This is my last resort! (An UU warstory)

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Zandgaia's moves will look like this.
Axis44's moves will look like this.
other text will look like this.
Leftovers will be removed.
Sandstorm/hail damage will be removed.
Scores will be shown after each KO.
Teams will be shown at the end.
My comments will look like this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1VJvwe8rgaE&feature=channel_page
just to get you into the mood, and the reason of this title.

Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause
Zandgaia sent out Blackbeard (lvl 100 Drapion ?).
Axis44 sent out Roserade (lvl 100 Roserade ?).

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A roserade lead uh? If it's a standard one it hasn't got a single change. Roserade can either:
1: Sleep powder
or
2: (T-) Spike up,
or
switch.
After looking in all ways, I choose the safest move which will always do something: Taunt. Taunt is nice move which will always hurt (Except if it's an all out attacker or choicer)
Blackbeard: High five dude! *Holds claw up*
Me: Ummm no thanks.
Blackbeard: Whatever then, I love you, you know that right? *Hugs Zandgaia*
Me: o.O' but you're male!
Blackbeard: So? You're female right?
Me: ..... *Checks in underwear* Nope, I'm a boy
Blackbeard: *Let's loose* Never mind then.....

Axis44 switched in Donphan (lvl 100 Donphan ?).
Blackbeard used Taunt.
Donphan fell for the taunt!

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Darn, bad matchup here. Blackbeard doesn't like ground types at all. Time to switch to my levitator I guess, atleast Donphan can't stealth rock.

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fmsYEAH has entered the room.
Zandgaia switched in Kuma (lvl 100 Registeel).
Donphan used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Kuma lost 62% of its health.

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Look down V. It's true D: I hate it that registeel (or kuma) is right next to it. I'll just sacrifice him since he'll be quite useless now anyway.
Kuma: I'm gonna die right?
Me: Likely..
Kuma: I'm going to ask for adoption....

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Zandgaia: crap
Zandgaia: misclick
Zandgaia: a well
Donphan used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Kuma lost 44% of its health.
Zandgaia's Kuma fainted.

(5-6)

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Donphan's taunt wore off!

Ofcourse, that has to happen too? I'll send in my levitator; Mismagius and start checking with a substitue if it maybe has assurance,
if so:
I'm screwed
If not:
Hurrah for me.

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Zandgaia switched in Gecko Moria (lvl 100 Mismagius ?).
Gecko Moria used Substitute.
Gecko Moria lost 25% of its health.
Gecko Moria made a substitute!
Donphan used Assurance.
It's super effective!
The substitute took damage for Gecko Moria!
Gecko Moria's substitute faded!

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On a note of the names: Yes I like One Piece, you got a problem with that? There's the door *Points*
Anyway: Seems like I'm screwed now. If I think now, Assurance doesn't KO/has got a low change to KO, my mismagius with 6 hp/252 sp. att/252 speed, As long as Donphan hasn't got priority (Or in short: Ice shard) I'm ok and Donphan's dead. If it does: Then Gecko Moria is dead; My trusty master of the shadows.

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Gecko Moria used Shadow Ball.
Donphan lost 49% of its health.
Donphan used Assurance.
It's super effective!
Gecko Moria lost 71% of its health.

Just go as normal...

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Donphan used Ice Shard.
A critical hit!
Gecko Moria lost 17% of its health.
Zandgaia's Gecko Moria fainted.

Ice shard.... darn, and so mismagius goes back to the realm of the dead.
Me: Could you try to find Kuma there?
Moria: No way! You killed me! Again.......
Donphan: Woohoo! I'm so awesome
Me: *Cough*you're not*Cough*

(4-6)

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I'm getting sick of this thing.......Time to send in Heysup mascot.....
Let's roast this thing!

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Zandgaia switched in Juracule Mihawk (lvl 100 Blaziken ?).

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Mihawk: Elephant meat for dinner!

Axis44 switched in Honchkrow (lvl 100 Honchkrow ?).

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Mihawk: Chicken fried chicken anyone?
Honchkrow: Meep....

Juracule Mihawk used Fire Blast.
Honchkrow lost 100% of its health.
Axis44's Honchkrow fainted.
(4-5)
Juracule Mihawk lost 10% of its health.

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And so tweety dies, and first blood for me! *Takes a bit from fried krow* need's more spices......
Let's see what he'll do!

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Axis44 switched in Mismagius (lvl 100 Mismagius ?).

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So a Mismagius is send out, it's either the anti-stall set, CM set or Nasty plot set. But why would anti-stall switch in? Likely either CM or Nasty plot, but what I do know, is that I'm better of with Hidden Power considering the fact that Fire Blast can't be risked to miss once. And likely it'll sub anyway, which would be a waste.

Mismagius used Substitute.
Mismagius lost 25% of its health.
Mismagius made a substitute!
Juracule Mihawk used Hidden Power.
The substitute took damage for Mismagius!
Mismagius's substitute faded!

I have got.....No comment. Except that I'll now fireblast, just for the heck of it.

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Mismagius used Thunderbolt.
Juracule Mihawk lost 43% of its health.
Juracule Mihawk used Fire Blast.
A critical hit!
Mismagius lost 81% of its health.
Axis44's Mismagius fainted.
(4-4)
Juracule Mihawk lost 10% of its health.

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Me: Good job brains *Pats head*
Mihawk: *Dances* Go me. Do the boogie woogie!
Me: ......
Mihawk: What? Be happy that I help you!
Me: Sure, sure. Just shut up and play.
Mihawk: Don't want too!

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Axis44 switched in Milotic (lvl 100 Milotic ?).

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Me: Awesome! It's turning blue! Why don't you turn blue?
Mihawk: Hello? I'm a fire type!
Me: .....
I'll just superpower, maybe it has't got much def. ev's in milotic.

Juracule Mihawk used Superpower.
A critical hit!
Milotic lost 86% of its health.
Juracule Mihawk's attack was lowered.
Juracule Mihawk's defence was lowered.
Juracule Mihawk lost 10% of its health.
Milotic used Recover.
Milotic restored 50% of its health.

Me + Mihawk: O come on!

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Juracule Mihawk used Fire Blast.
It's not very effective...
Milotic lost 40% of its health.
Juracule Mihawk lost 10% of its health.
Milotic used Recover.
Milotic restored 50% of its health.

Mihawk: I'm getting tired over here!

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Juracule Mihawk used Fire Blast.
It's not very effective...
Milotic lost 39% of its health.
Juracule Mihawk lost 10% of its health.
Milotic used Recover.
Milotic restored 50% of its health.

Mihawk: Stop doing that! *Sobs in emo corner* You're bullying me!
Milotic: *Evil face*
Me: *Sigh* Just stop, come back you!
I'll switch in Blackbeard again, since then I can taunt and maybe even t-spike up, bit late but a well.

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Zandgaia switched in Blackbeard (lvl 100 Drapion ?).
Milotic used Recover.

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Blackbeard: *Laughs his face off*
Milotic: *Gives the evil eye*
Blackbeard: *Gulp*

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Blackbeard used Taunt.
Milotic fell for the taunt!
Milotic used Surf.
Blackbeard lost 40% of its health.

I'll just taunt so Milotic can't heal anymore and now: T-spike up b!tch.

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Blackbeard used Toxic Spikes.
Toxic Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Milotic used Surf.
Blackbeard lost 42% of its health.

Me: Everything going as planned.....
Blackbeard: *Spits spikes* wait a minute......
Blackbeard: I'm gonna die......right?
Me: *Nods sad*
Blackbeard: .......

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Blackbeard used Toxic Spikes.
Toxic Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Milotic used Surf.
Blackbeard lost 18% of its health.
Zandgaia's Blackbeard fainted.
(3-4)

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Stop turning blue already!
Anyway: Blackbeard did what he could, now time to send the emo-kid back in the game to let him get kille- i mean, to hurt milotic severly.

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Zandgaia switched in Juracule Mihawk (lvl 100 Blaziken ?).

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Mihawk: I'm back missed me?
Milotic: ........You're dead.....
Me: *Nods* Darn shame.
Mihawk: O come on!
I don't know what a Max sp. att, Blaze, LO, STAB 120 BP fireblast will do, although it sounds powerfull with so many powerups, I don't have my expections to high.

Juracule Mihawk used Fire Blast.
It's not very effective...
Milotic lost 43% of its health.
Juracule Mihawk lost 7% of its health.
Zandgaia's Juracule Mihawk fainted.
(2-4)
Milotic used Surf.
But there was no target!
Milotic's taunt wore off!

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Taunt wears off again, it's time to send in my last weapons: Jinbei, a SDsub Gatr with AJ + Return. Which I was testing out at the moment. Cmon Jinbei you can hopefully do it.

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Zandgaia switched in Jinbei (lvl 100 Feraligatr ?).

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Jinbei: Hear me roar!

Jinbei used Substitute.
Jinbei lost 25% of its health.
Jinbei made a substitute!
Milotic used Hidden Power.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
The substitute took damage for Jinbei!
Jinbei's substitute faded!

Jinbei: ......I'm getting scared...
Unneeded crit..Anyway, I better switch out to my last pokemon: A sure milotic killer: but I dunno why I saved it for now....

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Zandgaia switched in Doflamingo (lvl 100 Rotom).

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Milotic used Hidden Power.
Doflamingo lost 19% of its health.
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Doflamingo used Substitute.
Doflamingo lost 25% of its health.
Doflamingo made a substitute!
Milotic used Surf.
The substitute took damage for Doflamingo!
Doflamingo's substitute faded!

Don't know why I subbed, likely I expected a switch to donphan. Which didn't came. So I guess I'll just kill this thing then:

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Doflamingo used Thunderbolt.
It's super effective!
Milotic lost 46% of its health.
Milotic used Surf.
Doflamingo lost 36% of its health.

One more T-bolt and it's dead.......
Doflamingo: Hit it baby, one more time!

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Axis44 switched in Donphan (lvl 100 Donphan ?).

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Doflamingo: o.O Eat this!
Donphan: *Scratches* Wait what?

Donphan was badly poisoned!
Donphan was badly poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
Doflamingo used Thunderbolt.
It doesn't affect Donphan...
Donphan is hurt by poison!
Donphan lost 6% of its health.
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Doflamingo used Shadow Ball.
Donphan lost 37% of its health.
Donphan used Assurance.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
Doflamingo lost 44% of its health.
Zandgaia's Doflamingo fainted.
And here, Rotom dies. A well, you did what you could dude, Won't forget ya!

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Donphan: *Roars*

(1-4)
Donphan is hurt by poison!
Donphan lost 8% of its health.
Axis44's Donphan fainted.
(1-3)

<_< vs >_>

And so the elephant dies too. That's one problem less.
Seems like it's up to you Jinbei!

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Zandgaia switched in Jinbei (lvl 100 Feraligatr ?).
Axis44 switched in Clefable (lvl 100 Clefable ?).

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Jinbei: I will not die!
Clefable: Take a bite of this!

Clefable was badly poisoned!
Clefable was badly poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!

Clefable: Ouch o.O;

Jinbei used Substitute.
Jinbei lost 25% of its health.
Jinbei made a substitute!
Clefable used Seismic Toss.
The substitute took damage for Jinbei!
Jinbei's substitute faded!
Clefable is hurt by poison!
Clefable lost 6% of its health.

So seismic toss? Subbing won't have a point, I can just SD up then, Jinbei will survive anyway.

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Jinbei used Swords Dance.
Jinbei's attack was sharply raised.
Clefable used Seismic Toss.
Jinbei lost 32% of its health.
Clefable is hurt by poison!
Clefable lost 12% of its health.

Seems like I can survive another round and SD again.

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Jinbei used Swords Dance.
Jinbei's attack was sharply raised.
Clefable used Seismic Toss.
Jinbei lost 32% of its health.
Clefable is hurt by poison!
Clefable lost 18% of its health.

Time to sweep. AJ for the win now.

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Jinbei used Aqua Jet.
A critical hit!
Clefable lost 63% of its health.
Axis44's Clefable fainted.

Unneeded crit. A well, clefable's dead.

(1-2)

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Axis44 switched in Milotic (lvl 100 Milotic ?).

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Crud, the seasnake is back again. As I knew from previous games against Milotic. Feraligatr always outspeeds, so no worries with that.

Milotic was badly poisoned!
Milotic was badly poisoned by the Toxic Spikes!
Jinbei used Return.
Milotic lost 41% of its health.
Axis44's Milotic fainted.
(1-1)

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And so, finally Milotic dies. After all those turns.

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Axis44 switched in Roserade (lvl 100 Roserade ?).

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Let's hope an Aqua Jet will do enough to kill the roserade and finally win me the match!

Roserade absorbed the Toxic Spikes!
Jinbei used Aqua Jet.
It's not very effective...
A critical hit!
Roserade lost 100% of its health.






















































































































































































































































Roserade hung on using its Focus Sash!

When I red this:
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Roserade used Energy Ball.
It's super effective!
Jinbei lost 22% of its health.
Zandgaia's Jinbei fainted.
(0-1)

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And so, Axis44 wins. And I lose, good job Axis. I did not expect Roserade to hold a focus sash.

Axis44 wins!
Axis44: gg
Zandgaia: <_<
Zandgaia: gg
Zandgaia: close one
Axis44: Why SD over DD?
Zandgaia: lol no idea
Zandgaia: testing it
fmsYEAH has left the room.
Zandgaia: same for nastyplot magius in this tema
Axis44: Ah, gotcha
Axis44: I'm running NP too
Zandgaia: xD
Axis44: very effective =]
Zandgaia: anti lead drapion for win though ;)
Axis44: mhmm
Axis44: that thing is incredibly annoying
Zandgaia: the meaning :P
Axis44: lol
Zandgaia: EQ/Crunch/Taunt/T-spikes or filler
Axis44: defensive spread?
Zandgaia: beats almost all other leads
Zandgaia: including roserade
Zandgaia: 252 hp/42 att/216 spee + jolly nature
Axis44: I might have to try that out...
Zandgaia: yeah,

And after a few more minutes of talking, we finally parted. But I'll defeat him once, maybe not today, nor tomorrow. But just once....

Axis44 has left the room.

Zandgaia:
Team Schibukai(Order of appearance):
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Anti Lead drapion
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Seismictoss Registeel
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Mixken
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SubSDgatr
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Subtoxic Rotom
Axis44's team(Order of appearance):
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Props:
>Anti-lead Drapion for being awesome
>Mixken for getting donphan cornered, and ending the lives of mismagius and honchkrow.
>SubSDgatr for almost sweeping 3 pokemon, (If Focus Sash didn't existed)
>Roserade for having focus sash.
>Donphan and Milotic, since my team's weak to both.
>Milotic for walling my team
>Donphan for getting 2 kills
>Rotom for ending Milotic's live.
>Axis44 for being a great player
Slops:
>Both of our mismagius' despite having the same set; Being useless.
>Registeel for dieng because I misclicked.
>Me for failling hard
>His Honchcrow died to easily
>His Clefable was just set-up bait
>Almost only crits when something was already on the border of death anyway.
>Myself, for letting all my members die for something unneeded (Except drapion)
>Myself for being a terrible writer

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Um...how did you NOT expect Roserade to be holding Focus Sash? Most Roserade leads run that or Lum Berry. -.-

But an okay read at the very least. At least it's a UU Warstory. ^^

-Terywj
 
I stopped reading at the misclick, came back after a few minutes to give it another chance, then stopped reading again once Clefable started taking Poison damage.

Main point: we don't want to see warstories involving bad play and bad tactics, it ruins the competitive feel that they are supposed to have. Commentary was a bit lackng too tbh.
 
Commentary was a bit irritating and at times. There was barely any prediction. Misclick was really bad for this warstory. You could of safetly switched Registeel out for Mismagius due to Levitate if Mismagius is your Donphan switch in (and that doesn't seem to be a great idea). Clefable using S-Toss was wierd since most would be using Encore to punish Feraligator (lack of magic guard = fail).

Overall, I think you should find a better battle to warstory before making a warstory just because the score goes down to 1-0 in a match.

On a side note, the "dramatic" gaps that people keep putting in at the end of warstories are becoming really annoying.
 
Wasn't a good battle, filled with lacking commentary and bad plays. Talking to your pokemon wasn't very funny either and detracted even more from the battle. Also, I don't see why people leave a blank area (yours is over three times the size of the next biggest one I've seen...). I find they don't add suspense, and again, detract from the story. Not only that, but it was rather pointless in a warstory as anti-climatic as yours.

I don't mean to sound harsh, I'm just saying it how it is. You have potential, and I'm sure you can write a better warstory in the future. Just be a little more picky with your battles, and try to let us inside your skull more next time :]

Good luck
 
Underlines just made this downright hard to read. Commentary was okay, I liked the "conversations" but could be better.

mudkip72 covered whatever else I was going to say.

And seriously, the million linebreaks just made me agitated.
 
Yikes, not too great. You got a huge number of critical hits, you misclicked, there was no prediction, etc. The only "action" in the story was sweeping, and definitive sweeps are never interesting without prediction. The comments were confusing and the underlining wasn't nice on the eyes. Good attempt though!
 
As long as Donphan hasn't got priority (Or in short: Ice shard)

Hoping that Donphan doesn't have Ice Shard was a horribly bad way to play. Not to mention the fact you didn't expect a Focus Sash...Bad playing, horrible formatting, comments that reach somewhere between pointless and disturbing.
 
Not going to repeat everything that the others said, but the thread was a bit messy (especially with the comments), so maybe you could clean it up a bit by using different colours for comments.

Wasn't that exciting either, you could of won that, but you decided to throw away Pokemon at certain times (Registeel for example) when you could of kept them for late game.
 
Commentary was lacking, and the big long space at the end for the sash was so obviously coming.

Juracule Mihawk used Superpower.
A critical hit!
Milotic lost 86% of its health.
Juracule Mihawk's attack was lowered.
Juracule Mihawk's defence was lowered.
Juracule Mihawk lost 10% of its health.
Milotic used Recover.
Milotic restored 50% of its health.

Me + Mihawk: O come on!
And i particularily do not like this part. You are complaining about a CH off a 120 base power STAB LO attack? In your words, O come on!
And change your siggy please.
 
You played fairly badly, and so did he. Also, the underline made it hard to read, and I'm sorry, but the talking with your pokemon really didn't work out.
I'm pretty sure most, if not all roserade leads are sashed, so it was kinda stupid to not expect that. You definitely shouldve switched registeel back out, if it had SR it could've won.

Long gap to the end was very annoying, and not having magic guard on clefable made it seem like he was just some new player.

I really don't think that battle was suitable for a warstory.
 
No offense that that warstory was not so good. The players were bad and the tactics were to. Hopefully your next one will be better.
 
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