RMT; standard shoddy battle

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This team has given me success ranking me 1354 so far on shoddy battle. I'm posting it here so i can make it better and make improvements to help me get my rank up =]. I dont really explain it that in depth because it's self explainitory. Thank for viewing =].

Azumaril@lum berry
adamant
252hp/252attack/6speed
-aqua jet
-aqua tail
-superpower
-ice punch

I found this pokemon in a platinum thread. It has worked wonders for me not really looking to change it. Aqua jet for suicide leads and gengar 2ohko them. Aqua tail for hippadom 2ohko and do damage on other's. Superpower for blissey and tyranitar. And ice punch is for salamance.

Relicanth@leftovers
Adamant
6hp/252attack/252speed
-rock polish
-head smash
-earthquake
-waterfall


He has been a good sweeper being able to take hits rock polish and sweep. Its a pretty basic set i got from smogon. The moves are there for coverage and damage.

Spirittomb@leftovers
bold
236hp/defense/52sp.attack
-calm mind
-will-o-wisp
-shadow ball
-pain split

I need some help with this pokemon i need something to act as a wall and dish out some damage. Calm mind to act as a spacial wall and do damage with shadow ball. will-o-wisp to cripple sweepers. I have thought about hidden power fighting over pain split but im not sure. I dont know about the evs i made them up.

Breloom@toxic orb
Adamant
40 hp/252attack/216speed
-spore
-substitute
-focus punch
-seed bomb

Pretty much self explainitory. Since i saw MTGxerxes use it I started to and now i really like it. Its a basic set nothing speacail about it.

Lucario@salac berry
Adamant
252attack/4defence/252speed
-endure
-reversal
-sword dance
-crunch

Standard set not much explaining needed. Ev's are basic i endure and reversal sweep. Which has destroyed many teams. I came back from 1-6 to win it due to this pokemon.

zapdos@choice scarf
6hp/252sp.attack/252speed
-thunderbolt
-hidden power ice
-heat wave
-omnious wind

A scarf zapdos! I love coming into gyrodoses after 1 dragon dance and 1ohko them with thunderbolt. I catches a lot of poeple by surprise ev's for max speed and power.

 

[stormtrooper]

ominous wind is almost always weaker than thunderbolt i think uturn is more useful to scout for special walls like blissey or tyranitars.

 

[panamaxis]

Reversal Lucario is a bad idea in the current metagame. Scarf Jirachi and priority moves are everywhere, scizor is on most teams these days. On lucario change reversal to close combat and endure to extremespeed and give it a life orb. Ominous wind is only useful for rotom so change that into U-turn so you can scout switches.

Dark Pulse over Shadow Ball on Spiritomb. They give similar coverage but you are not walled by normal types.

Due to Hypnosis's accuracy drop status leads aren't that common anymore so I would suggest giving azumarill leftovers.

 

[TAY]

This thread is being locked under rule 3:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

If you fix your descriptions then PM me and I will unlock this thread.