National Dex Swords Dance Cinderace [Done!]

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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Double-Edge
move 3: Pyro Ball
move 4: High Jump Kick / Sucker Punch
item: Normalium Z
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Swords Dance Cinderace serves as a dangerous wallbreaker, as it easily exploits would-be checks thanks to its ability, Libero. Double-Edge becomes a STAB move after using Swords Dance, allowing Cinderace to not only wound Pokemon like Toxapex and Slowbro but also OHKO them with Normalium Z. High Jump Kick KOes Heatran and Mega Tyranitar, while Sucker Punch threatens faster Pokemon like Dragapult and Tornadus-T. Pokemon that can set entry hazards such as Landorus-T, Garchomp, Ferrothorn, and Ting-Lu help Cinderace break through its checks like Great Tusk and Tera Dragon Skarmory. Cinderace is vulnerable to faster Pokemon such as Mega Lopunny, Zamazenta, and Tapu Koko, so Pokemon like Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Landorus-T are good teammates. Cinderace also benefits from dual screens from Tapu Koko and Shed Tail from Cyclizar, allowing it to safely set up and start wreaking havoc on the opponent. Pokemon that can wear down Great Tusk, Skeledirge, and Tera Dragon Skarmory such as Iron Valiant, Mega Gyarados, and Dragapult form great offensive cores with Cinderace, which, in return, threatens Pokemon like Toxapex, Kingambit, and Mega Scizor. Entry hazard removers such as Tornadus-T, Great Tusk, and the aforementioned Cyclizar support Cinderace's Stealth Rock weakness.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[hidin, 589564]]
- Quality checked by: [[ChrisPBacon, 544502], [Sulo, 528036]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Dawn of Ares, 467437]]
 
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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Double-Edge
move 3: Pyro Ball
move 4: High Jump Kick / Sucker Punch
item: Normalium Z
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

Swords Dance Cinderace serves as a dangerous wallbreaker; abusing would-be checks to it due to its ability, Libero. Double-Edge becomes Cinderace's STAB after using Swords Dance, and wounds Pokemon like Toxapex and Slowbro, and when in combination with Normalium Z, it's capable of removing them entirely once boosted. High Jump Kick dents KOs Heatran and Mega Tyranitar, while Sucker Punch can be used to remove faster Pokemon like Dragapult and Tornadus-T. Pokemon that can set entry hazards such as Landorus-T, Garchomp, Ferrothorn, and Ting-Lu help Cinderace break through its checks by punishing its switch-ins switchins such as? be more specific or dont include this at all bc every mon appreciates hazards. Cinderace is vulnerable to faster Pokemon such as Mega Lopunny, Zamazenta, and Tapu Koko. As such, Pokemon that can deal with the aforementioned threats like Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Landorus-T support Cinderace, allowing it to safely set up and sweep once its checks are removed. Cinderace also benefits from dual screens from Tapu Koko and Shed Tail from Cyclizar, allowing it to get off a safe Swords Dance and start wreaking havoc on the opponent. Pokemon that can wear down Great Tusk, Skeledirge, and Tera Dragon Skarmory such as Iron Valiant, Mega Gyarados, and Dragapult form great offensive cores with Cinderace, as in return, it threatens Pokemon like Toxapex, Kingambit, and Mega Scizor. mention the rocks weakness somewhere here and good removal opitons (torn, tusk, aforementioned cyc)

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[hidin, 589564]]
- Quality checked by: [[ChrisPBacon, 544502], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]


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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Double-Edge
move 3: Pyro Ball
move 4: High Jump Kick / Sucker Punch
item: Normalium Z
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

Swords Dance Cinderace serves as a dangerous wallbreaker; abusing abusing can't be used like this, also take out the semi-colon would-be checks to it due to its ability, Libero. Double-Edge becomes Cinderace's STAB after using Swords Dance, and wounds Pokemon like Toxapex and Slowbro, and when in combination with Normalium Z, it's capable of removing them entirely once boosted. High Jump Kick KOs Heatran and Mega Tyranitar, while Sucker Punch can be used to remove faster Pokemon like Dragapult and Tornadus-T. Pokemon that can set entry hazards such as Landorus-T, Garchomp, Ferrothorn, and Ting-Lu help Cinderace break through its checks by punishing its switch-ins, like Great Tusk and Tera Dragon Skarmory. Cinderace is vulnerable to faster Pokemon such as Mega Lopunny, Zamazenta, and Tapu Koko. As such, Pokemon that can deal with the aforementioned threats like Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Landorus-T support Cinderace, allowing it to safely set up and sweep once its checks are removed. Cinderace also benefits from dual screens from Tapu Koko and Shed Tail from Cyclizar, allowing it to get off a safe Swords Dance and start wreaking havoc on the opponent. Pokemon that can wear down Great Tusk, Skeledirge, and Tera Dragon Skarmory such as Iron Valiant, Mega Gyarados, and Dragapult form great offensive cores with Cinderace, as in return, it threatens Pokemon like Toxapex, Kingambit, and Mega Scizor. Cinderace also sports a weakness to Stealth Rock, so removal such as Tornadus-T, Great Tusk, and the aforementioned Cyclizar support it in that case.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[hidin, 589564]]
- Quality checked by: [[ChrisPBacon, 544502], [Sulo, 528036]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Double-Edge
move 3: Pyro Ball
move 4: High Jump Kick / Sucker Punch
item: Normalium Z
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
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Swords Dance Cinderace serves as a dangerous wallbreaker, (RC) as it easily abuses would-be checks to it due to its ability, Libero. Double-Edge becomes Cinderace's STAB after using Swords Dance, and wounds Pokemon like Toxapex and Slowbro, and when in combination with Normalium Z, it's capable of removing them entirely once boosted. Double-Edge becomes a STAB move afer using Swords Dance, allowing Cinderace to not only wound Pokemon like Toxapex and Slowbro, but also OHKO them with Normalium Z. High Jump Kick OHKOes Heatran and Mega Tyranitar, while Sucker Punch can be used to remove threatens faster Pokemon like Dragapult and Tornadus-T. Pokemon that can set entry hazards such as Landorus-T, Garchomp, Ferrothorn, and Ting-Lu help Cinderace break through its checks by punishing its switch-ins, like Great Tusk and Tera Dragon Skarmory. Cinderace is vulnerable to faster Pokemon such as Mega Lopunny, Zamazenta, and Tapu Koko.(remove stop) As such, so Pokemon that can deal with the aforementioned threats like Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Landorus-T support Cinderace are good teammates, allowing it to safely set up and sweep once its checks are removed. Cinderace also benefits from dual screens from Tapu Koko and Shed Tail from Cyclizar, allowing it to get off a safe Swords Dance and start wreaking havoc on the opponent. Pokemon that can wear down Great Tusk, Skeledirge, and Tera Dragon Skarmory such as Iron Valiant, Mega Gyarados, and Dragapult form great offensive cores with Cinderace, as and, in return, it threatens Pokemon like Toxapex, Kingambit, and Mega Scizor. Cinderace also sports a weakness to Stealth Rock, so removal such as Tornadus-T, Great Tusk, and the aforementioned Cyclizar support it in that case.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[hidin, 589564]]
- Quality checked by: [[ChrisPBacon, 544502], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
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[SET]
name: Swords Dance
move 1: Swords Dance
move 2: Double-Edge
move 3: Pyro Ball
move 4: High Jump Kick / Sucker Punch
item: Normalium Z
ability: Libero
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Swords Dance Cinderace serves as a dangerous wallbreaker, (add comma) as it easily abuses exploits would-be checks due thanks to its ability, Libero. Double-Edge becomes a STAB move afer after using Swords Dance, allowing Cinderace to not only wound Pokemon like Toxapex and Slowbro but also OHKO them with Normalium Z. High Jump Kick KOs KOes Heatran and Mega Tyranitar, while Sucker Punch threatens faster Pokemon like Dragapult and Tornadus-T. Pokemon that can set entry hazards such as Landorus-T, Garchomp, Ferrothorn, and Ting-Lu help Cinderace break through its checks, (remove comma) like Great Tusk and Tera Dragon Skarmory. Cinderace is vulnerable to faster Pokemon such as Mega Lopunny, Zamazenta, and Tapu Koko, so Pokemon like Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Landorus-T are good teammates. (add period) , allowing it to safely set up and sweep once its checks are removed. Cinderace also benefits from dual screens from Tapu Koko and Shed Tail from Cyclizar, allowing it to safely set up get off a safe Swords Dance and start wreaking havoc on the opponent's team. Pokemon that can wear down Great Tusk, Skeledirge, and Tera Dragon Skarmory such as Iron Valiant, Mega Gyarados, and Dragapult form great offensive cores with Cinderace, (add comma) which, and, in return, it threatens Pokemon like Toxapex, Kingambit, and Mega Scizor. Cinderace also sports a weakness to Stealth Rock, so removal Entry hazard removers such as Tornadus-T, Great Tusk, and the aforementioned Cyclizar support it in that case Cinderace's Stealth Rock weakness. (concision)

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[hidin, 589564]]
- Quality checked by: [[ChrisPBacon, 544502], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Dawn of Ares, 467437]]

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