The Art of a Suicune Sweep

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Well, this is my first Warstory, so... enjoy!

The other day, I was messing around on Shoddy, just looking for random battles. The ‘Find Match’ key brought me into a battle against this guy. I’m Himckyafi08, he’s Lukas17kk. This is my war story. Enjoy!

Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause

lucas17kk sent out Cresselia (lvl 100 Cresselia ?).
Himckyafi08 sent out N33D4SP33D (lvl 100 Typhlosion ?).

I start out with my awesome Typhlosion, and he starts out with Cresselia. I know that he’s a good wall, but I wanted to see what sort of damage I could do.

N33D4SP33D used Eruption.
Cresselia lost 43% of its health.
Cresselia used Calm Mind.
Cresselia's special attack was raised.
Cresselia's special defence was raised.
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.

So Eruption did almost half damage, but it got a Calm Mind up. Crap. Now Eruption won’t do as much. Oh well, at least I still have full health.

N33D4SP33D used Eruption.
Cresselia lost 30% of its health.
Cresselia used Psychic.
N33D4SP33D lost 48% of its health.
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.

Well, only 30% damage isn’t that much, and he just took away about half of MY health. This is bad. I need to switch, and fast.

Himckyafi08 switched in Transvestite (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Cresselia used Psychic.
Transvestite lost 15% of its health.
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.

Fortunately for me, Blissey takes the hit like a beast, even AFTER a Calm Mind AND STAB. Unfortunately, I forgot to put Leftovers on Blissey, which sucks. Oh well.

lucas17kk switched in Forry (lvl 100 Forretress ?).
Transvestite used Thunder Wave.
Forry is paralysed! It may be unable to move!

I went for Thunder Wave, thinking I could incapacitate his Cresselia, but he switches to Forretress, which of course, doesn’t really NEED the speed. Figures.

Himckyafi08 switched in N33D4SP33D (lvl 100 Typhlosion ?).
Forry used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!

I brought in Typhlosion before Forretress could set anything up. Thankfully, it was before Stealth Rock. However, Eruption isn’t going to do squat. I’ll have to stick with the good old...

lucas17kk switched in Cresselia (lvl 100 Cresselia ?).
N33D4SP33D used Flamethrower.
Cresselia lost 27% of its health.
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.

Indeed. Flamethrower. And it got it down low enough that another Flamethrower should KO it. Hopefully, it will.

N33D4SP33D used Flamethrower.
Cresselia lost 24% of its health.
lucas17kk's Cresselia fainted.

Thankfully, it did.
Score: 6-5 (me)


lucas17kk switched in Leviathor (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Leviathor's intimidate cut N33D4SP33D's attack!

Great. He sends in a Gyarados. Not that I’m concerned about the Intimidate, it’s just that since I’m Scarfing, Typhlosion really can’t do much against it. Time to switch.

Himckyafi08 switched in FearMe (lvl 100 Suicune).
FearMe is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into FearMe.
FearMe lost 12% of its health.
Leviathor used Stone Edge.
FearMe lost 21% of its health.
FearMe's leftovers restored its health a little!
FearMe restored 6% of its health.

I send in my ultimate Gyarados counter, Suicune! I figured I could take any attack he threw at me, and I did. Stone Edge only doing 21% was amazing. Time to set up.

FearMe used Calm Mind.
FearMe's special attack was raised.
FearMe's special defence was raised.
Leviathor used Dragon Dance.
Leviathor's attack was raised.
Leviathor's speed was raised.
FearMe's leftovers restored its health a little!
FearMe restored 6% of its health.

We both use stat-upping moves, which is ok I guess. Luckily, I have Roar on mine, so Gyarados won’t be a problem for me.

Leviathor used Dragon Dance.
Leviathor's attack was raised.
Leviathor's speed was raised.
FearMe used Roar.
lucas17kk switched in Forry (lvl 100 Forretress ?).
FearMe's leftovers restored its health a little!
FearMe restored 6% of its health.

Exactly. Just when he thought he could get enough Attack boosts to KO my Suicune, I roar him out to probably the most useless Pokemon on his team – Forretress. Awesome. Time to set up even more.

FearMe used Calm Mind.
FearMe's special attack was raised.
FearMe's special defence was raised.
Forry used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered everywhere!
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
FearMe's leftovers restored its health a little!
FearMe restored 6% of its health.

I use Calm Mind, and he sets up a layer of Spikes. That’s 2 Calm Minds for me, and counting.

FearMe used Calm Mind.
FearMe's special attack was raised.
FearMe's special defence was raised.
Forry used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
FearMe's leftovers restored its health a little!
FearMe restored 6% of its health.

Make that 3 Calm Minds. And another layer of Spikes.

FearMe used Calm Mind.
FearMe's special attack was raised.
FearMe's special defence was raised.
Forry used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
FearMe's leftovers restored its health a little!
FearMe restored 2% of its health.

Or... 4 Calm Minds. O_O

FearMe used Surf.
Forry lost 100% of its health.
lucas17kk's Forry fainted.

4 Calm Minds, and STAB? Forretress is dead. Easily.
Score: 6-4 (me)


lucas17kk switched in Duaky (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
Duaky is exerting its pressure!
FearMe used Surf.
Duaky lost 60% of its health.
Duaky used Will-o-wisp.
Duaky's attack missed!
Duaky's leftovers restored its health a little!
Duaky restored 6% of its health.

He sends in Dusknoir, and I decided just to go for STAB. It did over half damage, and his Will-O-Wisp missed. Awesome.

FearMe used Surf.
Duaky lost 46% of its health.
lucas17kk's Duaky fainted.

I use Surf again, and it kills Dusknoir. This is beginning to look like a sweep...
Score: 6-3 (me)


lucas17kk switched in Leviathor (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Leviathor's intimidate cut FearMe's attack!
FearMe used Ice Beam.
Leviathor lost 50% of its health.
Leviathor used Taunt.
FearMe fell for the taunt!

I’m not exactly sure why he went for Taunt, I already had 4 Calm Minds up. That’s plenty. Ice Beam does exactly half damage, and I pretty much got a free turn.

FearMe used Ice Beam.
Leviathor lost 50% of its health.
lucas17kk's Leviathor fainted.

I use Ice Beam again, and it does the same amount of damage. Gyarados faints, cool!
Score: 6-2 (me)


lucas17kk switched in Permafrost (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
Permafrost is exerting its pressure!
Permafrost used Night Slash.
FearMe lost 20% of its health.
FearMe used Surf.
A critical hit!
Permafrost lost 100% of its health.
Permafrost hung on using its Focus Sash!
FearMe's leftovers restored its health a little!
FearMe restored 6% of its health.

Weavile normally would be somewhat of a problem for me. Not with Suicune. Night Slash only does 20% damage, and I get a crit Surf that activates its Focus Sash. Oh well, he probably can’t KO me in the next turn.

Permafrost used Night Slash.
FearMe lost 21% of its health.
FearMe used Surf.
Permafrost lost 0% of its health.
lucas17kk's Permafrost fainted.
FearMe's leftovers restored its health a little!
FearMe restored 6% of its health.

Nope, no luck for him. Night Slash doesn’t KO, but Surf does.
Score: 6-1 (me)


lucas17kk switched in KungFuApe (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
KungFuApe used Close Combat.
FearMe lost 29% of its health.
KungFuApe's defence was lowered.
KungFuApe's special defence was lowered.
KungFuApe lost 10% of its health.
FearMe used Surf.
It's super effective!
KungFuApe lost 90% of its health.
lucas17kk's KungFuApe fainted.
Himckyafi08 wins!

Probably about the worst Pokemon to send into a Suicune. After Life Orb damage, a Special Defense drop, STAB, and 4 SpAtk boosts, do I even need to tell you that Surf will KO?

That’s about it guys, thanks for reading my war story. I hope you now appreciate Suicune and how much it can sweep. Thanks, Peace!
 
Really, a Suicune sweep isn't that exciting. THere was also a lack of comments. Warstories should be either: Close and really good or retardedly funny. This, is neither, sorry.
 
I found it to be boring and the comments to be arrogant. 6-0 Warstories aren't exciting as there isn't much suspence just one down, another one...

And obviously Infernape wasn't a good choice to send into a Suicune, which is why he saved it for last.
 
Locking this is as it is simply not a warstory as much as it is a log with a few arrogant comments. I'd advise you take a look at the good examples of warstories in the warstory archive before deciding to write anymore.
 
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