SpeedStorm(OU RMT)

[Gregar]

I've been out of the running after being totally anihilated on Shoddy time after time. I have been reading and learning all along the way, and now i shall make my reapearance from the shadows. This is the team I came up with and it has suprising succes, but I still need some help from you guys!

THE POKEMON

Together, they're known as team SpeedStorm

Ninjask@Leftovers
Adamant nature
Speed Boost(obviously)
EV's: 248 HP/52 ATK/184 DEF/26 SPD
- Protect
- Substitute
- Baton Pass
- X-Scissor

My lead and backbone. Protect/Sub/Protect/BP=> Jirachi/Donphan/Empoleon. Easy as that.

Also, something funny, it kills lead Azelf. Takes about 93-100%, so a nice shock.

Jirachi@Leftovers
Impish nature
Seren Grace(What else?)
EV's: 240 HP/160 DEF/32 SPD/76 SP.DEF
- U-turn
- Iron Head
- Wish
- Thunderpunch

Serene Grace abuse. See your opponent receive flinch after flinch after flinch. When I expect EQ, U-turn the hell out of there. Not much to say here, it's pretty straight forward.

Flygon@Choice Band
Adamant nature
Levitate(Out of stupid comments)
EV's: 252 ATK/184 SPD/74 SP.DEF
- Dragon Claw
- Earthquake
- U-turn
- Outrage

This one needs some revision on it's moveset. I only use Outrage and EQ, so ideas on the other moves are welcome.

About the speed EV's: 2 points more than standard Smogon issue, to take down people with standard Smogon ChoiceGon.

Donphan@Leftovers
Impish nature
Sturdy(See a patern?)
EV's: 252 HP/6 ATK/252 DEF
- Earthquake
- Ice Shard
- Knock Off
- Rapid Spin

The spinner. I use this one surprisingly often because of Ice Shard. Not much to talk about, standard donphan spinner. Knock Off for anything that hopes to stall.

Hippowdon@Leftovers
Impish nature
Sand Stream(again?o.O)
EV's: 252 HP/168 DEF/90 SP.DEF
- Earthquake
- Slack Off
- Stealth Rock
- Roar

SR and pseudo-hazer. This thing has killed a lot of Bugs and Fires with SR/Roar, and just Slack Off the damage. It's a beast, a fricking BEAST.

Empoleon@Wise Glasses
Timid nature
Torrent(Okay, boring)
EV's: 252 HP/6 SPD/252 SP.ATK
- Surf
- Ice Beam
- Grass Knot
- HP Electric

My only special sweeper, and a darn good one. This one is 9/10 times what receives the speedboost. It tears through everything, shunted by few. HP Elec for Gyarados and Vaporeon, who don't fear the Grass Knot(BÖC anyone?). Maybe an idea here might come in handy...

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Well, you've met the lot, now, ideas please, or just plain praise will do too:naughty:...

 

[Gregar]

A small list of threats:
-Swampert: Empoleon is the only thing that can take this, but empoleon dislikes EQ...
-Bulky Waters overall tend to make a long battle.
-Strong grass types smack my butt

 

[Legacy Raider]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

All your descriptions are lacking. Fix this up and PM me the changes if you'd like your thread unlocked, or feel free to make a new thread that adheres to the rules.