U jellicent

[VictoryEra 300]

Hi everyone sorry I didn't updated my team sooner as I have been so busy this weekend but anyway I hope you enjoy my team

U Jellicent

　
Hydriegon

@ Choice Specs
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 Spa
Timid Nature
Dark Pluse
Draco meteor
Fire Blast
Superpower​

I liked Hydriegon before but now he's just plain awesome taking out everything with Draco meteor that doesn't resist it and he lasts a lot more now that he has the choice specs​

Jellicent

@ leftover
Evs: 252 HP / 252 SpD / 4 SpA
Clam Nature
Shadow Ball
Scald
recover
Ice beam​

I thought Jellicent was good before but now with EVs in HP and SpD coupled with the fact that he has recover now he's a menace that finds it very hard to die.​

Terrakion

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@ Choice Band
Ability: Justified
EVs: 252 Atk / 252 Spe / 4 SpD
Jolly nature
Close Combat
stone edge
x-scissor
Earthquake​

With this set Terrakion is almost unstoppable and sweeps an entire team without taking a single scratch. And Close combat gets a fair amount KOs also.​

Alakazam

@ Focus Band
Ability: Magic Guard
EVs: 252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 HP
Timid Nature
Psychic
Focus Blast
Hp Ice
Shadow ball​

I like alakazam so much better than Espeon I do not know why I never thought of him before. He survive a choice band outrage and bite back with hp ice which usually gets the KO.​

Lucario

@ Life orb
Ability: steadfast
Evs: 252 Atk/ 252 HP / 4 SpA
Lonely Nature
Bullet Punch
Close combat
Ice Punch
Extreme Speed​

I change sky uppercut to Close Combat and it works much better I have to say. I change dragon pulse to ice punch because it works so much better than dragon pulse.​

Gliscor

@Toxic Orb
Ability: Toxic Heal
EVs:v184 HP/ @252 Atk / 72 Spe
Adamant nature
Earthquake
Sword dance
Ice Fang
Protect​

I went with this set because I find it more effective. I have ice fang for the reason that I would not to switch out because I cant hit something because it has an immunity to ground such as flying in which case Ice fang can take them out​

The Team Again​

　

　
　
Thank you for reading this a second time I hope you enjoy it​

　

 

[Skarm™]

In not a long rater, so I'll just make this quick. Why so many gems? They only get a one time use, and they're not exactly "reliable". I'd suggest replacing Hydreigon's dark gem with an Expert Belt, Jellicents ghost gem with leftovers or a Choice Specs (since it's 4 attacks and no status or anything), and Espeon's psychic gem with a light clay. Light clay because I think Espeon should be a dual screener, because you seem weak to common attacks such as fighting moves. Sacred sword should be Close Combat because it doesn't give you enough power to make any real KOs, and Terrakion doesn't care about having a stat drop unless there's an opposing scarfer or priority user, in which case you'd switch out even without Close Combat. Gliscor should have a set of Toxic, Protect, EQ, and Ice Fang or roost or something. Run Hidden Power Ice over dragon pulse on lucario becuse it gives more coverage than dragon pulse while still doing the same function, mainly KOing dragons, but things like Landorus can be KOed, which seems like a huge threat to this team. Hope I helped :)

 

[JolteonX]

Hello, I think you have a nice team, and it has good synergy as well. However I want to help improve your team, and I'll give you a few tips to help your team.

It's good to see someone using hydreigon, it's such a good pokemon when it's played well. However as Skamory7 stated, you shouldn't use a dark gem on hydreigon as dark isn't that good of a STAB. In fact I think if you want raw power, you should put choice specs onto hydreigon. This would increase it's attacking power for all it's moves, and for more than one attack. I think it should be more of a wall breaker, so you also may want to use superpower over focus blast if you have trouble with the pink blobs (bliseey and chansey). Another change I'd suggest is dragon pulse to draco meteor Hyrdreigon is a pokemon that will force switches anyways,and the raw power draco meteor with specs from hydreigon will dent anything that dosen't resist, so the drop won't matter, but it's up to you on those last two points if it will fit your game style better.

Another thing is that your really not using gems as they should be, and on these pokemon they are inferior items. On jellicent i recommend leftovers over ghost gem. Leftovers will allow you to last longer will jellicent, making it a better special wall. if you do that, change the SPA EVs into SPD EVs. Jellicent makes a good special wall, so it would help your team.

Change steel gem on Lucario to life orb. This will increase the power of the rest of lucario's attacks and extremespeed as well. Change sky upper cut to close combat. Lucario is frail anyways, so drops won't matter much anyways, and the 35 more base power will make a difference. Plus fly and bounce are pretty rare in OU.

On Terrakoin, zen headbutt to earthquake I know you said you wanted to change x-scissor, however zen headbutt is less reliable than x-scissor and EQ should be on terrakoin anyways.

Now for espeon, your team has a speed issue. I think this needs to be resolved, or pokemon like specs keldeo in rain can destroy your team. I think you should change espeon to focus sash alakazam. Your team dosen't really need magic bounce support, and sash alakazam can outspeed a lot of the unboosted tier. Plus with focus sash it can at least take one hit as it can't take damage from entry hazards or status (look out for paralysis though). It can take down scarf terrakoin and keldeo on a switch in, and if they can't counter alakazam then they will lose pokemon.

Lastly on Gliscor, Change aqua tail to protect. Protect will allow gliscor to stall and heal. [Change acrobatics to swords dance. This will let gliscor set up on physical pokemon and potentialy sweep, plus acrobatic is useless without flying gem.


I'm sorry I had to rush in the end. I'll give you the alakazam set i reccomend. I hope I was able to help, even if only slightly!

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Alakazam (F) @ Focus Sash
Trait: Magic Guard
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Psychic
- Focus Blast
- Shadow Ball
- Hidden Power [Ice]

 

[VictoryEra 300]

Hi guys thanks for your feedback I made some changes and the reason why I had so many gem is I find it hard to find what item works well on a Pokémon and find myself using choice items and leftovers on everything so I thought I would try something different. Skamory7 instead of hp ice I used Ice punch on Lucario because I figured since his attacks up it works out better. JolteonX I changed dragon pulse to Draco meteor and focus blast to superpower like you suggested and I got to say I am loving how this Hydriegon plays. Also I changed Espeon to alakazam like you said and I think he does a much better job than Espeon thanks for that suggestion. And I took both your suggestions in changing scared sword to close combat and Zen Headbutt to earthquake and I have to say Terrakion is causing a lot more damage now. I also took up the Protect / sword dance / ice fang / earthquake on Gliscor. And I also changed sky uppercut to close combat as I found this useful too. And I also change Jellicent giga drain to protect and put a leftover on it and Change SpA EVs to SpD EVs and I have to say I thought he was good before but now you can imagined how much I love him now. And I want to thank you guys again for taking the time to give suggestion and help improve my team even more

 

[JolteonX]

Hi guys thanks for your feedback I made some changes and the reason why I had so many gem is I find it hard to find what item works well on a Pokémon and find myself using choice items and leftovers on everything so I thought I would try something different. Skamory7 instead of hp ice I used Ice punch on Lucario because I figured since his attacks up it works out better. JolteonX I changed dragon pulse to Draco meteor and focus blast to superpower like you suggested and I got to say I am loving how this Hydriegon plays. Also I changed Espeon to alakazam like you said and I think he does a much better job than Espeon thanks for that suggestion. And I took both your suggestions in changing scared sword to close combat and Zen Headbutt to earthquake and I have to say Terrakion is causing a lot more damage now. I also took up the Protect / sword dance / ice fang / earthquake on Gliscor. And I also changed sky uppercut to close combat as I found this useful too. And I also change Jellicent giga drain to protect and put a leftover on it and Change SpA EVs to SpD EVs and I have to say I thought he was good before but now you can imagined how much I love him now. And I want to thank you guys again for taking the time to give suggestion and help improve my team even more

Your welcome! If you don't mind, you should update your RMT, that way maybe I can spot some more things I can help you with, and it would help other raters rate your team as well.