The Fairy Tale

p i c k l e s

Teams: At a glance
My team:
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Kespa's Team
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NOTE: I edited out Lefties and Status for your convience
ALSO: I recommend you read the nicks, as they are very entertaining

Rules: Evasion Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Sleep Clause, Timed Battle
Kespa sent out Granade (lvl 100 Cloyster ?).
p i c k l e s sent out The Evil Dragon (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
The Evil Dragon's intimidate cut Granade's attack!
The Evil Dragon used Brick Break.
It's super effective!
Granade lost 46% of its health.
The Evil Dragon lost 10% of its health.
Granade used Toxic Spikes.
Spikes were scattered everywhere!
Toxic Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Granade's leftovers restored its health a little!
Granade restored 6% of its health.
Only 46% off of a super effective? Pffff Ripoff
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The Evil Dragon used Draco Meteor.
Granade lost 125% of its health.
Kespa's Granade fainted.
The Evil Dragon's special attack was harshly lowered.
The Evil Dragon lost 10% of its health.
Well, I guess it wasn't too bad, although those toxic spikes really hurt :/
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Kespa switched in Barney! (lvl 100 Dragonite ?).
p i c k l e s switched in The Knight (lvl 100 Blaziken ?).
The Knight was poisoned!
The Knight was poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
Barney! used Ice Beam.
It's not very effective...
The Knight lost 27% of its health.
Barney! lost 10% of its health.
Yay for prediction... I was surprised that he didn't see a switch, but he had no idea of what to? I think,
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Kespa: My dragon eviler! I completely agree, a dragon named barney is sooo much eviler than "The Evil Dragon"

Barney! used Dragon Pulse.
A critical hit!
The Knight lost 144% of its health.
p i c k l e s's The Knight fainted.
Barney! lost 10% of its health.
Cheap! I call cheap hax! Oh well, I wouldn't have been able to do much anyways... EXCEPT FOR OHKO WITH HP ICE after the agility I was goona do... hax ;_;
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p i c k l e s switched in The Star Above (lvl 100 Starmie).
The Star Above was poisoned!
The Star Above was poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
Kespa switched in Two Faced Fairy (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
Two Faced Fairy is exerting its pressure!
The Star Above used Surf.
Two Faced Fairy lost 39% of its health.
I knew he was goona switch (why would he let his poor Barney get IB'd?) Although I guess he thought I carried Rapid Spin, I dropped that for coverage
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Kespa: A star aboue what? Yes, the star "aboue"... He needs to spell check...
p i c k l e s: you XD
Kespa: Hmm we have a star a night and a dragon
Kespa: WHO KIDNAPPED THE PRINCESS

Two Faced Fairy used Shadow Sneak.
It's super effective!
The Star Above lost 53% of its health.
The Star Above used Ice Beam.
Two Faced Fairy lost 24% of its health.
Ooooh... that hurts, although I should've seen it coming... I guess I wanted to sacrifice him? (it)
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p i c k l e s: you'll see
Kespa: WHERES THE PRINCESS!

Two Faced Fairy used Shadow Sneak.
It's super effective!
The Star Above lost 48% of its health.
p i c k l e s's The Star Above fainted.
Two Faced Fairy's leftovers restored its health a little!
Two Faced Fairy restored 6% of its health.
Bye bye birdy, errrrr.... Star
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p i c k l e s switched in The Evil Wizard (lvl 100 Gliscor ?).
Kespa: It should be Gardevour
Kespa: Imwith yah there On the evil wizard part... our chat got messed up... don't worry (I even corrected part of it)
p i c k l e s: oh, yeah
Kespa: He is evil

The Evil Wizard used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
Two Faced Fairy used Substitute.
Two Faced Fairy lost 25% of its health.
Two Faced Fairy made a substitute!
USING HIS ROCK SPELLS, THE EVIL WIZARD SETS UP A TRAP AROUND HIS OPPONENTS! MUHAHAHAHA
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p i c k l e s: but I needed a special wall, so I used blissey for the princess I know, most people are like "that's a no-no," but I was really just having fun in this battle.
Kespa: Oh great
p i c k l e s: I guess I could use Gardy
Kespa: Shes a right bitch

The Evil Wizard used Aerial Ace.
The substitute took damage for Two Faced Fairy!
Two Faced Fairy used Will-o-wisp.
Two Faced Fairy's attack missed!
Hah! It missed... Yet I did practically nothing in return
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The Evil Wizard used Aerial Ace.
The substitute took damage for Two Faced Fairy!
Two Faced Fairy's substitute faded!
Two Faced Fairy used Will-o-wisp.
The Evil Wizard was burned!
That wow will hurt really badly in the later parts of this battle
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Kespa: U like My sub Noir?

p i c k l e s switched in The Princess's Bug (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
The Princess's Bug was poisoned!
The Princess's Bug was poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
Two Faced Fairy used Substitute.
Two Faced Fairy lost 25% of its health.
Two Faced Fairy made a substitute!
The Bug Appears!!! (It's also the center of my team)
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Kespa: xP no1 realy thort of it
p i c k l e s: yeah,

Two Faced Fairy used Shadow Sneak.
The Princess's Bug lost 28% of its health.
The Princess's Bug used Megahorn.
It's not very effective...
The substitute took damage for Two Faced Fairy!
Two Faced Fairy's substitute faded!
Attack my fearless beetle! Hold nothing back!
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Two Faced Fairy used Shadow Sneak.
The Princess's Bug lost 30% of its health.
The Princess's Bug used Megahorn.
It's not very effective...
Two Faced Fairy lost 45% of its health.
Kespa's Two Faced Fairy fainted.
The Wicked Witch of the West is DEAD! just replace the witch with the two faced fairy... o_O
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Kespa switched in U.F.O (lvl 100 Magnezone).
Pointed stones dug into U.F.O.
U.F.O lost 6% of its health.

p i c k l e s: :/
p i c k l e s: only one more turn for the princesses bug

The Princess's Bug used Close Combat.
It's super effective!
U.F.O lost 184% of its health.
Kespa's U.F.O fainted.
The Princess's Bug is hurt by poison!
The Princess's Bug lost 12% of its health.
p i c k l e s's The Princess's Bug fainted.
Maggyzone goes downyzone!
Alas! My fearless... beetle... *sob* *sniffle* *sob*
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p i c k l e s: he's facade hera XD
p i c k l e s: so the poison worked really well
Kespa: I see
Kespa switched in Amigo (lvl 100 Ludicolo ?).

p i c k l e s switched in The Evil Dragon (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
The Evil Dragon's intimidate cut Amigo's attack!
Pointed stones dug into Amigo.
Amigo lost 12% of its health.
Kespa: Well amigo is gunna rain on your parade
The Evil Dragon used Draco Meteor.
Amigo lost 113% of its health.
Kespa's Amigo fainted.
The Evil Dragon's special attack was harshly lowered.
The Evil Dragon lost 10% of its health.
The evil dragon slays yet another innocent being...
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Kespa: OMIGOSH!

Kespa switched in Barney! (lvl 100 Dragonite ?).
Pointed stones dug into Barney!.
Barney! lost 25% of its health.

p i c k l e s: mixmence ftw

p i c k l e s switched in The Princess (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
The Princess was poisoned!
The Princess was poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
Barney! used Ice Beam.
The Princess lost 13% of its health.
Barney! lost 10% of its health.
The Princess Appears! *trumpet call (ex. Duh Duh Duh DaAaAAAAAA)* Your royal highness...
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p i c k l e s: yay! I like barney I made some really stupid in-game comments
Kespa: I need health!
p i c k l e s: XD

Barney! used Roost.
Barney! restored 50% of its health.
The Princess used Sing.
The Princess's attack missed!
Sing fair Princess... Sing and your knight will come from his knocked out state!
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Barney! used Dragon Pulse.
The Princess lost 20% of its health.
Barney! lost 10% of its health.
The Princess used Sing.
Barney! fell asleep!
La la la... I think if I sung, Barney! would die...
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Kespa switched in FlatJack (lvl 100 Gallade ?).
Pointed stones dug into FlatJack.
FlatJack lost 6% of its health.
The Princess used Softboiled.
The Princess restored 50% of its health.
Eggs and Pancakes! We are having a royal breakfast!
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Kespa: xP

p i c k l e s switched in The Evil Wizard (lvl 100 Gliscor ?).
FlatJack used Swords Dance.
FlatJack's attack was sharply raised.
Oh snap... I though he would CCombat which would make AA (I think) OHKO
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FlatJack used Swords Dance.
FlatJack's attack was sharply raised.
The Evil Wizard used Aerial Ace.
It's super effective!
FlatJack lost 37% of its health.
Remember that wow yeah, that's why it did 37%...
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FlatJack used Close Combat.
It's not very effective...
The Evil Wizard lost 81% of its health.
p i c k l e s's The Evil Wizard fainted.
FlatJack's defence was lowered.
FlatJack's special defence was lowered.
HOORAY!!! The land is now free of his loathsome being
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p i c k l e s switched in The Evil Dragon (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
The Evil Dragon's intimidate cut FlatJack's attack!

Kespa: YES IT DID WORK
p i c k l e s: :(
Kespa: And now its dead
p i c k l e s: cmon be faster

FlatJack used Thunderpunch.
The Evil Dragon lost 74% of its health.
p i c k l e s's The Evil Dragon fainted.
Why Dragon, WHY CAN'T YOU BE FASTER!!!
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Kespa: Be faster flat man
p i c k l e s: NOOOO
Kespa: YES!
p i c k l e s: Oh well, good game
Kespa: Gg
Kespa: Thort u had me there
p i c k l e s: if I was faster I would've won
Kespa: Yeh

p i c k l e s switched in The Princess (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
The Princess was poisoned!
The Princess was poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!

Kespa: But mines got speed

FlatJack used Close Combat.
It's super effective!
The Princess lost 347% of its health.
p i c k l e s's The Princess fainted.
Kespa wins!

p i c k l e s: gg
Kespa: SHE DIED CARDBOARD STYLE
p i c k l e s: this was an interesting battle
Kespa: Is intresting good
p i c k l e s: sort of
p i c k l e s: I'm not sure if I should warstory this :/
Kespa: Oo why not warstoory it
p i c k l e s: hmmmm
Kespa: COs u lost? xP
p i c k l e s: No, I've worstoried losses before
Kespa: Not good for your Reputation?
p i c k l e s: what rep?
p i c k l e s: lol
Kespa: xP
Kespa: I have a rep
Kespa: I think
p i c k l e s: I don't, well, I have a small one
Kespa: Amigo is mah star
p i c k l e s: lol
Kespa: He can sweep...
p i c k l e s: Ok, I'm goona warstory this
Kespa: YAY
Kespa: Whats Forum
p i c k l e s: smogon

The end to an interesting battle :/


Props:
-The combatants: For putting on a good show!
-The Evil Dragon: For always being there to try and destroy me *sob* I LOVE YOU!!!

Slops:
-Me: FOR FUCKING SUCKING (it sorta rhymes)


Please don't comment on my battling skills... this was more of a fun battle for me, but constructive criticism is always welcome =D)
 
this was a horrible warstory. the nicks made it extremely hard to understand anything that was going on, and, how did a sd gallade outspeed a max speed mence?
 
^ Maybe it wasn't.. and even though there are nicks, and the chat is not separated from the war story, it's at least funny.
 
Metal Force said:
^ Maybe it wasn't.. and even though there are nicks, and the chat is not separated from the war story, it's at least funny.
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it was his mence that he said had max speed and gallade has 20 less base speed than mence does. since gallade had swords danced and was able to alternate its attacks, it wasn't scarfed so something is definitely wrong there.

yes, it was funny but there was some definite room for improvement. aside from separating the commentary, i'd suggest showing the nicks when the first come in and then switching over to just the pokes name(ie blissey instead of princess).
 
It must have been Jolly Gallade, who gets slightly below neutral-natured Salamence... but MixMence doesn't run max speed.

Anyways, the battle wasn't that interesting tbh, and the warstory was little more than "yay it missed!" after each turn of log. Quite uninteresting in my eyes.
 
travisurfer said:
it was his mence that he said had max speed and gallade has 20 less base speed than mence does. since gallade had swords danced and was able to alternate its attacks, it wasn't scarfed so something is definitely wrong there.

yes, it was funny but there was some definite room for improvement. aside from separating the commentary, i'd suggest showing the nicks when the first come in and then switching over to just the pokes name(ie blissey instead of princess).
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Ok, I'm open to suggestion as this is only my second warstory ^^;;

Also, It appears I was wrong and I'm only running 136 speed EVs XD, sorry for the misunderstanding
 
No offense, but that was a pretty poor warstory. The battle was pretty bad (lots of poor decisions, like Cloyster and Mence staying in on each other, Starmie just being thrown away, Gard using Aerial Ace, Dusknoir burning Gard instead of using Shadow Sneak, etc), commentary was dull, and nicknames weren't remotely interesting either.

edit: If you're looking to make better warstories, really the main thing to do would be to improve as a battler, as this wasn't a good fight at all.
 
Fishin said:
No offense, but that was a pretty poor warstory. The battle was pretty bad (lots of poor decisions, like Cloyster and Mence staying in on each other, Starmie just being thrown away, Gard using Aerial Ace, Dusknoir burning Gard instead of using Shadow Sneak, etc), commentary was dull, and nicknames weren't remotely interesting either.

edit: If you're looking to make better warstories, really the main thing to do would be to improve as a battler, as this wasn't a good fight at all.
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Gliscor used AA, not Gardevoir lol!
 
I stopped after you tried to use a non STAB brick break on something with 180 base defense instead of your 140 BP Draco Meteor with STAB at his 45 base special defense
 
i agree with you that the nicks were kinda entertaining, but theyre rather hard to remember and then it gets annoying trying to rmember who the evil wizard is and who the two face fairy is.
 
Blissey_ODonnell said:
Maybe he predicted Blissey?
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If he predicted blissey then his comments should enlighten us to that fact in his warstory! Of course, his comments are lacking so we cant tell very easily, however it appears he was using it because "OMG cloyster is weak to fighting so use fighting move!" but maybe im wrong, it just felt that way. So my suggestion for your future warstories would be better comments, better battle, and the other stuff that the rules require for warstory posts :/
 
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