*title here* - An OU Warstory

INTRO:
My Team at a glance:
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His Team at a glance:
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My Stratagey: Para, Burn, Sleep, Status to cripple then sweep/wall (generally I sweep first then wall out their walls, because after para/burn their sweepers are good as gone) <--- What I call Stata-Stall

LEGEND:
Things in bold are my comments
Things in italics is score related
Things in *asterisks* are explanations as of why I took a chunk out


Sorry for the longetivity of this chunk of text
Rules: Evasion Clause, Extended Game, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Sleep Clause, Species Clause, Timed Battle
TomTom sent out Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
p i c k l e s sent out Mismagius (lvl 100 Mismagius ?).
Salamence's intimidate cut Mismagius's attack!
Mismagius used Will-o-wisp.
Salamence was burned!
Salamence used Draco Meteor.
Mismagius lost 116% of its health.
p i c k l e s's Mismagius fainted.
Salamence's special attack was harshly lowered.
Salamence was hurt by its burn!
Salamence lost 12% of its health.
Last time I fought a mence, he DD'd up on the first... and I pwnt him :/. Oh well, just remember the burn, it comes in handy later. And there goes my main status too.
Score: 5 - 6
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p i c k l e s switched in Gliscor (lvl 100 Gliscor ?).
TomTom switched in Cresselia (lvl 100 Cresselia ?).
Gliscor used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
Nothing too important there
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p i c k l e s switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Cresselia used Reflect.
A barrier was formed!
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TomTom switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Pointed stones dug into Heracross.
Heracross lost 12% of its health.
Blissey used Thunder Wave.
Heracross is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Take that foul fiend!
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p i c k l e s switched in Gliscor (lvl 100 Gliscor ?).
Heracross used Close Combat.
It's not very effective...
Gliscor lost 48% of its health.
Heracross's defence was lowered.
Heracross's special defence was lowered.
Gliscor's leftovers restored its health a little!
Gliscor restored 6% of its health.
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Gliscor used Ice Fang.
A critical hit!
Heracross lost 28% of its health.
Heracross used Close Combat.
It's not very effective...
Gliscor lost 42% of its health.
Heracross's defence was lowered.
Heracross's special defence was lowered.
Gliscor's leftovers restored its health a little!
Gliscor restored 6% of its health.
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Gliscor used Roost.
Gliscor restored 50% of its health.
Heracross used Close Combat.
Gliscor lost 95% of its health.
p i c k l e s's Gliscor fainted.
Heracross's defence was lowered.
Heracross's special defence was lowered.
Meh, there goes my physical wall, should've used AA over Ice Fang, although then I would have a problem with Garchomp
Score: 4 - 6 < Not looking good:/
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p i c k l e s switched in Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).
TomTom switched in Cresselia (lvl 100 Cresselia ?).
Pointed stones dug into Cresselia.
Cresselia lost 12% of its health.
Metagross used Explosion.
Cresselia lost 61% of its health.
p i c k l e s's Metagross fainted.
Cresselia's reflect wore off!
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.
Gah! There goes meta when I was trying to boom the thing I was having a problem with, a.k.a. Hera
Score: 3 - 6 < Ok, how am I supposed to win this?
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p i c k l e s switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Cresselia used Moonlight.
Cresselia restored 50% of its health.
Blissey used Ice Beam.
Cresselia lost 13% of its health.
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.
Of course, they just heal away the damage...
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p i c k l e s switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Cresselia used Reflect.
A barrier was formed!
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.
Go Heatran! Go Heatran (He helps me alot later on)
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TomTom switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
Pointed stones dug into Infernape.
Infernape lost 12% of its health.
Heatran used Earth Power.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
Infernape lost 130% of its health.
TomTom's Infernape fainted.
Huzza for the prdict!
Score: 3 - 5 < Still, I'm gonna lose
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TomTom switched in Metagross (lvl 100 Metagross).
Pointed stones dug into Metagross.
Metagross lost 6% of its health.
p i c k l e s: yay for predict
Heatran used Flamethrower.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
Metagross lost 164% of its health.
TomTom's Metagross fainted.
Two haxy crits(they're so smexy)
Score: 3 - 4 < Hey! Things are looking up now!
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TomTom: wow
TomTom: haqs
p i c k l e s: lol
TomTom switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Pointed stones dug into Blissey.
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
p i c k l e s: wait
p i c k l e s: I didn't even notice that they were crits
Heatran used Earth Power.
Blissey lost 10% of its health.
Blissey used Thunder Wave.
Heatran is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
Hah! You think a little para is going to hurt my Heatran? Pffff
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TomTom: i had shuca Wtf? I used flamethrower... errr
TomTom: but u cirt
p i c k l e s switched in Milotic (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Milotic lost 27% of its health.
Milotic's leftovers restored its health a little!
Milotic restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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Milotic used Hypnosis.
Blissey fell asleep!
Blissey is fast asleep!
Blissey's reflect wore off!
Milotic's leftovers restored its health a little!
Milotic restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
Yay! Blissey switches out nao!
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TomTom switched in Cresselia (lvl 100 Cresselia ?).
Pointed stones dug into Cresselia.
Cresselia lost 12% of its health.
p i c k l e s switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.
Double switch, don't know what I was doing there
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TomTom switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Salamence's intimidate cut Heatran's attack!
Pointed stones dug into Salamence.
Salamence lost 25% of its health.
Heatran used Flamethrower.
It's not very effective...
Salamence lost 24% of its health.
Salamence was hurt by its burn!
Salamence lost 12% of its health.
I know, I should've used something else, but flamethrower was all I had really
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Salamence used Hydro Pump.
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 74% of its health.
Heatran is paralysed! It can't move!
Salamence was hurt by its burn!
Salamence lost 12% of its health.
Heatran's leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran restored 6% of its health.
Hah! Look at that... even after a special mence Hydro Pump he still has 32%... told you he pwnz(well I didn't actually tell you...)
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p i c k l e s switched in Milotic (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Salamence used Hydro Pump.
It's not very effective...
Milotic lost 23% of its health.
Salamence was hurt by its burn!
Salamence lost 12% of its health.
Milotic's leftovers restored its health a little!
Milotic restored 6% of its health.
Bulky water Ftw! And he sucks since he didn't see that one coming
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Salamence used Hydro Pump.
It's not very effective...
Milotic lost 25% of its health.
Milotic used Recover.
Milotic restored 50% of its health.
Salamence was hurt by its burn!
Salamence lost 12% of its health.
TomTom's Salamence fainted.
Milotic's leftovers restored its health a little!
Milotic restored 6% of its health.
How much HP do I have after two hydro pumps? 100%! Also, remember that burn? It KO'd the 'mence.
Score: 3 - 3 < FTW~!
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p i c k l e s: stata stall ftw!
TomTom switched in Cresselia (lvl 100 Cresselia ?).
Pointed stones dug into Cresselia.
Cresselia lost 12% of its health.
p i c k l e s: XD
Cresselia used Charge Beam.
It's super effective!
Milotic lost 22% of its health.
Milotic used Hypnosis.
Cresselia fell asleep!
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.
Milotic's leftovers restored its health a little!
Milotic restored 6% of its health.
Yay for sleeping beauty(Cress)
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TomTom switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Pointed stones dug into Heracross.
Heracross lost 12% of its health.
Milotic used Ice Beam.
Heracross lost 29% of its health.
Milotic's leftovers restored its health a little!
Milotic restored 6% of its health.
Hah! wait, no... only 29%? pfff
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Milotic used Ice Beam.
Heracross lost 26% of its health.
TomTom's Heracross fainted.
Milotic's leftovers restored its health a little!
Milotic restored 6% of its health.
Score: 3 - 2
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TomTom switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Pointed stones dug into Blissey.
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
p i c k l e s: para ftw His Hera was para'd and it really helped me
p i c k l e s switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Blissey used Thunder Wave.
Blissey is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
Double bliss, anyone smell a stall war?
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*unimportance occured here*
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p i c k l e s: hehe
TomTom switched in Cresselia (lvl 100 Cresselia ?).
Pointed stones dug into Cresselia.
Cresselia lost 12% of its health.
p i c k l e s switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.
Heatran's leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran restored 6% of its health.
Back to Cress vs. Heatran again
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TomTom switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Pointed stones dug into Blissey.
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
Heatran used Rest.
Heatran fell asleep!
Heatran restored 62% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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TomTom switched in Cresselia (lvl 100 Cresselia ?).
Pointed stones dug into Cresselia.
Cresselia lost 12% of its health.
Heatran is fast asleep!
Heatran used Sleep Talk.
Heatran used Flamethrower.
Cresselia lost 32% of its health.
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.
Yay! correct move ftw!
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Cresselia is fast asleep!
Heatran is fast asleep!
Heatran used Sleep Talk.
Heatran used Rest.
But it failed!
Cresselia's leftovers restored its health a little!
Cresselia restored 6% of its health.
Boo! wrong move not ftw
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Cresselia is fast asleep!
Heatran woke up!
Heatran used Flamethrower.
Cresselia lost 33% of its health.
TomTom's Cresselia fainted.
Score: 3 - 1 < OMG! 3 - 6 to 3 - 1...
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*unimportance*
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p i c k l e s switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Blissey lost 15% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
Bliss stall war FTW!
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*Bliss stall war... I'll let you read it if you PM me and want to :)*
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p i c k l e s switched in Milotic (lvl 100 Milotic ?).
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Milotic lost 27% of its health.
Milotic's leftovers restored its health a little!
Milotic restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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*turns*
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p i c k l e s switched in Heatran (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Heatran lost 26% of its health.
Heatran's leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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Heatran is fast asleep!
Heatran used Sleep Talk.
Heatran used Flamethrower.
Blissey lost 17% of its health.
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Heatran lost 26% of its health.
Heatran's leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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Heatran is fast asleep!
Heatran used Sleep Talk.
Heatran used Earth Power.
Blissey lost 10% of its health.
Blissey is paralysed! It can't move!
Heatran's leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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Heatran woke up!
Heatran used Flamethrower.
A critical hit!
Blissey lost 32% of its health.
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Heatran lost 26% of its health.
Heatran's leftovers restored its health a little!
Heatran restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
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*etc.*
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TomTom has left the room.
p i c k l e s wins!
Yay! he finally forfeited! and...
COMEBACK KID FTW!!!!!
And kids, the moral from this lesson is "Go jump in a river"...
And to conclude my comments, this was a test team... I suppose I shall be keeping it 'till it fails me, then I'll put it up on the RMT section, then you can steal it

PROPS:
- Heatran, for pwning
- Mismagius, for willing to sacrifice himself in order to bing the 'mence down
- The team, for working!

SLOPS:
- My opponent(period, end of sentence)
- Mismagius, for dieing the first round :(
- Myself, I did pretty terrible this match, and I could've probably gone out of this one 5 - 0 :/
- Gliscor, for being pretty much dead weight
 
You played very badly for most of the battle, especially at the beginning. I think that you only won due to the crits sadly. Not a great battle, but good warstory, except the comments are a bit short.
 
You played very badly for most of the battle, especially at the beginning. I think that you only won due to the crits sadly. Not a great battle, but good warstory, except the comments are a bit short.

Lol, I completely agree... yeah, I really do as that was what I was thinking, but it still made a good warstory which was why I posted it
 
Terrible warstory, imo. First of all, the battle was mediocre, and a mediocre battle never can become a decent warstory. Second of all, this war"story" was nothing more than a Shoddy log with "LOL, didn't see that one coming" and such. Fundamentally poor.
 
Not a great warstory, very little insight and mostly just log. You also got lucky with two different critical hits that helped save you.
 
comments weren't really that great. 'ftw' was used to describe everything and no real insights into what you were thinking. Ya and as noted, it was the 2 crits that gave you the win.
 
Yeah I pretty much agree with the above, but I don't think those two crits mattered that much. Actually I'd be surprised if those moves didn't OHKO normally.
 
Actually I'd be surprised if those moves didn't OHKO normally.
Uh, you can tell just by looking at the war'story' that they wouldn't have OHKOd. 65% w/o crit on Infernape, 82% w/o crit on Metagross. With a resttalk Heatran, even Metagross probably would have outsped and wrecked it with Earthquake.
 
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