RMT

[El Jako]

This is a new team I'm trying out, I've been trying it out on Shoddy. I am thinking about maybe making a variant of Togekiss, taking Ninjask, or a Baton Passer that can up Special Attack, and then BPing to Togekiss for late game sweeper. Normally he works good anyways, even without high speed, a couple Nasty Plots and he sweeps. So here is my team:

Gallade w/Focus Sash (Steadfast)
Jolly
252 attack, 252 speed, 6 hp
Swords Dance
Close Combat
Stone Edge
Night Slash

Scizor w/Life Orb (Technician)
Jolly
232 speed, 252 attack, 24 def
Swords Dance
Brick Break
Iron Head
X-Scissor

Skarmory w/Shed Shell (Keen Eye)
Impish
252 hp, 252 defense, 6 speed
Stealth Rock
Brave Bird
Roost
Whirlwind

Milotic w/Leftovers (Marvel Scale)
Bold
148 hp, 228 defense, 132 special attack
Surf
Ice Beam
Recover
Hypnosis

Togekiss w/Leftovers (Serene Grace)
Modest
252 hp, 152 sp. attack, 104 speed
Nasty Plot
Roost
Air Slash
Aura Sphere

Machamp w/Choice Scarf (Guts)
Jolly
252 attack, 244 speed, 12 hp
Close Combat
Ice Punch
Thunder Punch
Stone Edge

I am thinking about taking out Machamp for the Baton Passer, since I have to switch him out a lot with the Scarf. Any suggestions?

 

[Great Sage]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by give an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.