The Underrated Revolt!

Hello ladies and gentlemen and welcome to my second Rate My Team! I like using underrated pokemon in OU battles to show that salemance ISN'T unbeatable. Without further ado, the team!

The Team Building Process:

First, I had to account for the general OU metagame. Which pokemon rule the realm? Well, the most powerful, frustratingly strong pokemon who can tear dreams apart are dragons right? So i need to take them out, fast and strong. I chose the evolution of an old favorite, Weavile, to give them a run for their money. He's as fast and strong as they come and ready to break down dragons and other strong opponents.
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Next I needed to cover his five weaknesses. I took care of three of them in one choice. "it" has great bulk and offense, while not having a very wide movepool, it has all the moves it needs to to work proficiently. Klinklang, a pure steel type, covers weavile's weakness to rock, steel, and bug while also serving it's own role as a bulky sweeper.
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Now i need a really defensive pokemon. I created an evoilite tank who ends up working in with the team very well. He resists Weavile's bug and fighting weaknesses as well as klinklang's fighting and ground weaknesses. I made a Golbat who is defensive first and a tank second, but a tank nonetheless.
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There is still a big weakness to fire on my team, as well as electric and even rock if klinklang falls. so who resists all three, and effectively at that? Well Swampert could, but everyone knows his potential. Quagsire too, but i'm thinking lower. Whiscash. Whiscash has excellent hp and decent defenses as well. Also, Whiscash has access to dragon dance! I had to try this out for myself and i love him so much. More on him later because I'll just ramble on.
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So now Weavile is covered, Klinklang is covered, Golbat is covered besides psychic and Whiscash is covered as well. Of course Weavile can't be the only fast and powerful attacker on my team. I wanted to use someone very powerful while not adding new weaknesses to my team. A normal type. A normal type like Raticate. Raticates are significantly underrated for some reason and I don't like it one bit. Now i have to show his worth on my team.
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My final slot is for team support. I wanted a supportive pokemon to do the basics, heal teammates, cure status, take hits, yadayada. I chose an innovated form of support chimeco for this role.
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The Team:
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Weavile@ Muscle Band
252/Atk 4/HP 252/Spd
Adamant~ Pressure
Ice punch
Brick Break
Night Slash
Retaliate
Synergy:
Fire- Whiscash
Fighting- Golbat, Chimeco
Rock- Klinklang, Whiscash
Steel- Klinklang, Whiscash
Bug- Klinklang, Golbat

The lead of the team. Weavile's are fast and strong and a force to be reckoned with. I lead it to scare out weaker or supereffective foes. The STAB ice punch terrorizes anything supereffective and OHKOs weaker neutral damage, taking chunks out of anything. Night slash takes care of things that resist ice but take neutral and of course those pesky psychic and ghost types. Brick Break works great on low health rock and steel types if I feel brave. I like Retaliate for a powerful revenge kill. Oh and don't worry, Ambipom leads are slower, so a U-turn KO is out of the question.

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Klinklang@ life orb
124/HP 132/Atk 252/Spd
Adamant~ Plus
Shift Gear
Gear Grind
Return
Rock Smash
[U]Synergy:[/U]
Fire- Whiscash
Fighting- Golbat, Chimeco
Ground- Golbat, Chimeco

This is my potential sweeper. At first i wanted a strong , defensive steel type. Then I started thinking of sets for this guy and had low expectations. But Klinklang proved me wrong! Steel types force out switches left and right, giving a free turn to set up Shift Gear, a Klink exclusive move that initiates sweep mode. Gear grind, another Klink exclusive move, enforces sweep mode, clobbering pokemon all over the place. Return is also a viable option for ground types and the like who resist steel. And if a steel type tries to ruin my fun i have Rock Smash. It's not very strong, but it is boosted by Shift Gear and super effective. At least I'm not walled by steel.

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Golbat@ Evoilite
100/HP 208/Def 200/Sp Def
Careful- Inner Focus
Roost
Curse
Brave Bird
Poison Fang
Synergy:
Psychic- Chimeco, Weavile
Rock- Klinklang, Whiscash
Ice- Klinklang
Electric- Whiscash

I love this Golbat. I aimed for a bulky set, with EVs for defense, not attack. When looking for a last move I saw curse and thought "that could work." I'm glad I use it now because if unprepared it can tear teams apart. Roost is for his general walling, Curse sets up his tanking, and Brave Bird is STAB and very strong. It also goes well with Roost recovery. Poison Fang is STAB ass well, but it is also for poisoning for toxic stall. Or poison stall.

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Raticate@ Flame Orb
252/Atk 4/HP 252/Spd
Jolly- Guts
Facade
Suckerpunch
Protect
U-Turn
Synergy:
Fighting- Golbat, Chimeco

Raticate! For some reason, very underused. He has nice speed and attack, paired with guts and jolly nature he is one tough cookie. Raticate is also, sadly, quite fragile. That's what protect is for on the first turn to activate Flame Orb. Suckerpunch is the only priority of my team, and it's very useful against ghosts who forget Raticates can learn it. Facade is deathly strong due to STAB, guts and status. U-Turn is also for scouting, easy damage or a quick revenge kill.

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Whiscash@ leftovers
100/Atk 74/Def 78/Sp Def 252/Spd
Adamant- Anticipation
Dragon Dance
Waterfall
Earthquake
Spark
Synergy:
Grass- Golbat, Klinklang

This is my pride and joy. Starting from the top, Whiscash. I chose leftovers because I want to keep him alive as ling as possible instead of maybe Life Orb. I use attack EVs for that extra boost before Dragon Dance. I also used some defensive EVs to compliment his great HP and max out speed to increase the effects of DD. So of course DD is the main objective, getting even one makes him a big threat. Waterfall and Earthquake are very strong STAB and nice coverage. Also, my favorite, Spark! Any water types trying to wall, flying types, whatever. Spark! Are you serious how does that even happen you're a ground type? Nuts. anyway, huge threat and great asset to the team.

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Chimecho@ Leftovers
252/HP 116/Def 80/Sp Atk 60/Sp Def
Modest~ Levitate
Heal Bell
Wish
Protect
Psychic
Synergy:
Dark- Klinklang
Ghost- Klinklang, Raticate
Bug- Klinklang,Golbat

That's right, Chimecho. She's pretty much purely support. Wish is great for healing up my team and it is my first time using wish so i didn't know how well it would work. Heal Bell is also great, but don't worry I have experience with it. Protect get's me a free heal with wish and psychic can do a surprising amount to anyone who doesn't resist. Seriously, I was surprised.

So that's my team. I've used it a few times and it works pretty well I've won 5 out of 6, not big numbers but I just made it. But wait, there's more!

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Parasect@ leftovers
252/HP 172/Def 84/Sp Def
Careful~ Dry Skin
Spore
Aromatherapy
Leech Seed
X-Scissor

Why the hell did I pick that picture? Holy shit that's gross. Anyway this is a possible replacement for Chimecho who I feel could be a little better. Spore is a godsend and aromatherapy is the same as Heal Bell. Leech Seed could help life longevity and X-Scissor is, well, a powerful STAB.

Well that's the real end. Any input would be great. Thanks!
 
As cool as it is to see originality, I highly doubt you will be able to win any serious matches in OU with this team. Most of the Pokemon you have chosen are highly outclassed or just too weak for to stand a chance at fighting the metagame's top threats. You are dangerously weak to most of the tier. Though I would suggest a complete reworking of the team, since you are so adamant to use UU/RU/NU Pokemon in OU, I do have a few suggestions I can make.

You call Weavile a dragon killer, but no Ice Shard? It is vital for killing them as they will all outspeed and OHKO Weavile after a Dragon Dance. No one will stay in to let you Ice Punch them lol. Retaliate is pretty useless; replace it with Pursuit. I think Muscle Band is a poor item as well; replace it with Life Orb or Choice Band.

Rock Smash. still does not even dent any of the Steels in OU. I'd suggest replacing it with Thunderbolt and give Klinklang a Naughty nature so your team can actually do something to hurt Skarmory.

Poison Fang has completely useless coverage; replace it with Super Fang. I question the EV spread as well; you'd be highly better off investing in defensive with an Impish nature as Poison/Flying has useful resistances to many strong physical attacks. Also, Curse isn't really suitable as Golbat can't really set it up very easily in a tier filled with strong attackers that can destroy it; replace it with Taunt so it can be used as an anti-stall Pokemon.

Raticate seems fine, although to be honest you may as well be using Ursaring as a status orb abuser, whom outclasses it due to higher attack and the ability to not be walled by the omnipresent Steel types in OU.

Replace Spark with Stone Edge on Whiscash. You'll find the coverage more useful. Don't see the point of the Def & SDef EVs; just go 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd.

lol Chimecho. It's base HP is too low to pass Wishes, and it can't really wall or kill anything. I'd replace it with Alomomola as a UU Wish passer.

Parasect is fine, although needs rain support to function well. I'd suggest Politoed, but you don't want to use any OU Pokemon.

Your team will still lose to any skilled player, but at least now your team may have more of a chance at surviving in the OU tier. Good luck!
 
Thanks for the input! A couple quick questions though:
Ice shard > ice punch
Or does pursuit replace night slash and have
Ice shard
Ice punch
Pursuit
Brick break?

I didn't fully understand what you meant by that
I think thunderbolt on klinklang is probably still better than rock smash
Should I replace poison fang with toxic or what?
I love that Ursaring idea that's just better all around good call
I guess stone edge could work well too
And Alomomola sounds great! I think I could put together a straightforward support set

Thanks again!
 
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