[RMT] Very first competitive team! Please rate and criticize! (Constructive Feedback is appreciated)

Aspen

Aspen

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Charizard@ Charizardite X
Ability: Tough Claws
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 252 Atk/ 252 Spe/ 4 Hp
- Flare Blitz
- Dragon Claw
- Dragon Dance
- Roost
Now why Zard X, first of all Charizard is one of my all time favorites, this EV spread is to maximize his sweeping capability and is boost even further with Dragon Dance.
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Rotom-Wash@ Chesto Berry
Ability: Levitate
Nature: Bold
EVs: 252 Hp/ 252 Def/ 4 Sp.Atk
- Hydro Pump
- Volt Switch
- Will-O-Wisp
- Rest
Now Rotom-W is currently my safest check against the meta's threat like Talonflame and Azumarill the EV spread and nature is used to maximize his tanking capability against the common physical threats. Chesto set is used to give it a second life, WoW is pretty much self-explanatory.
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Excadrill@ Air Balloon
Ability: Mold Breaker
Nature: Jolly
EVs: 252 Atk/ 252 Spe/ 4 Hp
- Rapid Spin
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide
- Swords Dance
First thing that comes to mind when having a Charizard in the team is to have a spinner to remove stealth rock. Jolly to be quick but adamant could be used too I'm not really sure, EV spread is once again used to maximize atk and spe. Swords dance is there for set-up sweeping purpose.
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Conkeldurr@ Assault Vest
Ability: Guts
Nature: Adamant
EVs: 252 Atk/ 252 Sp.D/ 4Def
- Mach Punch
- Drain Punch
- Ice Punch
- Knock Off
Now conkeldurrr is my special tank/ physical sweeper. It is here to check on special sweeper and to force them to switch out, if predicted correctly a timed knock off would pose a huge problem for my opponent upon switch in. If they don't switch out its fine conkeldurr can do some pretty good damage on them.

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Skarmory@ Leftovers/Rocky Helmet
Ability: Sturdy
Nature: Impish
EVs: 252 Hp/ 252 Def/ 4 Sp.D
- Brave Bird
- Roost
- Stealth Rock
- Whirlwind
Say hello to my lead, stealth rock set up, whirlwind rinse and repeat until I find a suitable pokemon to use brave bird on or to stop opponent from setting up. Roost to recover some pretty decent amount of hp in the long run.
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Lucario@ Life Orb
Ability: Inner Focus
Nature: Jolly
EVs: 252 Sp.Atk/ 252 Spe/ 4 Hp
- Aura Sphere
- Flash Cannon
- Dark Pulse
- Nasty Plot
Okay why lucario for special sweeper, pretty much because I think he has the capability to be one. Nasty plot set up if I have the chance a +2 special lucario is not something to be meddled with. The rest of the moves are pretty much maximizing his coverage.

Please rate my team, and give me constructive feedback if possible as this is my first competitive team! If possible suggestions are welcomed! Please criticize too!

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LightningLuxray said:
If your descriptions aren't three or more lines, this thread is going to get locked D: Make sure you have at least three or more lines of text for each Pokemon!
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It is three or more lines;( I mean that's what I pretty much have to say? I'm new and I really don't know what more I can say. You guys can definitely help me out, I posted here for a reason and that is to get more feedbacks on my first team.
 
Aspen said:
It is three or more lines;( I mean that's what I pretty much have to say? I'm new and I really don't know what more I can say. You guys can definitely help me out, I posted here for a reason and that is to get more feedbacks on my first team.
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Hmmm... Are you sure they're three lines? The most I see are two, and Charizard X only has one. My recommendation is to go more in-depth about what the Pokemon does, how it helps the team, and why you chose each move/it's EV spread/nature. Also, if you haven't already, give this a read, it definitely helps when trying to make an RMT! http://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/rules-read-before-making-an-rmt.3490983/
 
LightningLuxray said:
Hmmm... Are you sure they're three lines? The most I see are two, and Charizard X only has one. My recommendation is to go more in-depth about what the Pokemon does, how it helps the team, and why you chose each move/it's EV spread/nature. Also, if you haven't already, give this a read, it definitely helps when trying to make an RMT! http://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/rules-read-before-making-an-rmt.3490983/
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My bad because I was posting from iPhone and it shows more than three lines. I will definitely try to give more in depth explanation! :)
 
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