RMT the first team that actually does great

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youngknight92

Ok so I am posting this team and it has beed doing good and i hope i will be able to go to top 50 with this but please comment there could be much improvment so now for the team

Glance at team​
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Zapdos @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP/220 Def/36 SDef
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Thunder Wave
- Roost
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Grass]
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Scizor (M) @ Choice Band
Ability: Technician
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- U-turn
- Superpower
- Pursuit
- Bullet Punch
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Jirachi @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Serene Grace
EVs: 110 HP/200 Atk/200 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Fire Punch
- Trick
- Stealth Rock
- Iron Head
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Blissey (F) @ Chople Berry
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP/252 Def/4 SDef
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Counter
- Protect
- Wish
- Seismic Toss
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Dusknoir (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP/15 Atk/152 Def/89 SDef
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Will-o-wisp
- Thunderpunch
- Pain Split
- Ice Punch
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Machamp (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: No Guard
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 SAtk
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Dynamicpunch
- Payback
- Thunderpunch
- Ice Punch
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This may seem surprising from me... but....

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.
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