RMT Offensive OU Team

[Pavly]

Offensive OU Team i've been playing lots with, but i have sometimes a hard time with this team

Mamowsine as a lead is very good to set up rocks with and deal damage with ! With priority ice shard you can deal some serious damage.

Mamoswine (M) @ Focus Sash
Trait: Oblivious
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Stealth Rock
- Ice Shard
- Stone Edge
- Superpower

Deal damage and burn physical attackers, when hp gets low, pain split!

Rotom-W @ Leftovers
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP / 112 SDef / 144 Spd
Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
- Hydro Pump
- Thunderbolt
- Will-O-Wisp
- Pain Split

Revenge killer!

Scizor (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Technician
EVs:
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Bullet Punch
- U-turn
- Pursuit
- Superpower

good special wall

Jellicent (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Water Absorb
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SDef
Hardy Nature
- Surf
- Recover
- Ice Beam
- Will-O-Wisp

Iron head with serence grace is awesome! wish protect for healing and psychic for some stab

Jirachi @ Leftovers
Trait: Serene Grace
EVs: 252 HP / 224 Def / 32 Spd
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Wish
- Protect
- Psychic
- Iron Head

Physical wall wich can do lots of damage aswel after a sw

Gliscor (M) @ Toxic Orb
Trait: Poison Heal
EVs: 252 HP / 200 Def / 56 Spd
Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Swords Dance
- Taunt
- Earthquake
- Ice Fang


I hope you could help me to make this team better

 

[puking_rainbows]

Hello there.
First of all, let me suggest you that you might want to expand the explanations on your pokemon, as raters would greatly appreciate to know what roles your pokemon fill, as well as why you chose them, their moves, etc.

But now, to your team... I see a pretty big weakness to Sun-teams as 3 of your pokemon are weak to Grass, and 3 are weak to fire as well. On the other hand, you have a status absoreber, which is great, and some SR and spikes resistance. Now, to try to make better you team, why don't you trya a Heatran in stead of your Mamoswine? It's reliable, adds bulk and helps you deal with some weather teams.

Heatran @ Air Ballon
Modest nature
EVs: 248 HP / 52 Sp.Atk / 200 Sp.Def / 8 Spe
Stealth Rock | FireBlast | Earth Power | Hidden Power (Ice)

There are some minor things you should change too. For example, you might want your Jellicent to have Shadow ball over Ice Beam and make Rotom-W into a Trick user:

Rotom- W @ Choice Specs
Timid nature
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Sp.Atk / 252 Spe
Trick | Volt switch | Hydropump | HP fire

And Jirachi's Psychic... I'm not so sure about it. Maybe you should go to the typical Bodyslam.

 

[IronGross]

Why aren't you running EQ on Mamoswine? Replace Superpower for it.

 

[haunter]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.