Suggestions for my first Standard Team. 1v1.

So far I've been using this, and it seems I may have not planned it as well as I thought, but I need some critiquing. Made for standard 1v1.

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Flygon@LifeOrb
Adamant; EV's: 252Atk / 252Spe / 4Def
-Earthquake
-Outrage
-U-Turn
-Crunch(?)

Life Orb gives him a much needed power boost, and he is already pretty fast. Outrage and Earthquake are his main STAB moves, while I have U-turn to switch out if needed. Crunch is only there until I get my hands on Stone Edge (Or would Fire Blast do better?)

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Metagross@ChoiceBand
Adamant; 252 HP / 236 Atk / 12 Def / 8 Spe
-Meteor Mash
-ThunderPunch
-*ZenHeadbutt now replaced by Stealth Rock. Thanks to Stove.
-Earthquake

It's great attack coupled with Choice Band make it's damage output huge. Thunderpunch is there for type coverage against pesky water types. Earthquake is just more type coverage. I like Zen Headbutt, good physical STAB, but it seems no sets carry it, what else would go there in this case? I like Choice Band, but at times Metagross seems too slow to do things properly.

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Starmie@Leftovers
Timid; 136 HP / 156 Def / 216 Spe
-Thunderbolt
-Ice Beam
-Surf
-Rapid Spin

Has been very disappointing so far, main purpose was to remove entry hazards for Typhlosion, but even then it is killed off too fast. It's type coverage moves don't help when they can't score KO's and Starmie is KO'd by the Average STAB attack. First candidate to switch out of the team.

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Dusknoir@Leftovers
Impish; 252 HP / 28 Atk / 228 Def
-Shadow Sneak
-Ice Punch
-Will-O-Wisp
-Pain Split

Has been far more helpful than I had thought, crippling physical threats with will-O-Wisp and Pain Split to even the battle. Ice Punch is good type coverage for Dragon threats, flying, etc. Shadow Sneak helps for revenge kills and makes up for some of it's low speed, but it is cumbersome that it can't set up Burn or Use Pain split first turn.

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Venusaur@Leftovers
Bold; 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpD
-Leech Seed
-Hidden Power (Water) (?)
-Sleep Powder
-Energy Ball

Proved to be very helpful as well. Sets up sleep and then proceeds to use leech seed. I was thinking of maybe replacing Leech seed with synthesis, and getting sunny day + Solarbeam. And I'll replace HP-W once I get a hold of Sludge bomb.

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Typhlosion@Choice Specs
Rash; 252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 HP
-Eruption
-Fire Blast
-Will-O-Wisp (?)
-Focus Blast

I'm having a difficult time putting Typhlosion in the position to sweep. I'd like him to have choice specs, but I think he might need that choice scarf to get the speed he needs to actually sweep, and it seems that entry hazards make it very difficult for him, Starmie is there to spin them away, but even then, I'd like Typhlosion to be able to attack right off the bat and not lose full HP Eruption. I know Will-O-Wisp is useless with a choice Item, but what else could go there?

I know some of it's not that great, but that's why I'm asking here for you guys to tell me what should be changed.
So far I feel my team is too predictable and it's too slow, how could this be helped without completing re-doing the team?

EDIT: Now I got it...
 
Why is Flygon your lead? i've never seen that before, and im wondering if there's any benefit to it? I suggest you change Flygon into a Scarfgon as this gives you one of the metagame's strongest revenge killers with access to lots of moves. In that case i think crunch MIGHT be better than stone edge, as you have really no way to kill gengar or rotom and a subgengar can really put a dent into your team. My suggestion would be to change flygon into the scarf variety and maybe start with a leadgross if you intend on using metagross
252 hp/ 232 atk/ 8 def/ 16 spd
-Meteor Mash
-Stealth Rock
-Bullet Punch
-Explosion
this has been a working set for me as if you get hax and get that +1 atk boost from MM, your explosion can OHKO or nearly OHKO most pokes. You want bullet punch for the priority to kill focus sashers.

I dont understand the place that venasaur and typlosion have on your team. There are much better types of poke in the OU tier that can fulfill the roll that they do, but to a much better extent. Instead of Venasaur try celebi and instead of typlosion try a NP mixape or something. These fulfill the same roll as your pokes, but much better.
~ Nasty Plot
~ Fire Blast / Flamethrower
~ Focus Blast / Close Combat
~ Grass Knot / Vacuum Wave
4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
and
~ Leech Seed / Thunder Wave / Reflect
~ Grass Knot
~ Recover
~ Hidden Power Fire / Hidden Power Ice / Earth Power
252 HP / 220 Def / 36 Spe
respectively
 
Why is Flygon your lead? i've never seen that before, and im wondering if there's any benefit to it? I suggest you change Flygon into a Scarfgon as this gives you one of the metagame's strongest revenge killers with access to lots of moves. In that case i think crunch MIGHT be better than stone edge, as you have really no way to kill gengar or rotom and a subgengar can really put a dent into your team. My suggestion would be to change flygon into the scarf variety and maybe start with a leadgross if you intend on using metagross
252 hp/ 232 atk/ 8 def/ 16 spd
-Meteor Mash
-Stealth Rock
-Bullet Punch
-Explosion
this has been a working set for me as if you get hax and get that +1 atk boost from MM, your explosion can OHKO or nearly OHKO most pokes. You want bullet punch for the priority to kill focus sashers.

I dont understand the place that venasaur and typlosion have on your team. There are much better types of poke in the OU tier that can fulfill the roll that they do, but to a much better extent. Instead of Venasaur try celebi and instead of typlosion try a NP mixape or something. These fulfill the same roll as your pokes, but much better.
~ Nasty Plot
~ Fire Blast / Flamethrower
~ Focus Blast / Close Combat
~ Grass Knot / Vacuum Wave
4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
and
~ Leech Seed / Thunder Wave / Reflect
~ Grass Knot
~ Recover
~ Hidden Power Fire / Hidden Power Ice / Earth Power
252 HP / 220 Def / 36 Spe
respectively

I'll take your advice for Flygon that sounds like a good idea.

And the moveset for leading Metagross is great, just it seems since Metagross is relatively slow, by the time Explosion looked like a good choice for next turn, he'd be killed since he would attack second. What item could I use for him?

And as for Celebi and Infernape; I've vowed not to use any of the semi-legendary Pokemon like Celebi, Jirachi, Shaymin Etc, yes, it's stupid, but i have my reasons. And I like Typhlosion better in how he works and aesthetically in comparison to Infernape, I would never use Infernape. And i like Venusaurs access to sleep, I think sleep support is mandatory on any team.
 
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