Team annoying lack of confidence in the team [UU HO RMT]

[BloodyRoutin]

Dumbass (Uxie) @ Light Clay
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/4 Def/252 Spd
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Reflect
- Light Screen
- Stealth Rock
- Magic Coat

I begin the game with DS Uxie. Yeah it's setup fodder for spikes etc but I don't care much, as I'm not gonna switch. Magic Coat isn't standard because of statuses people might use (Scarf Venu etc). Gets shut down by taunt leads badly.

SnappyBird (Swellow) (F) @ Flame Orb
Ability: Guts
EVs: 252 Atk/4 Def/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Brave Bird
- Facade
- Quick Attack
- Protect

Honestly what can a HO team wish for anything better than this? Anyway Swellow is the perfect example of "beating same counters". All the team beat (or severly damage) most counters so Swellow as a much easier time sweeping.

Fearligatr (Feraligatr) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 252 Atk/4 Def/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Waterfall
- Dragon Dance
- Ice Punch
- Earthquake

Standard DD Gatr. I honestly think I should switch to SD LO Adamant SD/Waterfall/Aqua Jet/Return but whatever. This guy is pretty nice.

Night Hawk (Absol) (F) @ Life Orb
Ability: Super Luck
EVs: 252 Atk/4 Def/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Sucker Punch
- Swords Dance
- Superpower
- Psycho Cut

NO SCARFERS. <3 Priority. So Absol acts a a psuedo revenge killer, but revenge killers aren't in HO. It's the standard SD Absol. Adamant because it prefers the extra kick.

GrassEffct (Sceptile) (F) @ Life Orb
Ability: Overgrow
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Leaf Blade
- Earthquake
- Swords Dance
- Rock Slide

OK so this thing shreds though the slowbrothers and really hits walls hard at +2. STAB grass is good to kill bulky waters.

BlazeFlare (Blaziken) (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 252 Atk/4 Def/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Swords Dance
- Fire Punch
- Low Kick
- Thunderpunch

SD Blaziken says hi to stall. Honestly this + Absol + Swellow is an amazing synergy of wall destroying. Anyway Blaziken is known as a good wall breaker and shreds though stall. T-Punch is for bro/king, I'll might use Quick Attack for duggy.


Anyway, rate this team please? Yeah I know it kinda sucks but eh. Team works out pretty well if anything goes as planned. I'm in a rush so I can't type too much.

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

You need to improve on your descriptions. As of right now, your descriptions are lacking and hence, violating rule #3. Try to lengthen them more please. Have a look at some of the teams in the RMT archive to see what is expected. Aim for 5 well-formulated sentences for each of your Pokemon. Explain why you chose a Pokemon, what it does, how it contributes to the success of the team, etc. If you fix the descriptions properly, PM me the changes; if they are sufficient enough I will unlock your thread with the edited descriptions.