Tell me how this is bad please?

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Brainwashed (Slowbro) (M) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 184 HP / 56 Def / 24 SpA / 244 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Scald
- Future Sight
- Fire Blast
- Ice Beam

Firewall (Heatran) (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Flame Body
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 176 SpD / 80 Spe
Calm Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Lava Plume
- Flash Cannon
- Stealth Rock
- Protect

Snicker (Dragapult) (M) @ Colbur Berry
Ability: Infiltrator
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 68 Atk / 188 SpA / 252 Spe
Mild Nature
- Dragon Darts
- Hex
- Thunder Wave
- U-turn

Land-Lord (Landorus-Therian) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Intimidate
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Earthquake
- Knock Off
- Defog
- U-turn

D.K (Rillaboom) (M) @ Choice Band
Ability: Grassy Surge
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Grassy Glide
- Drain Punch
- Knock Off
- U-turn

Mable (Clefable) (F) @ Rocky Helmet
Ability: Magic Guard
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Moonblast
- Wish
- Aromatherapy
- Protect
 
next time, consider making a thematic name for your team instead of "how bad is this." People will be more drawn towards your RMT if it looks more like you have a solid team instead of an incomplete one that needs a lot of time and effort. I recommend testing your team on the ladder and making edits yourself before posting an RMT.

Also, there are some rules for RMTs too. I'm not here to minimod, I'm just not sure if you're aware of them. If you check out these threads, you can probably make sure that your RMTs are more well received instead of being locked.
https://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/rmt-rules-guidelines-must-read-before-posting-an-rmt.3584611/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/rmt-rules-and-forum-guidelines.3647102/

Sorry if I'm coming off as abrasive as I'm short on time, have a great day and happy building.
 
Hi, welcome to Smogon! I am locking your RMT for the time being as the forum rules require that you provide at least three lines of descriptions for each Pokemon to explain their roles. Please read the rules carefully and look at Team Showcase to see the detail we require. PM me with updated descriptions, and I will be happy to unlock this.
 
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