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[SET]
Assault Vest (Miraidon) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Hadron Engine
Level: 50
Tera Type: Electric
EVs: 252 HP / 20 Def / 212 SpA / 4 SpD / 20 Spe
Modest Nature
- Electro Drift
- Volt Switch
- Draco Meteor
- Snarl

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
========
- Assault Vest Miraidon is meant to serve a more flexible, defensive role in contrast to standard Choice Specs sets. Due to the introduction of a second Restricted Pokemon in Regulation I, it doesn't need to function as a team's main source of offense, meaning that it's able to use the Assault Vest to function as a bulky supportive option as opposed to offensive Choice Specs sets.
- Snarl is chosen in order to further neuter special attackers and allow Miraidon to apply pressure to opposing Restricted Pokemon through damage reduction in conjunction with the added bulk from its Assault Vest. Volt Switch allows Miraidon to act as a bulky pivot able to take hits from faster special attackers like Calyrex-S and reposition.
- Assault Vest augments Miraidon's ability to take on special attacking Restricted Pokemon like Calyrex-S, Kyogre, Lunala, and opposing Miraidon. Assault Vest also lets Miraidon position more flexibly than Choice-locked sets while letting Miraidon function as a more defensive Restricted Pokemon, with the Special Defense boost allowing Miraidon to live two Life Orb Astral Barrages and three unboosted Astral Barrages from Calyrex-S.
- 20 Speed EVs are used to outspeed Kyogre and Groudon, while 212 Special Attack EVs lets Miraidon secure OHKOs on Pokemon like Incineroar, Calyrex-S, and Zamazenta-C with Tera Electric Electro Drift. The remaining EVs are placed into Miraidon's HP and defenses to maximize its general bulk.
- Tera Electric is used to allow Miraidon to make up for some of the damage lost from using Assault Vest, with it being instrumental in Miraidon's ability to secure key OHKOs on Pokemon like the aforementioned Incineroar. It also greatly aids Miraidon defensively by removing its weaknesses to opposing Miraidon's Draco Meteor and Dazzling Gleam, as well as Ice-type attacks from Calyrex-I and Chien-Pao.

Teambuilding
=========
- Trading a lot of its damage output by dropping Choice Specs can often leave Miraidon lacking in damage against key threats. Rillaboom is able to take on Miraidon's hits and change its Terrain, and Iron Hands is able to take hits even better from Assault Vest Miraidon, with Draco Meteor doing a maximum of half of its HP and leaving Miraidon weakened and out of position.
- Calyrex-I is able to take a hit and OHKO Miraidon in return, Terapagos is able to clear Miraidon’s Terrain and set up against it, Koraidon is able to outspeed and deal massive damage with Life Orb Close Combat, and opposing Miraidon likely outspeeds it and can force Terastallization by threatening an OHKO with Choice Specs Draco Meteor.
- Assault Vest Miraidon functions excellently as a supporting piece alongside Trick Room-focused Restricted Pokemon like Calyrex-I and Lunala, which are able to help it turn the tables on faster Restricted Pokemon like Koraidon and opposing Miraidon, with Calyrex-I being able to threaten an OHKO on Rillaboom and opposing Miraidon and Lunala being able to take on Iron Hands and Koraidon. Electric Terrain is able to block Amoonguss and Brute Bonnet's Spore while giving Lunala a Defense boost from Electric Seed.
- Miraidon greatly appreciates Grimmsnarl's dual screen support, allowing it to even further outlast opposing Restricted Pokemon like the Calyrex formes as well as Chien-Pao, while Urshifu-R compliments Miraidon by applying immediate pressure on Terapagos and Chien-Pao. Incineroar is able to supplement Miraidon's physical bulk via Intimidate and Will-O-Wisp, helping it take physical attacks from Chien-Pao, Zamazenta-C, Life Orb Koraidon, non-Tera Fire Calyrex-I, and Iron Hands and allowing Miraidon to retaliate for significant damage. Incineroar's STAB moves are also very useful to Miraidon, as they damage key threats like Rillaboom, Chien-Pao, and the Calyrex formes, putting them into range of Miraidon's attacks.

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Good work! I would like to recheck this though before I grant you 1/2.

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[SET]
Assault Vest (Miraidon) @ Assault Vest Needs a set name, you could change the name to Bulky Offensive if you prefer that
Ability: Hadron Engine
Level: 50
Tera Type: Electric
EVs: 252 HP / 20 Def / 212 SpA / 4 SpD / 20 Spe
Modest Nature
- Electro Drift
- Volt Switch
- Draco Meteor
- Snarl

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
========
- Assault Vest Miraidon is meant to serve a more flexible, defensive, role in contrast to the standard Choice Specs set. Now that Miraidon is n longer the sole restricted on its team This kinda sounds like fluff, you could expand this by saying teams don't need to rely on it as the main offensive threat or something like that, it's able to use the Assault Vest in conjunction with its phenomenal bulk to win damage trades with other special attacking restricteds like Calyrex-S, Kyogre, Lunala, and opposing Miraidon.
- Snarl is chosen in order to further neuter special attackers and allow Miraidon to apply pressure to opposing restricteds through damage reduction in conjunction with the added bulk from its Assault Vest. Volt Switch allows Miraidon to act as a bulky pivot able to take hits from faster special attackers like Calyrex-Shadow and reposition.
- Assault Vest is chosen in order to augment Miraidon's bulk in key restricted matchups You could move the restricteds you mentioned in the first bullet point here, otherwise remove this cause it sounds like fluff and allow it more flexible positioning than Choice-Locked sets and allowing Miraidon to function as a more defensive restricted. Mention a defensive damage calc here to demonstrate the bulk of this set in comparison to choice sets
- 20 Speed is used to outspeed base 90 Speed Pokemon like You don't need to mention specific speed tier benchmarks Kyogre and Groudon, max HP was chosen in order to maximize Miraidon's general bulk, while 212 SpA is used to secure OHKOs on Pokemon like Incineroar, Calyrex-S, and Zamazenta-C with Tera Electric Electro Drift. The remaining EVs are placed into Miraidon's defenses for general additional bulk.
- Tera Electric is used to allow Miraidon to make up for some of the damage lost from Assault Vest, with it being instrumental in Miraidon's ability to secure key OHKOs on Pokemon like the aforementioned Incineroar. Mention Tera Electric removing Dragon- and Fairy-type weaknesses to live Draco Meteor and take Dazzling Gleam better from opposing Choice Specs Miraidon

Teambuilding
=========
- Trading a lot of its damage output can often leave Miraidon lacking in damage against key threats. Assault Vest Rillaboom is able to take on Miraidon's hits and change its terrain, Calyrex-Ice is able to take a hit and OHKO Miraidon in return, Assault Vest Iron Hands is able to take hits even better from Assault Vest Miraidon, with Draco Meteor doing a maximum of 54% Up to you if you want to change this, I'm not sure how GP feel about exact numbers so you could change this to "half of its HP" and leaving Miraidon weakened and out of position. Don't need to mention Assault Vest on Rillaboom and Iron Hands since they are pretty much the only items which see usage
- Assault Vest Miraidon functions excellently as a supporting piece alongside Trick Room focused restricteds like Calyrex-I and Lunala. Electric Terrain is able to block Amoonguss and Brute Bonnet's spore while giving Lunala a defense boost from Electric Seed. Miraidon appreciates Grimmsnarl's screen support, allowing it to even further outlast restricted threats like the Calyrex formes, as well as the immediate pressure Urshifu-RS can apply to Terapagos, and Incineroar is able to supplement Miraidon's physical bulk via Intimidate. These partners are fine but you need to link them back to Miraidon's checks and explain how they specifically help Miraidon combat them

[SET CREDITS]
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Great job, I just have some readability changes I would like you to make and you're good to go! 1/2

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[SET]
Assault Vest (Miraidon) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Hadron Engine
Level: 50
Tera Type: Electric
EVs: 252 HP / 20 Def / 212 SpA / 4 SpD / 20 Spe
Modest Nature
- Electro Drift
- Volt Switch
- Draco Meteor
- Snarl

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
========
- Assault Vest Miraidon is meant to serve a more flexible, defensive, role in contrast to the standard Choice Specs set. Now that Miraidon is no longer the sole restricted on its team, it doesn’t need to function as a team's main source of offense, meaning that it's able to use the Assault Vest to function as a bulky, supportive, option as opposed to the standard Choice Specs.
- Snarl is chosen in order to further neuter special attackers and allow Miraidon to apply pressure to opposing restricteds through damage reduction in conjunction with the added bulk from its Assault Vest. Volt Switch allows Miraidon to act as a bulky pivot able to take hits from faster special attackers like Calyrex-S and reposition.
- Assault Vest is chosen in order to augment Miraidon's ability to take on special attacking restricteds like Calyrex-S, Kyogre, Lunala, and opposing Miraidon. The Assault Vest also allows it more flexible positioning than Choice-Locked sets and allowing Miraidon to function as a more defensive restricted, with the Special Defense boost allowing Miraidon to live two Life Orb Astral Barrage and three unboosted Astral Barrage from Calyrex-S.
- 20 Speed is used to outspeed Kyogre and Groudon, max HP was chosen in order to maximize Miraidon's general bulk, while 212 SpA is used to secure OHKOs on Pokemon like Incineroar, Calyrex-S, and Zamazenta-C with Tera Electric Electro Drift. The remaining EVs are placed into Miraidon's defenses for general additional bulk.
- Tera Electric is used to allow Miraidon to make up for some of the damage lost from Assault Vest, with it being instrumental in Miraidon's ability to secure key OHKOs on Pokemon like the aforementioned Incineroar. It also greatly aids Miraidon defensively by removing its weaknesses to opposing Miraidon's Draco Meteor and Dazzling Gleam, as well as Ice-type attacks from Calyrex-I and Chien-Pao.

Teambuilding
=========
- Trading a lot of its damage output can often leave Miraidon lacking in damage against key threats. Rillaboom is able to take on Miraidon's hits and change its terrain, Calyrex-I is able to take a hit and OHKO Miraidon in return, Terapagos is able to clear Miraidon’s terrain and set up against it, and Iron Hands is able to take hits even better from Assault Vest Miraidon, with Draco Meteor doing a maximum of half of its HP and leaving Miraidon weakened and out of position. Group the restricted threats and non restricted threats together and spilt this bullet point into 2, one for restricteds and one for the others
- Assault Vest Miraidon functions excellently as a supporting piece alongside Trick Room focused restricteds like Calyrex-I and Lunala, who are able to help it turn the tables on faster restricteds like Koraidon and opposing Miraidon, with Lunala also being able to take on Iron Hands and Calyrex-I being able to threaten an OHKO on Rillaboom. Mention Calyrex-I before Lunala to match the order you introduced them here Electric Terrain is able to block Amoonguss and Brute Bonnet's spore Spore while giving Lunala a defense boost from Electric Seed. Miraidon appreciates Grimmsnarl's dual screen support, allowing it to even further outlast restricted threats like the Calyrex formes and Chien-Pao, as well as the immediate pressure Urshifu-R can apply to Terapagos and Chien-Pao, I'm struggling to think of a suggestion to rewrite this but you need to mention Miraidon here or make it into a new sentence right now this sounds a bit like Grimmsnarl's screens help Urshifu-R too and Incineroar is able to supplement Miraidon's physical bulk via Intimidate, helping it out against Rillaboom, Iron Hands, and the Calyrex formes. Break this final bullet point up into more bullet points, it is very large

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[SET]
Assault Vest (Miraidon) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Hadron Engine
Level: 50
Tera Type: Electric
EVs: 252 HP / 20 Def / 212 SpA / 4 SpD / 20 Spe
Modest Nature
- Electro Drift
- Volt Switch
- Draco Meteor
- Snarl

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
========
- Assault Vest Miraidon is meant to serve a more flexible, defensive, role in contrast to the standard Choice Specs set. Now that Miraidon is no longer the sole restricted on its team, it doesn’t need to function as a team's main source of offense, meaning that it's able to use the Assault Vest to function as a bulky, supportive, option as opposed to the standard Choice Specs.
- Snarl is chosen in order to further neuter special attackers and allow Miraidon to apply pressure to opposing restricteds through damage reduction in conjunction with the added bulk from its Assault Vest. Volt Switch allows Miraidon to act as a bulky pivot able to take hits from faster special attackers like Calyrex-S and reposition.
- Assault Vest is chosen in order to augment Miraidon's ability to take on special attacking restricteds like Calyrex-S, Kyogre, Lunala, and opposing Miraidon. The Assault Vest also allows it more flexible positioning than Choice-Locked sets and allowing Assault Vest also lets Miraidon position more flexibly than Choice-Locked sets while letting Miraidon to function as a more defensive restricted, with the Special Defense boost allowing Miraidon to live two Life Orb Astral Barrages and three unboosted Astral Barrages from Calyrex-S.
- 20 Speed is used to outspeed Kyogre and Groudon, max HP was chosen in order to maximize Miraidon's general bulk, while 212 SpA is used to secure OHKOs on Pokemon like Incineroar, Calyrex-S, and Zamazenta-C with Tera Electric Electro Drift. The remaining EVs are placed into Miraidon's defenses for general additional bulk.
- Tera Electric is used to allow Miraidon to make up for some of the damage lost from Assault Vest, with it being instrumental in Miraidon's ability to secure key OHKOs on Pokemon like the aforementioned Incineroar. It also greatly aids Miraidon defensively by removing its weaknesses to opposing Miraidon's Draco Meteor and Dazzling Gleam, as well as Ice-type attacks from Calyrex-I and Chien-Pao.

Teambuilding
=========
- Trading a lot of its damage output by dropping Choice Specs can often leave Miraidon lacking in damage against key threats. Rillaboom is able to take on Miraidon's hits and change its terrain and Iron Hands is able to take hits even better from Assault Vest Miraidon, with Draco Meteor doing a maximum of half of its HP and leaving Miraidon weakened and out of position.
- Calyrex-I is able to take a hit and OHKO Miraidon in return, Terapagos is able to clear Miraidon’s terrain and set up against it, Koraidon is able to outspeed and deal massive damage with Life Orb Close Combat, and opposing Miraidon likely outspeeds and can force Terastalization by threatening an OHKO with Choice Specs Draco Meteor.
- Assault Vest Miraidon functions excellently as a supporting piece alongside Trick Room focused restricteds like Calyrex-I and Lunala, who are able to help it turn the tables on faster restricteds like Koraidon and opposing Miraidon, with Calyrex-I being able to threaten an OHKO on Rillaboom and opposing Miraidon and Lunala being able to take on Iron Hands and Koraidon. Electric Terrain is able to block Amoonguss and Brute Bonnet's Spore while giving Lunala a defense Defense boost from Electric Seed.
- Miraidon greatly appreciates Grimmsnarl's dual screen support, allowing it to even further outlast restricted threats like the Calyrex formes and Chien-Pao, while Urshifu-R compliments Miraidon by applying immediate pressure into Terapagos and Chien-Pao and Incineroar is able to supplement Miraidon's physical bulk via Intimidate, helping it out against Rillaboom, Iron Hands, and the Calyrex formes. (mention that damage reduction lets Mirai live Koraidon attacks and ohko/do a lot back)

[SET CREDITS]
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[SET]
Assault Vest (Miraidon) @ Assault Vest
Ability: Hadron Engine
Level: 50
Tera Type: Electric
EVs: 252 HP / 20 Def / 212 SpA / 4 SpD / 20 Spe
Modest Nature
- Electro Drift
- Volt Switch
- Draco Meteor
- Snarl

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details
========
- Assault Vest Miraidon is meant to serve a more flexible, defensive (RC) role in contrast to the standard Choice Specs set sets. (Slightly altered wording to avoid cross-referencing the Specs set.) Now that Miraidon is no longer the sole Restricted Pokemon on its team, (I suggest rephrasing this to just highlight how Regulation I allows two Restricted Pokemon per team, so that the analysis doesn't refer to a previous, outdated format.) it doesn’t doesn't need to function as a team's main source of offense, meaning that it's able to use the Assault Vest to function as a bulky (RC) supportive (RC) option as opposed to the standard Choice Specs.
- Snarl is chosen in order to further neuter special attackers and allow Miraidon to apply pressure to opposing restricteds Restricted Pokemon through damage reduction in conjunction with the added bulk from its Assault Vest. Volt Switch allows Miraidon to act as a bulky pivot able to take hits from faster special attackers like Calyrex-S and reposition.
- Assault Vest is chosen in order to augment (This seems a bit wordy, I suggest just writing "augments".) Miraidon's ability to take on special attacking restricteds Restricted Pokemon like Calyrex-S, Kyogre, Lunala, and opposing Miraidon. Assault Vest also lets Miraidon position more flexibly than Choice-locked sets while letting Miraidon function as a more defensive Restricted Pokemon, with the Special Defense boost allowing Miraidon to live two Life Orb Astral Barrages (leftover QC mark) and three unboosted Astral Barrages (leftover QC mark) from Calyrex-S.
- 20 Speed is EVs are used to outspeed Kyogre and Groudon, max HP was chosen in order to maximize Miraidon's general bulk (RC) while 212 SpA is used to Special Attack EVs let (avoids repetition of "is/are used to") Miraidon secure OHKOs on Pokemon like Incineroar, Calyrex-S, and Zamazenta-C with Tera Electric Electro Drift. The remaining EVs are placed into Miraidon's HP and defenses for to maximize its general additional bulk. (Combined the parts on the HP and defensive investments, since they basically have the same reasoning.)
- Tera Electric is used to allow Miraidon to make up for some of the damage lost from using Assault Vest, with it being instrumental in Miraidon's ability to secure key OHKOs on Pokemon like the aforementioned Incineroar. It also greatly aids Miraidon defensively by removing its weaknesses to opposing Miraidon's Draco Meteor and Dazzling Gleam, as well as Ice-type attacks from Calyrex-I and Chien-Pao.

Teambuilding
=========
- Trading a lot of its damage output by dropping Choice Specs can often leave Miraidon lacking in damage against key threats. Rillaboom is able to take on Miraidon's hits and change its Terrain, (AC) and Iron Hands is able to take hits even better from Assault Vest Miraidon, with Draco Meteor doing a maximum of half of its HP and leaving Miraidon weakened and out of position.
- Calyrex-I is able to take a hit and OHKO Miraidon in return, Terapagos is able to clear Miraidon’s Terrain and set up against it, Koraidon is able to outspeed and deal massive damage with Life Orb Close Combat, and opposing Miraidon likely outspeeds it and can force Terastalization Terastallization by threatening an OHKO with Choice Specs Draco Meteor.
- Assault Vest Miraidon functions excellently as a supporting piece alongside Trick Room focused restricteds Room-focused Restricted Pokemon like Calyrex-I and Lunala, who which are able to help it turn the tables on faster restricteds Restricted Pokemon like Koraidon and opposing Miraidon, with Calyrex-I being able to threaten an OHKO on Rillaboom and opposing Miraidon and Lunala being able to take on Iron Hands and Koraidon. Electric Terrain is able to block Amoonguss and Brute Bonnet's Spore while giving Lunala a Defense boost from Electric Seed.
- Miraidon greatly appreciates Grimmsnarl's dual screen support, allowing it to even further outlast restricted threats opposing Restricted Pokemon like the Calyrex formes and as well as Chien-Pao, ("and" might wrongly imply that Chien-Pao is a Restricted Pokemon, you can ignore this change b/c it's very nitpicky) while Urshifu-R compliments Miraidon by applying immediate pressure into on Terapagos and Chien-Pao. (AP) and (Splitting sentence here due to length.) Incineroar is able to supplement Miraidon's physical bulk via Intimidate and Will-O-Wisp, helping it take physical attacks from Chien-Pao, Zamazenta-C, Life Orb Koraidon, non-Tera Fire Calyrex-I, and Iron Hands and allowing Miraidon to retaliate for significant damage. Incineroar's STABs STAB moves are also very useful to Miraidon, hitting as they hit Rillaboom, Chien-Pao, and the Calyrex formes (I'd add in a descriptive adverb for "hit", because saying that these moves damage these Pokemon is self-explanatory.) and putting put them into range of Miraidon's attacks.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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I'd like to look at this again before I stamp it.
 
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