Gen 3 Sharpedo [QC 1/1][GP 1/1]

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[SET]
name: Sharknado
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Crunch
move 4: Endure
item: Salac Berry
ability: Rough Skin
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

Sharpedo is able to become a usable special sweeper with the combination of Endure + Salac Berry and its decent base Special Attack and Speed stats while making use of Rough Skin to punish contact move users by putting them in range of its strong attacks. However, Sharpedo faces stiff competition from other Water-type sweepers such as Feraligatr, Swords Dance Tentacruel, and Rain Dance sweepers like Omastar and Gorebyss, as well as other Salac Berry sweepers like Scyther. Sharpedo also has a tendency to be walled by Kangaskhan, Tentacruel, Ampharos, and Blastoise due to its move choices, and it struggles to break bulkier Pokemon without heavy chip damage or Spikes and usually gets OHKOed in return because of its frailty, making it a difficult Pokemon to justify using. Rough Skin plays a big part in Sharpedo's niche in the tier, as it punishes physical attackers like Kangaskhan and Scyther by chipping them into range of its moves. Hydro Pump functions as Sharpedo's explosive STAB option, able to OHKO Solrock and Arcanine and smashing the likes of Omastar and Granbull while also being a generally powerful move to spam. Ice Beam is solid coverage for Grass-types like Vileplume and Cradily while also giving Sharpedo a more consistent way to OHKO Gligar and chunk Scyther. Crunch allows Sharpedo to handle Ghost-types such as Haunter and Misdreavus as well as beat down opposing Water-types that may wall it, such as Slowking.

As an offensive sweeper, Sharpedo greatly appreciates any form of support it can get, such as Spikes from the likes of Omastar, Qwilfish, and Glalie as all of Sharpedo's main checks dislike Spikes damage, therefore making it easier for Sharpedo to break through them, and screens from Electrode or Solrock to aid in its sweeping potential. Electrode, Solrock, and Glalie also help Sharpedo out tremendously thanks to Explosion, being able to lure in bulky Water- and Electric-types Sharpedo can struggle to deal with such as Lanturn, Ampharos, Tentacruel, and Walrein. Teammates that can switch into the aforementioned Electric-types, such as Kangaskhan, Ampharos, and Nidoqueen work well with Sharpedo, as they can also help whittle down its checks for it to sweep late-game. Toxic support from teammates such as Omastar, Arcanine, and Tentacruel helps Sharpedo in its sweeping possibilities by giving it the chance to 2HKO opponents much more safely with the additional chip damage provided. Paralysis spreaders like Stun Spore Vileplume and Thunder Wave Misdreavus can also help Sharpedo get into a position to sweep, as well as allowing it to outspeed Scyther and Tentacruel without eating its Salac Berry. Thief users, such as Electabuzz and Arcanine, also are greatly appreciated, as they are able to remove Leftovers from defensive opponents that would otherwise rely on them to keep Sharpedo in check.

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[SET]
name: Sharknado
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Crunch
move 4: Endure
item: Salac Berry
ability: Rough Skin
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe (You forgot the space)

[SET COMMENTS]

Paragraph 1

Hydro Pump functions as Sharpedo's explosive STAB option, able to OHKO Gligar Solrock (You mention ice beam OHKOs gligar consistently so theres no reason to hydro here, I moved Solrock here bc Crunch is not favored to OHKO max HP Solrock), Arcanine and 2HKO the likes of Omastar and Granbull (I wouldnt say 2HKO, you get OHKOd back, instead say something like "hits from a high range", as thats what Shark is meant to do as a cleaner) while also being a generally powerful move to spam. Crunch allows Sharpedo to handle threats such as Solrock, Haunter and Misdreavus as well as beating down Water-types that may wall it such as Slowking. Ice Beam is solid coverage for Grass-types like Vileplume and Cradily while giving Sharpedo a more consistent way to OHKO Gligar and 2HKO Scyther (Again, hit from a high range). (Move Ice Beam explanation before Crunch, go in move order w explanations) Rough Skin plays a big part in Sharpedo's niche in the tier, as it punishes physical attackers like Kangaskhan and Scyther by chipping them down into range of its moves. This combined with Endure, Salac Berry and Sharpedo's solid base Special Attack and Speed stats makes Sharpedo a useable special sweeper. However, Sharpedo faces stiff competition from other Water-type sweepers such as Feraligatr, Swords Dance Tentacruel, and Rain Dance Omastar and Gorebyss, as well as other Salac Berry sweepers like Scyther. (Another big downside I would mention is its nasty tendency to be eternally walled by Kangaskhan Tentacruel Ampharos and Blastoise, it struggles to break bulkier pokemon without heavy chip and spikes and usually gets OHKOd in return bc its extremely frail unlike other Water-type sweepers)

(Move this entire section about Sharpedo's general place in the meta before the set explanation, and go over rough skin after saying "Sharpedo is meant to a special sweeper" etc.)

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As an offensive sweeper, Sharpedo greatly appreciates any form of support it can get, such as Spikes from the likes of Omastar, Qwilfish, and Glalie (I would go more in detail about Spikes support, Sharks checks all take spikes damage and it makes it easier for Shark to get them into 2HKO range), and Screens from Electrode and Solrock. Electrode, Solrock and Glalie also help Sharpedo out tremendously thanks to Explosion's massive damage output, able to lure in bulky Water- and Electric-types Sharpedo can struggle to handle with such as Lanturn, Ampharos, Tentacruel and Walrein. Teammates that can switch into the aforementioned Electric-types such as Kangaskhan, Ampharos and Nidoqueen work well with Sharpedo, as they can also help whittle down its checks for it to sweep in the late-game. Pokémon that can spread status like Cradily, Misdreavus and Ampharos can help Sharpedo in its sweeping possibilities. (??? this sentence is very vague, i would scrap it or find a way to say how status helps against Sharpedo's checks)

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[SET]
name: Sharknado
move 1: Hydro Pump
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Crunch
move 4: Endure
item: Salac Berry
ability: Rough Skin
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

Sharpedo is able to become a useable usable special sweeper with the combination of Endure + Salac Berry and it(RA)s decent base Special Attack and Speed stats while making use of its unique ability Rough Skin to punish contact move users by putting them in range of its strong moves attacks. However, Sharpedo faces stiff competition from other Water-type sweepers such as Feraligatr, Swords Dance Tentacruel, and Rain Dance sweepers like Omastar and Gorebyss, as well as other Salac Berry sweepers like Scyther. Sharpedo also has a tendency to be walled by Kangaskhan, Tentacruel, Ampharos,(AC) and Blastoise due to its move choices, and it struggles to break bulkier Pokemon without heavy chip damage or spikes Spikes and usually gets OHKO'd OHKOed in return because of its frailty, making it a difficult Pokemon to choose (change "choose" to either "use" or "justify using", whichever one suits your point better). Rough Skin plays a big part in Sharpedo's niche in the tier, as it punishes physical attackers like Kangaskhan and Scyther by chipping them down into range of its moves. Hydro Pump functions as Sharpedo's explosive STAB option, able to OHKO Solrock(RC) and Arcanine and smashes smashing the likes of Omastar and Granbull while also being a generally powerful move to spam. (AS)Ice Beam is solid coverage for Grass-types like Vileplume and Cradily while also giving Sharpedo a more consistent way to OHKO Gligar and chunk Scyther. Crunch allows Sharpedo to handle Ghost-types such as Haunter and Misdreavus as well as beating beat down opposing Water-types that may wall it,(AC) such as Slowking. Rough Skin plays a big part in Sharpedo's niche in the tier, as it punishes physical attackers like Kangaskhan and Scyther by chipping them down into range of its moves. (repeat of something from earlier in the paragraph)

As an offensive sweeper, Sharpedo greatly appreciates any form of support it can get, such as Spikes from the likes of Omastar, Qwilfish, and Glalie as all of Sharpedo's main checks dislike Spikes damage, therefore making it easier for Sharpedo to break through them, and Screens screens from Electrode and or Solrock to aid in its sweeping potential. Electrode, Solrock,(AC) and Glalie also help Sharpedo out tremendously thanks to Explosion, being able to lure in bulky Water- and Electric-types Sharpedo can struggle to deal with such as Lanturn, Ampharos, Tentacruel,(AC) and Walrein. Teammates that can switch into the aforementioned Electric-types,(AC) such as Kangaskhan, Ampharos,(AC) and Nidoqueen work well with Sharpedo, as they can also help whittle down its checks for it to sweep late-game. Toxic support from teammates such as Omastar, Arcanine,(AC) and Tentacruel helps Sharpedo in its sweeping possibilities by giving it the chance to 2HKO opponents much more safely with the additional chip damage provided. Paralysis spreaders like Stun Spore Vileplume and Thunder Wave Misdreavus can also help Sharpedo get into a position to sweep, as well as allowing it to outspeed Scyther and Tentacruel without eating its Salac Berry. Thief Pokemon users,(AC) such as Electabuzz and Arcanine,(AC) also are greatly appreciated,(AC) as they are able to remove Leftovers from defensive opponents that would otherwise rely on them to keep Sharpedo in check.

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- Quality checked by: https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ellingtonreborn.619555/
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]] (meeeeeeeeeee)
I will stamp this after you implement, good job :tyke:
 
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