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The False Sweeper [OU RMT]

The False Sweeper
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*picture does not represent actual pokemon used by me, although it is my namesake

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After years of just playing casually, I decided to make a team that can hopefully take me high on the ladder. Coming up from the UU metagame, my only ideas were to take what I saw as the most threatening pokemon in the tier and base mine around them. Needless to say, I’ve come to know the metagame a little better since then and made my own team.

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THE MEMBERS:

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*The only team member I’m opposed to removing is Kingdra
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Without going into further depth too soon, the main concept of the team revolves around getting a free turn in to go to a one-turn setup sweeper

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Butterfree@Focus Sash
Compoundeyes
6 Def / 252 Sp Def / 252 Spe - Jolly
~ Sleep Powder
~ U-Turn
~ Stun Spore
~ Protect

Explanation: Fortunately, Butterfree offers an exclusive combination in reliable sleep + U-Turn, which is the entire basis of getting me free turns. Stun Spore completes the double status, and Protect stops Fake Out leads. I don’t expect it to ever make it out of the lead confrontation, but sometimes it does, and if the situation ever arises, it can switch into Stealth Rock + a Swampert’s Surf, survive, and use Sleep Powder. This is the only reason for maxing special defense. HP is left alone to give an odd number.

Considering: Sleep Talk over Stun Spore

Against common leads:

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- here I have to predict whether or not it has Taunt (an increasing number don’t these days) and if it does, I can just U-Turn out first turn and go to Tyranitar or Bronzong. Otherwise I can be risky and try for Sleep Powder.

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- Always U-Turn out first turn and go to Bronzong. Aero does nothing at all the the metal bell, who OHKO’s in return with Gyro Ball.

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- Sleep Powder, and if it has Lum Berry (someone chose that over Occa? Yeah right) then I lose, but that’s rare

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- My favorite confrontation! Sleep Powder, U-Turn out, and if I can kill it, Butterfree may just be able to come back later if this is their only rock’er

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- Same as Swampert, except this 90% of the time signals a stall team, so it also makes me sad inside.

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- Honestly, I just let them use Sleep Powder while attempting to use mine. I will wake up as the finish Toxic Spiking and sleep them, and I’m not really out much

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- Protect first turn, then Sleep Powder

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Kingdra@Life Orb
Swift Swim
252 Att / 178 Sp Att / 80 Speed - Naughty
~Rain Dance
~Waterfall
~Outrage
~Draco Meteor

The main attraction. After getting repeatedly swept by Kingdras early on, I decided it was in my best interest to use this beast. I can’t even describe its destructive power if some counters are gone. Rain Dance is obviously the one turn setup, and then I can spam Waterfall until something comes in that can take that, in which case I will use Draco Meteor or if I feel safe, Outrage. Completely arbitrary EV spread, I’m sure there is a better one someone can offer.

Considering: Hydro Pump over Draco Meteor, but you’ll have to convince me

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Rotom-H@Choice Scarf
Levitate
6 Def / 252 Sp Att / 252 Speed - Modest
~ Overheat
~ Shadow ball
~ Trick
~ Thunderbolt

Upon a suggestion from Toxic Spork, a scarfed heat rotom has replaced my former substitute magnezone, and it really has done it's job so well in my testing that rotom is now a permanent member of the team. Please note that this really helps patch up that nasty fighting weakness i had, and also serves as the revenge killer I previously lacked.

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Tyranitar@Lum Berry
252 Att / 6 Def/ 252 Sp Def- Adamant
Sand Stream (sadly)
~ Crunch
~ Stone Edge
~ Earthquake
~ Stealth Rock

A lot of the grunt work goes to this guy. When I was building this team I was just looking for a Rotom counter, but Tyranitar can do much more than that. The specially defensive set can easily kill off most Latias and Heatran. Stealth Rock is mostly a filler move, but there were plenty of situations in which I knew what the opponent would switch to, and I couldn’t do anything worthwhile to it with Tyranitar, so it sets up rocks when given a turn like that.

Considering: Finding a replacement to Tyranitar that doesn’t have Sand Stream. The conflicting weather hurts, and it also drains Butterfree and Azelf. That said, I’m also considering a Choice Band version with Pursuit

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Bronzong@Occa Berry
Levitate
170 HP / 252 Att / 88 Def - Relaxed
~ Gyro Ball
~ Earthquake
~ Explosion
~ Rain Dance

Bronzong does many things for my team, such as killing Aerodactyl, Gengar, Heatran, Dragon Dance Tyranitar, and Infernape. Its main purpose, though, is to set up Rain Dance and Explode, paving the way for Kingdra. That was my original plan. Then I realized that by using Rain Dance in combination with Occa Berry, it becomes a near-perfect Salamence counter as well. I immediately use Rain Dance, and if it’s a MixMence, it will Fire Blast me and Bronzong takes less than 1/3 of its HP in damage. I can then use Explosion which kills it and lets MY dragon come in. If it Dragon Dances the first turn, I can actually use Gyro Ball to beat the DD versions. The EV’s are set up to give Bronzong equal HP and Def stats, which I think is the best overall, but I may be wrong.

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Azelf@Life Orb
Levitate
6 HP/ 252 SpA / 252 Spe - Timid
IVs are 20/30/30/31/31
~ Flamethrower
~ Grass Knot
~ Hidden Power Ice
~ Nasty Plot

This is the false sweeper, 6th in my lineup. The lack of Psychic hurts sometimes, but being able to use HP Ice on Salamence and especially weakened Latias is much more useful than hitting Infernape. In fact, I will commonly switch this INTO Infernape to bluff having Psychic and thus getting a free Plot. Flamethrower for steels, Grass Knot for Tyranitar (who sadly is not OHKO’d by a +2 Grass Knot) and Swampert, HP Ice for dragons. Not much to say here, but if Azelf dies, the opponent can think they have just killed my late game sweeper.

Considering: Actually using Psychic. Infernape and Machamp run rampant throughout most of my team and can be quite hard to stop. Also considering using someone else in this slot


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Team Threats:

Major:

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- I know, it’s sad, I’m weak to one of the top 10 pokemon. But I really have nothing to handle it, as Azelf can’t kill it due to Extremespeed

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- Not the fire attacks, as I have almost overprepared for those, but the Close Combats in combination with its high speed

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- Nothing loves switching into Machamp, for sure (except Slowbro) It can seriously just spam DynamicPunch and do a number on my team

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- The final of the quartet of evil fighting types that slaughter my team. But if I can get Magnezone/Azelf in when it doesn’t have a substitute, I’m good

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- If this is the late game sweeper, I’m sunk. It can switch into my Kingdra and use Substitute/Agility and proceed to sweep what’s left of me, as I have no solid counters for it to begin with

The Explosion Issue: I currently rely on Bronzong’s Explosion to beat these threats: Zapdos, Suicune, and Snorlax. These are not threats in the traditional sense, but there are huge holes in my team without Bronzong

Minor:

DD Gyarados - does a number on me, but I can take this out (an alternate view is that it does this no matter what your team members are!)

CM Jirachi - Thank God these are going extinct

Electivire - is annoying if it switches into a Thunderbolt, because I never expect someone to be using it. Definitely manageable, but I lose Magnezone in the process

Scizor - the CB U-Turns give everyone an ulcer, but it gets worn down just because I keep on the offensive

Conflicting Weather Conditions - While it is highly useful against hail/rain teams, going between Kingdra and Tyranitar is really annoying when I have to set up rain again

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Well, that’s it for my box of tricks! When you rate, I invite you to be very harsh, so long as you have good suggestions. I really think I usable team can be salvaged from this.
 
I dont have a lot of time here so im just going to go with a little nitpick, i have used kingdra a ton, gotta love that typing, and i have found that while the rain dance set, the dancer is WAY better, and catches teams off guard, cause it gives you the speed to outspeed base 130's after a DD...VERY IMPORTANT...and it also gives it an impressive attack stat to work off of in order to muscle around things it normally wouldnt..I.E. Empoleon gets 2HKOd from my experience. Try this out:

Kingdra@Lum Berry
Adamant
Swift Swim
252 Atk / 232 Spe / 20 Hp
-Dragon Dance
-Waterfall
-Outrage
-Substitute

Dragon Dance pretty much replaces rain dance on this set. Waterfall and outrage give you two powerful stabs only resisted by Empoleon wich most sets still get 2HKOd by a +1 Outrage, and substitute another option to dragon dance to use on the switch and is also great at preventing predicted status and giving another ddance turn, and once you get +2, its GG
 
Kingdra should have hydropump over outrage. I've used one with it and it is absolutely devastating.

can you give me a reason why? What does Hydro Pump do for me that Waterfall does not? And that Outrage/Draco Meteor does not?

And Naruto, I'll definitely be trying out your DD Kingdra!
 
Based on your "major threats" list, and the fact that you need a revenge killer, I think that you should try a different set over Magnezone, whom you said was a nice bonus but not really necessary.

Rotom-H @ Choice Scarf
252 SpAtk/ 252 Spe/ 4 Def Timid/Modest
Levitate
-Overheat
-Shadow Ball
-Thunderbolt
-Trick

This set is a check, at least, to those five pokemon that you said plagued you, as well as three of your minor threats (dd Gyrados, cm Jirachi (you can trick your scarf on it) and Scizor).

Hope I helped.
 
can you give me a reason why? What does Hydro Pump do for me that Waterfall does not? And that Outrage/Draco Meteor does not?

And Naruto, I'll definitely be trying out your DD Kingdra!

Hydro Pump greatly outdamages waterfall. It is especially useful for taking out physically pokes like Skarmory or Metagross. I think a better question would be "what does outrage do that draco meteor does not." the answer is "not a lot" so I'd go with Hydro Pump over Outrage.
 
ive never had a problem with a butterfree lead...nice work though. Sleep powder Tends to miss alot :P
btw i dont know about anyone else but i use my roserade with HP fire or ice O: so yeahh it should be a problem
 
Hydro Pump greatly outdamages waterfall. It is especially useful for taking out physically pokes like Skarmory or Metagross. I think a better question would be "what does outrage do that draco meteor does not." the answer is "not a lot" so I'd go with Hydro Pump over Outrage.

So if i were to use a set of rain dance/waterfall/hydro pump/draco meteor like you suggested, would i want to swap the attack and sp attack stats or not?

And Toxic Spork, thank you 3000x over for suggesting scarf rotom! I've already tried out this change and it seems to be just the thing for the job!

OnceXexile: yes the recent surge in hp ice roserade is killing me, but like with any other lead, you can't beat all of them.
 
Butterfree isn't the greatest lead in OU. Most leads will outspeed it and will taunt it if possible (considering every butterfree lead ever has been used for its accurate sleep). Even if they don't outspeed or don't have taunt, and don't have a lum berry, they'll probably switch to a sleeptalker. My point is that there are much more effective leads.
 
So if i were to use a set of rain dance/waterfall/hydro pump/draco meteor like you suggested, would i want to swap the attack and sp attack stats or not?

And Toxic Spork, thank you 3000x over for suggesting scarf rotom! I've already tried out this change and it seems to be just the thing for the job!

OnceXexile: yes the recent surge in hp ice roserade is killing me, but like with any other lead, you can't beat all of them.

you can use 252 atk 240 SpA, 16 speed and a naughty or lonely nature to outspeed scarftran in the rain. I don't think it's really worth it to run much more speed than that because you need a pretty hefty ev investment to beat things like scarf flygon
 
[15:50:23] <goofball> someone tell him roserade has natural cure using sleep powder with butterfree will NOT WORK
[15:50:24] <goofball> -.-

roserade has natural cure using sleep powder with butterfree will not work

- butterfree as a lead is on a whole inferior to smeargle. smeargle has 100% sleep and moves like stealth rock, spikes etc.
- mixed kingdra is pathetic, actually kingdra without salamence on the same team is pathetic, use ddgyarados
- tyranitar is too slow and not strong enough to do anything good, either make it babiritar (you can dragon dance on the switch to lucario your problem pokemon) or bandtar
- bronzong is a bad pokemon, swap it out for scarfjirachi who beats non-naive ddmence 100% of the time, and also tyranitar, lucario etc
- azelf is useless with scizor and the newly popular scarftar running around, change it for lo or expert belt latias which compliments jirachi and does more or less the same thing

now for a rate from goofball

[15:52:27] <goofball> you should've told me you were posting
[15:52:36] <goofball> I would listed everything that is dumb with that team.
[15:53:31] <goofball> butterfree is dumb. use smeargle with spore.
[15:54:16] <goofball> your entire team fails
[15:54:31] <goofball> it has a dumb lead, half rain team, half useless shit.
[15:54:38] <goofball> why are you running t-tar with a rain team...........
[15:54:44] <goofball> why does your azelf not have psychic
[15:54:51] <goofball> why are you running HP ICE.
[15:55:00] <goofball> follow by psychic calcs against mence.
[15:55:28] <goofball> you have rain dance on 2 pkmn but only 1 pkmn takes advantage of it
[15:55:34] <goofball> this is a sign of a shitty ass team

he is kinda brutal but take my suggestions to heart and you will have a fine team on your hands
 
I don't mean to be a dick, but this team is absolutely horrific. First off Butterfree, please, remove. I used Butterfree when I was a noob and I know how it sucks now, if this is a rain team, use Electrode, and if not, Pert or Metagross. I can't tell if this is a rain team or a non rain team anyways, if it's not then it's absolutely pointless to have another pokemon on your team dedicated to setting up for Kingdra. You should scrap this team and try making another, as I can't see you doing anything good with it.
 
The team seems good but I would rather you not use Butterfree. It has little use other than putting a pokemon to sleep. You might as well use Smeargle to have the job better done or use a Roserade. Getting the accuracy is not worth having a butterfree. Rain Dance on Bronzong just so it can benefit Kingdra? Uh, I don't know, it is a waste of a move to me. Bronzong is not always the best choice either as Forretress can play its roll whilst also using other moves like spikes instead. Azelf is better off without nasty plot and with a choice scarf being a revenge killer for your team. USe Psychic to eliminate Machamp and Breloom as they are two "threats" of yours. Fire Blast can also be an option for a harder hit and it does not have that bad accuracy either.
 
Well I did say to be harsh... Lol. But if you are going to tell me it's a bad team then at least also suggest some way to impove it...

Thorns, was not aware smeargle had base 75 speed in stead of 70. Will deinitely use that now!

In other news, I actually had gyarados in kingdras spot previously, but I have now swithed Kingdra to the above suggested full physical dd+substitute version.

Tyranitar@choice band advice has been recieved and I'm beginning to use him as we type. We'll see but it looks promising

palacemaven, I'm a little wary to give up bronzongs levitate ability. I may need more convincing on this
 
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