RMT ou help first team in a while

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This is my first team since i began to play pokemon again and as you can see i need some help. I need atleast one good wall special sweeper and a starter. It would also be good if you can help me make my team alittle less standard.

Team at a glance

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Gyrados @ Leftovers
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: Atk 252 Spd 252 Hp 6
Nature: Adamant
- Dragon Dance
- Waterfall
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge

I lead with gyrados and try to get a dd and sweep. But it usally gets tricked or taunted so it wont work. If i do get the dd most of the time its a nice sweep some time 6-0.

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Electivire @ Life Orb
Ability: Motor Drive
EVs: Atk 252 Spd 252 Hp 6
Nature: Adamant
- Thunder Punch
- Ice Punch
- Cross Chop
- Earthquake

I go to Electivire if there is t bolt or t wave or any other elctiric attack is predicted. He is a very strong sweeper after being hit and a good one with out the t bolt.

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Salamence @ Life Orb
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: Atk 252 Spd 252 Hp6
Nature: Adamant
- Dragon Dance
- Outrage
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge

Mence is usally a good sweeper if he can surrive one of his dd but i try to dd on a switch. dd + outrage + life orb + stab= sweetness. outrage is his main attack.

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Heracross @ Choice Band
Ability: Guts
EVs: Atk 252 Spd 160 Hp 96
Nature: Adamant
- Megahorn
- Close Combat
- Stone Edge
- Night Slash

When there walls see him come out off of his pokeball they run for the hill. Hera is used to break those walls and sweep.

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Lucario @ Life Orb
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: Atk 252 Spd 252 Hp 252
Nature: Jolly
- Sword Dance
- Close Combat
- Extreme Speed
- Crunch

The First thing i do is usally try and sneak a sword dance. Then after that i let he do some sweeping with close combat and crunch.

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Infernape @ Life Orb
Ability: Blaze
EVs: Sp Atk 252 Spd 192 Atk 64
Nature: Hasty
- Nasty Plot
- Close Combat
- Flame Thrower
- Grass Knot

I save him for last when there team is all busted up then he works his monkey magic. He can sweep the rest of there team at the end of the game.
 
Also your whole team is DD,SD,or NP. You have no bulk at all, meaning that if another person uses a Pokemon like yours, you have no way to stop it.
 
i no its not bulky and i cant help that there not much i dont really have a stragy thats what im looking for
 
On Electivire it should have life orb because its fragile anyway and you wont always hit supereffectively.
Taunt on Gyarados so you cant get phazed and slower leads wont get stealth rock up or hypnotize you. Also Bronzong will probably switch out because it cant do anything besides explode.
 
Most of your team will die to rotom-h. The only ones immune to burns, are likely OHKO'd. Another thing is an offensive team isn't really an offensive team without a thunderwaver. Add in a celebi for a cleric/t-waver.
 
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.
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If you don't have a strategy then you can't really expect to build a team.
 
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