.He can take on Azelf. When he is almost dead he can use an explosion to the enemy with him.

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Offensive Dancer
Gyarados@Life Orb/Leftovers
Ability:Intimidate
EVs:Atk 252/Spe 252 /Def 6
Nature:Adamant/Jolly
Move set-
-Dragon Dance
-Waterfall
-Earthquake
-stone edge/Stone Edge
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Gyarados becomes so powerful after one dragon dance. It can OHKO many people like Tyranitars. I need help for its nature and moves.He is cool.

http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs19/f/2007/285/f/c/Lucario_Animation_by_Lukari_oh.gif http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/gbc227.gif
The Beast
Lucario@Life Orb
Ability:Inner Focus
EVs: Atk 252/Spe 252/Def 4
Nature:Adamant/Jolly
Move set-
-Swords Dance
-Close combat
-Extreme Speed
-Ice Punch/Stone edge/Crunch
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I need help for his moves. After a single swords dance with adamant nature he can destroy many defensive Pokemon with close combat. I loved him since his movie came out.

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Physical Wall
Skarmory@leftovers
Ability:keen eye
EVs:HP 252/Atk 64/Def 176/Spe 18
Nature:Impish
Move set-
-Drill Peck/Brave Bird
-Stealth Rock
-Roost
-Spikes
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I have all ways wanted a Skarmory it is ok.But I want a Creselia so should I get a Cresslia to replace my Skarmory? The Evs are very spread out please help me out with that as well.

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Special Wall
Blissey@Leftovers
Ability:Natural Cure
EVs:HP 148/Spe 40/SpD 216
Nature:Calm
Move set-
-Ice Beam
-Seismic Toss
-Thunder Wave
-Softboiled
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Blissey has the highest HP in the entire game. It also has a very high special Defence. If I have made any mistakes in the pokemon please fix them I dont want to mess up with blissey.

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Late Game Sweeper
Metagross@Choice Band
Ability:Clear Body
EVs:HP 240/Atk 236/Def 12/Spe 22
Nature:Adamant
Move set-
-Earthquake
-Explosion
-Meteor Mash
-Thunder Punch/Bullet Punch
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Metagross has very high attack stat but I need to somehow increase his speed.he also has great defenses.

PROBLEMS
There are many problems in my team.
-Fix the moves
-Fix the EVs
-I want a aerodactyl as a lead should I take him or not.
-I need a special sweeper in in my team I basically have no speicial sweepers.

 

[Taylor]

Read the RMT rules: http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=19179

Take particular notice to Rule#3 because that is the rule you must understand in this case. Your descriptions are short and must improve. I urge you to take more time to explain each pokemon's role in the team and how they operate as a unit, et cetera.

 

[SlottedPig]

Just a word of advice.

SkarmBliss is a bad choice on offensive teams, as Infernape can easily OHKO them both, and MixNite is just behind him. Essentially, you'll be 2 players short against offensive teams. You can replace them with Special Sweepers which you wanted so much.

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