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I hope this is right. I can't include pictures not at a computer. This is the best I can do. Well have fun!


Whimsicott@leftover
prankster
Impish
-u-turn
-leech seed
-substitute
-taunt
252 hp/252 def/4spd
This is a SubSeed set. I picked Taunt over encore since it is the lead. It seemed a better choice over encore to disrupt entry hazard setup or just Pokemon that setup other things.

Ferrothron@Leftovers
Relaxed
Iron barbs
-gyro ball
-toxic
- thunder wave
- stealth rocks

252hp/88def/168spd

Solid Pokemon as you all know. This will be a good Pokemon to U-turn into to setup my own stealth rocks. Thunder wave will disrupt sweeper. The choice for toxic is to help get rid of walls. Gyro is a decent STAB move for it and helps prevent taunt.

Landorus@expert belt
Sand force
Naive
-earthquake
- stone edge
- hammer arm
-u-turn
252atk/252spe/4hp

I want to try rock slide for the flinch. This is here because of u-turn and it's great sweeper abilities.

Rotom-w@Choice scarf or flame orb
Timid
-volt switch
-hydro pump
-will-o-wisp
- trick
252spA/252spe/4def

I am not a fan of the choice scarf so I might throw flame orb with trick. That seems fun. I might try that. The reason it's on the team is because of volt switch. It's appears to be a good way to switch into my Landorus or Snorlax depending on the needs at the time.

Tentacruel@leftover
Liquid ooze
Bold
-toxic spikes
-rapid spin
- scald
- ice beam
252hp/240def/16spe

Not much to say about this guy. A good choice for a rapid spinner and toxic spike setter. This and Ferrothorn are my followers after Whimsicott taunts and u-turns out.

The final Pokemon I am cross between Snorlax, Vaporeon and or Cloyster. I am going to test all three, but for right it will be Snorlax.

Snorlax@leftovers
Impish
Thick fat
- rest
- sleep talk
- yawn
- body slam
252p/252def/4spD

Just a walking tank it is and that's what it will do here. With rest i will be able to recover lost health and hopefully stall out posioned or burned pokemon. The reason for yawn is to try to force switches.
 
Dude, you should still try to put up some pictures. Just copy the URL of google searches or something. Anyway, since its your 3rd time doing this, I'll put in some advice. Your team lacks direction. There is no theme, no type, no real goal. Your team needs to dedicate itself to a strategy. What I mean is a stall, hyper offensive, semi-stall, aggressive, shell smash, baton pass. The closest your team gets to is a semi-stall, but it doesn't even check the top threats. Consult the top mons used for this past month. Try to make sure you can check/counter each of them. For instance, a choice banded terrakion (or even a scarfed one) will plow through your entire team. Its useful to also know the sets used the most and stuff. As for the team itself, it needs a lot of changes for it to be good. I can recommend changes for the sets, but it still lacks a central goal. For instance, try to dedicate a team to one or two sweepers. Have supporting members who can take out their counters. The classic example is magnezone taking out steels for salamence/dnite. Or have a team that's based around an SD Lucario sweep.
 
The Rules said:
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.
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If you actually read the RMT Rules you would know and by any chance you are looking for a reliable sprite resource use this. The proper format for presenting individual Pokemon should be similar to the ones listed below.

Pokemon @ Item
Trait:
EVs:
Nature:
- move
- move
- move
- move
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Latios (M) @ Choice Specs
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 4 SDef / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Psyshock
- Draco Meteor
- Surf
- Trick
 
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