Team competitive Rating

[Nuanda92]

I, i'm new, i do not speak English very well, but I still hope to make me understand for the evaluation team.

Introduction: I am new to the forum and the Competitive Battling, I approached it this year at the release of Pokemon X and Y, and I would like clarification about my competitive team. Thanks in advance.

My Team:

Pokemon number One

Talonflame:@Sharp Beak
Nature: Adamant
Trait: Gale Wings
4 HP/ 252 Atk / 252 Spe
-Sword dance
-Brave Bird
-Flare Blitz
-Roost

I've chose this set for Talonflame because is a great pokemon to set Sword Dance and to use roost because he have the priority for roost, i've chosed sharp beak for instrument because i already have a pokemon team with Life Orb and because having already the recoil by Brave bird and flare blitz is not exactly the best to have 2 recoils. Roost repair the health of this pokemon is when it starts to attack both when there are stealth rock, against which I have nothing as a team to eliminate the hazards


Pokemon Number Two

Tyranitar;@Leftovers
Nature: Sassy
Trait: Sand stream
252 HP / 252 Spdef / 4 Atk
-Stealth Rock
-Pursuit
-Ice Beam
-Rock slide

It is not a lead, is a support that I need for my team against pokemon like Charizard and Talonflame. It is very strong, Ice beam is for pokemon such as Gliscor, which may annoy a lot and usually do not expect this move, especially from a physical attacker as Tyranitar. In addition to this Tyranitar has good defensive cover against many specially attackers like Latios and Hydreigon. It also serves as often as counter for Dragonite as it break multiscale with the sandstorm allowing me to hit it hard to avoid the risk of activating the much-used Weakness Policy


Pokemon Number Three

Chansey:@Eviolite
Nature: Bold
Trait: Natural Cure
252 Hp / 252 Def / 4 spdef
-Toxic
-Soft Boiled
-Seismic toss
-Counter

Pokemon is a crazy, an impenetrable wall, I know it sounds crazy to have chosen to counter moves such as aromatherapy, but the spread in physical defense + eviolite and bold nature favor a good coverage even in that case, resist against large drain punch Conkeldurr and also to that of Mega Medicham suffering great damage yes, but then being able to beat them later in one shot.


Pokemon Number Four

Azumarill: Choice Band
Nature: Adamant
Trait: Huge Power
252 Hp / 252 Atk / 4 Spdef
-Acquajet
-Waterfall
-Play Rough
-Super Power

Another pokemon that I love, I much prefer this version to version Belly drum which I find useless, throw down pretty much everything I can get bored in one shot, it is not fast, but that resistance has? There were many, spoke about dragons stuck in outrage and disintegrates them. A fantastic pokemon, I also resolves some issues regarding Mega Gyarados and that virtually no throws after a Dragon Dance and she manages to knock him down with only a Play Rough


Pokemon Number Five.

Gliscor:@Toxic Orb
Nature: Impish
Trait: Poison heal
252 Hp / 252 Def / 4 atk
-Earthquake
-Toxic
-Protect
-Taunt

This is my physical wall, passing on all the weaknesses of Tyranitar exception Fairy, Steel, Water and Grass. I chose taunt rather than ice fang for the simple reason that it allows me to pass on some leads as Skarmory and Ferrothorn and prevent the azard put in my pitch. It is useful against Breeloom it seems to me that one of the big weaknesses of my team until now to prevent use spore on my pokemon in a way that allows me to switch quietly on a counter for him as Talonflame without the risk of him falling asleep.


Pokemon Number Six

Lucario:@life orb
Nature: Adamant
Trait: Inner focus
4 Hp / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
-Sword dance
-Extreme speed
-Close Combat
-Ice punch

Lucario is what I ended the fighting, is the set of old BW 2 and makes it great, +2 extreme speed allows me to pass on pokemon as Talonflame, Technician Breelom, Greninja, Infernape, Charizard Y, on everything. Ice Punch is for Gliscor and Dragonite always going down to +2 with ice punch. For everything else there's the power of close combat that speaks for itself. I understand that suffering massive pokemon like Garchomp and Excadrill Jolly and Terrakion, as well as on the ghost, but Garchomp and Terrakion manage it with Azumarill and for the Ghost type like Gengar and Chandelure i've Tyranitar or Talonflame, same thing for Aegislash that is managed by Talon or Gliscor


Often encounter problems with Mega Charizard Y which also handles Tyranitar making it a considerable damage with Focus Blast. Volcarona might as well get bored, but is managed by Azumarill and Tyranitar that resists its +2 bug buzz in the sandstorm. Others do not know. I'd like you to help me to improve the team showing me some possible variant or some possible danger to my team. Thanks to all those who will read and I will advise further changes =)

 

[Nuanda92]

Thank you for this idea, megaevo of tyranitar would protect me from utilizer Knock offs and Switcheroo or trick. As far as Chansey, I know that is susceptible to Knock off but it keeps me more than Blissey from the point of view of physical defense. I also appreciate your assistance in respect of Talonflame, but with the band takes my choice to use sword dance and with life orb he receives further damage in addition to the recoil of his moves precisely Flare Blitz and Brave Bird, not to mention that I use a lot more Brave Bird respect to each other that I use only with Scizor, Mawile and Aegislash. Thank you so much advice! :)

PS. Sorry for my bad english, I hope to make me understand because I'm Italian and I'm translating everything with google translator :)

 

[BlackyXD]

OK so change sharp beak to leftovers if you want to run a swords dance talonflame.It gives him some more survivablity to give you a better chance to get a swords dance in .But you can also do what Hell_Above said and change to choiceband, as it is a great revenge killer and hits like a truck. I don't recommend life orb because of the recoil talonflame already takes from flare blitz and brave bird. Also you have no way to get rid of haxards witch is almost mandatory especially when running a talonflame.

I can post a recommended defogger later right now I am doing this from a phone.

 

[Nuanda92]

Thank you so much I really need a defogger or a spinner, I can not find a decent one, I tried Mandibuzz and Domphan, the problem is that to put one of them 2 him that I would take out Gliscor, which would be good to replace Gliscor with Mandibuzz, but this despite the massive defense and ps does not allow me to stall pokemon so just as it does Gliscor, Gliscor Add to defog the move? It looks like a good option because if I place Mandibuzz in the team along with talonflame Choice Band, and my opponent switch Mawile before Talonflame locked brave bird, or in front of Mandibuzz, the opponent will take the time to set a sword dance and I would not have any pokemon with which to stop it because Talonflame would be affected by Sucker Punch when it will set it to use Flare blitz and Mandibuzz with Play rough comes down very easily, Gliscor instead inflicts considerable damage to Mawile with earthquake... Appearance however your requirements, thank you! :)