Setup sweeper team

[Scizo]

Smeargle (Jolly/Focus Sash) Own tempo
252 Spe 155 Def 106 SpD
Spore
Spider web
Ingrain
Batton pass

The lead Will cover most pokemon, because of his speed he should get spore and Induce sleep on the foes lead then proceed to spider web to trap the foe. From there use ingrain or batton pass to setup a sweep.
Should the opponennt get an attack off first then the focus sash will save Smeargle.

Scizor (Adamant/Leftovers) Technician
252 Att 250 Hp 8 SpD
Swords Dance
Bullet punch
Brick break
Bug bite

Physical sweeper With the opponent asleep and trapped Scizor can proceed to set up with SD and take out anything.

Gyarados (Adamant/Leftover) Intimidate
252 Atk 6 Def 252 Spe
Dragon dance
Waterfall
Stone edge
Earthquake

Physical Sweeper If the opponents lead is a fire type then i will baton pass to Gyarados instead of scizor.DD until opponent wakes then sweep with Gyaras monster attack.


Tyranitar (Jolly/Choice Scarf) Sand stream
252 Att 252 Spd 6 Hp
Stone edge
Pursuit
EQ
Superpower

Physical sweeper Tyranitar is there for taking out alot of popular sweepers Heatran, TTar Gyarados as well as some walls (Blissey).

Heatran (Naïve/Life orb) Flash fire
252 SpA 252 Spe 6 SpD
Flamethrower
Earthpower
Hiddenpower grass
Taunt

Special sweeper Heatran is for Gyarados coverage and CB Scizors and is one of the best Special attackers in UU. Taunt to stop my opponent setting up a sweep on me.

Celebi (Bold/Leftovers) Natural cure
252Hp 220 Def 38 SpD
Grass knot
Recover
Heal bell
Hidden power ice

Celebi is to heal really but mostly filler. I was thinking of putting in a Nasty plot Togekiss
with roost, air slash and either Flamethrower or Aura sphere.

I'm no expert and although i've played Pokemon since 1998 i've not played any competitive battles. I'm designing this team for Shoddy to eventually use on wifi after lots of breeding. Where could the team improve? Maybe a stealth rocker in the last slot but which pokemon best suits my team? Help me to see flaws i couldn't, or to figure out what I am doing right and build on it

Thanks for your time i appreciate the input :)

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which means you are violating the above quoted RMT rule. If you wish to remedy this problem, explain your reasoning behind each Pokemon and why they work on your team more thoroughly. I recommend lurking through the RMT Archive in order to see examples of what we're looking for in an RMT!

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