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Donphan @ Leftovers
Impish - Sturdy
252 HP/252 Def/6 Atk
Knock Off
Ice Shard
Stealth Rock
Rapid Spin

Sets up Stealth Rock, Rapid Spins anything away, Ice Shards dragons, and Knocks off any annoying items, such as Calm Mind Suicune's Leftovers.

Gliscor @ Leftovers
Impish - Hyper Cutter
252 HP/252 Def/6 Spd
Swords Dance
Rock Polish
Taunt
Baton Pass

Taunts any phazers, then Baton Passes all the stat changes!

Electivire @ Expert Belt
Adamant - Motor Drive
252 Atk/252 Spd/6 HP
ThunderPunch
Ice Punch
Cross Chop
Earthquake

Standard (Very Standard) Electivire. Receives the stat boosts from Gliscor.

Kingdra @ Mystic Water
Modest - Swift Swim
255 SpAtk/255 Spd
Rain Dance
Surf
Ice Beam
Dragon Pulse

Wasn't sure whether or not to use Dragon Pulse or Draco Meteor, but I decided I wanted to keep on sweeping, so I stuck with Dragon Pulse. Rain Dances, then sweeps!

Snorlax @ Leftovers
Careful - Thick Fat
252 Atk/252 SpDef/6 Def
Curse
Body Slam
Rest
ThunderPunch

Somewhat standard Curselax. Curses, Rests off any damage, Body Slam for STAB, ThunderPunch for fliers.

Azelf @ Life Orb
Hasty - Levitate
252 SpAtk/220 Spd/38 Atk
Psychic
Flamethrower
Grass Knot
Explosion

Attempts to specially sweep, lures Blissey in, then explodes in her big fat ugly pink face. Psychic for STAB, Flamethrower for coverage, and Grass Knot for Swampert and Rhyperior.

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Do you have a strong reliable sp defense wall Gliscor it should have roost to atleast stay alive for the BP stats to make sweeping stronger for Vire try Life Orb if you want

Donphan @ Leftovers
Impish - Sturdy
252 HP/252 Def/6 Atk
Knock Off
Ice Shard
Stealth Rock
Rapid Spin

SR aren't that common anymore when I battle I don't see them alot SR can't do alot to your team so try E quake or Stone Edge you could do CS on Azelf just a suggestion
 
Please don't lead with Donphan because it is better that your opponent does not know that you have it. That will let you bring it in later and surprise them at least once. If they know that you have it, they will predict accordingly and try to take it out quickly.

Gliscor really only needs to have Swords Dance, and not both Swords Dance and Rock Polish since Swords Dance is really the only one that could remotely help your team.

I don't see the point of Thunderpunch on Snorlax since Body Slam will do more than enough to anything not named Skarmory or Gliscor. Earthquake, Crunch, and Fire Punch are all better options, especially the first two. Fire Punch is great for using on Steel-types like Forretress that try to come in and ruin your day.

You should use the EV spreads in the SmogonDex since they are more effective than some of the ones that you have right now, such as the one on Snorlax. With Curselax, you're going to need more HP than Attack since you'll be raising Attack anyway.

Kingdra is pretty ill-suited to your team since it relies on Rain Dance and is not fast enough to really do anything without it.

The real problem that you will have is with anything that has good defensives; nothing is really suited for dealing with things like that. Look at some of the common threats in D/P and you will see why your team has trouble with them. For example, Gengar. The only thing that you have that can take care of it is Azelf. Without a doubt, your opponent will have something that can take its Psychic. If you use Explosion, you will be out an important counter. I highly suggest looking at successful teams and see what they are doing right. See how the Pokemon work together and back each other up so that the team is not easily beaten once your main counter is beaten. (Azelf isn't really a counter to Gengar either, since it cannot switch in. Therefore, Gengar has an easier time with your team. The only way you can beat it is if it stays in when you bring in Azelf and use Psychic. This probably won't happen, though.)
 
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