RMT:My Style

I've used well over twenty teams on Shoddy Battle (It's a lot, I know) and only a few have been able to bring out a sense of origionality to me (maybe not to you, but to me this team does). Anyways, here it is.
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Deoxys Speed Form-Pressure
Focus Sash-Timid
Ice Beam
Psychic
Taunt
Focus Blast
96Spd/252SAt/160HP
My first time using a Deoxys...ever. This Particular Deoxys was designed to counter leads such as Gengar, Bronzong, Aerodactyl, Crobat, and so on. All of these leads tend to carry either Stealth Rock, Hypnosis, Trick Room, or ither non-attacking moves. Therefore, I slapped on Taunt, which I usually use right off the bat with these leads. If I just so happen to fight a trickster who thinks they can trick me with a Shadow Ball, Stone Edge, X-Scizzor, or Gyro Ball, I have Focus Sash waiting for them. Then I can slam them with either Ice Beam or Psychic, or switch out into something else.
Lapras-Water Absorb
Chesto Berry-Adamant
Dragon Dance
Substitute
Rest
Waterfall

252Df/252SDf/4HP
I've never actually seen that many Lapras, so I checked it out. When I scrolled through its moves, I found Dragon Dance. This intrigued me ;). Concidering Lapras' decent defencive stats, I decided to bring them to their full potential. This make Lapras both a decent wall and a sweeper. Coupled with Rest and Chesto Berry, Lapras can DDance until it is weak, and then Rest so it can sweep or use Substitute and beat foes down when they think they can get me with a status move since I'm without a Berry. Also helps to switch into this when a Gyarados thinks it can Aqua Tail my Pokemon for STAB after I switch out mid Substitute (If it happens).
Magnezone-Magnet Pull
Leftovers-Modest
Sustitute
Thunderbolt
Flash Cannon
Magnet Rise
252SAt/88SDf/168Df
A counter to Bronzongs who survived Deoxys or to the ones who come to the party late for a defensive switch in. Substitute lets me scout out the strategy of the Zong, wether it is defensive (Hypnosis) or offensive (Earthquake or HP Fire). If its an Earthquaker, I follow up with Magnet Rise. If not, switching might be necessary depending on if my substitute breaks when he uses HP Fire. Thunderbolt and Flash Cannon just let Magnezone do his job as a special sweeper. Mr. Mime's Calm Mind boosted BPass gives him a little more oomph along with more SDefense that the EV's didn't cover.
Mr Mime-Soundproof
Lum Berry-Timid
Baton Pass
Calm Mind
Thunderbolt
Magical Leaf
252SAt/252Spd/4HP
Thanks to pikapowow of Shoddy for helping me think of this. Seeing how Mr. Mime is the only BPasser that negates Roar, I decided to use it. It crushes pesky Swamperts and Suicunes that decided not to roar me away but still try to smack me around with Magical Leaf and Tbolt, as well as prevent them from inflicting me with some sort of status such as Poison, Paralysis, or Sleep before I switch using Lum. I Calm Mind to both boost my stats and to swap into the already lightning fast Speed Form Deoxys or the sturdy Magnezone.
Garchomp-Sand Veil
Choice Scarf-Adamant
Outrage
Earthquake
Stone Edge
Crunch
252Att/252Spd/4HP
My all-out Choice Scarfed chomp. Gets a nice STAB boost from Outrage and can kill a ton of things with it. Usually used later so Confusing doesn't kick in before I finish the foe off. Earthquake gets rid of Electivire's who think they can Ice Punch+Fire Punch+ThunderPunch my team away, and handles Gyara, Mence, and Vile with Stone Edge. Crunch destroys Dusknoir, Cresselia and Gengar, although Outrage is just about as strong even under a super-effective boost. These guys come out early, though, so getting confused isn't a good idea.
Scizor-Technician
Lum Berry-Adamant
Swords Dance
Quick Attack
Baton Pass
Night Slash
252Att/168Df/88SDf
I really don't like getting put to sleep or being burned after Swords Dance, so Lum Berry seemed to click on this set. Life Orb or Metronome might have helped also. This is the standard QA+SD Scizor only with X-
Scizzor to kill those Cresselia walls. Baton Pass allows for GChomp (after SD) to get max power out of all his moves. Similar to how my Mr.Mime switches into Speed Form Deoxys in the fact that its simply a mirror of it. QA just rips stuff to shreads after SD x2+ or I can use X-Scizzor for some STAB.
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And that's all! Please rate so I can decide wether or not I continue (or start, really) to use this team.
 
Well, I'll just list somethings I noticed. However, I am new, so take it with a grain of salt =P

While your Lapras set is interesting, just one move really hurts it. Vaporeon kills it.

Your other main problem is that you have overlapping weaknesses. Two pokemon are weak to fire, two to dark/ghost/bug etc.

Oh, and in the future, please space your paragraphs. It was really an eyesore having to read it.
 
I have definitly seen what you said about Lapras. I just don't know what to slap onto it now other than Waterfall. Body Slam is useless against Ghosts so I'd rather not.

The weaknesses you spoke of I normally block with Magnezone. He comes out promptly to those types of Pokemon.

I'll space the paragraphs in a little bit. Thanks for the help. :)
 
Yeah that hurts my eyes :( also I have used about 100000 teams on shoddy. /over exageration. But seriously 20 is like nothing.

If what I read is right, then I see a big scarf ape weak. Ohkos everything on your team except maybe mr. mime but that is easily taken care of by another poke. also, SD lucaio takes this team out back and slauters it. Besides scarf chomp, everything is ohkoed and either outsped or killed by extreme speed.
 
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