Gen 1 Ubers Victreebel [Done]

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[OVERVIEW]
Victreebel finds a niche in RBY Ubers thanks to its decent Speed and access to Wrap, dual status moves in Sleep Powder and Stun Spore, and a strong STAB Razor Leaf. Wrap makes it tricky for paralyzed Pokemon to block sleep, as Victreebel can use Wrap on them for free chip damage. Wrap can also make Victreebel dangerous late-game, heavily punishing teams that allow paralysis to spread throughout their Pokemon, as well as teams with many slow Pokemon, such as Snorlax, Chansey, Exeggutor, and Rhydon. Victreebel also enjoys the lower usage Alakazam and Starmie have compared to OU, as outspeeding and paralyzing it is one of the most consistent ways to take it out.

However, Victreebel has several flaws that prevent it from being one of the top threats in the metagame. Wrap is only 85% accurate, which is troublesome, since Victreebel often needs to hit Wrap multiple times in a row, and one miss can get Victreebel paralyzed, effectively making it useless. Although its Speed is decent, it is still outsped by Mewtwo, Mew, Tauros, and Zapdos. This generally means Victreebel needs heavy paralysis support to function. Unparalyzed Mewtwo in particular is a terrible matchup for Victreebel, as it threatens both Thunder Wave and STAB Psychic. Mew carries Thunder Wave often, and Tauros threatens Body Slam paralysis. Victreebel is also completely blanked by Gengar, which is immune to Wrap and has a resistance to Razor Leaf. However, Victreebel still is able to threaten all of these Pokemon with status moves. Lastly, Victreebel faces competition from Pokemon like Exeggutor and Chansey as sleepers and from Dragonite as a wrapper.


[SET]
name: Wrap
move 1: Sleep Powder
move 2: Wrap
move 3: Stun Spore
move 4: Razor Leaf

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Description
=========
Sleep Powder in conjunction with Wrap makes Victreebel effective at forcing a foe to sleep. If a paralyzed Pokemon attempts to block Victreebel's Sleep Powder, then Victreebel can use Wrap to chip and force out the paralyzed foe and threaten sleep again. Victreebel's ability to push sleep past paralyzed Pokemon allows its teammates to spread paralysis before Victreebel lands Sleep Powder. Stun Spore allows Victreebel to spread paralysis after landing Sleep Powder, which is useful on faster foes such as Tauros and Mew. Razor Leaf lets Victreebel OHKO the Normal-resistant Rhydon and deal massive damage to Water-types, such as Starmie, Cloyster, and Slowbro. It is also a great tool at damaging neutral targets like Snorlax. Razor Leaf's near-guaranteed critical hit chance means it can bypass the Special boost from Mewtwo and Slowbro's Amnesia as well, although Victreebel should usually only do this if Mewtwo is already paralyzed and at low HP.

Victreebel generally has trouble switching in due to a poor defensive typing and fear of getting paralyzed. It most commonly finds entry on a double switch or a predicted recovery turn from Chansey, Mew, or paralyzed Mewtwo. This is still risky, though, as a missed prediction can result in Victreebel taking paralysis or heavy damage. Victreebel's easiest entry point is on a Pokemon using Rest, such as Snorlax or Slowbro. However, Rest on Snorlax is uncommon in Ubers, making this hard to come by. In dire situations, Victreebel can switch directly into Body Slam from Snorlax or Earthquake from Rhydon, but the paralysis chance of the former and heavy damage of the latter make this option a last resort.

Victreebel can use Wrap as a pivoting tool, switching out while the foe is immobilized so that Victreebel's teammates can hit the field safely. Though all of Victreebel's teammates appreciate being able to switch for free, those that have good offensive potential but trouble switching into moves, such as Tauros and Rhydon, benefit most heavily from this. Victreebel can also use Wrap's chip damage to get Pokemon into certain ranges for its teammates, such as getting Mewtwo into KO range of Snorlax's Self-Destruct, Water-types such as Starmie and Slowbro into KO range of Victreebel's own Razor Leaf, or Snorlax into KO range of +4 Mewtwo's Psychic.

Victreebel's best teammates are those that can spread paralysis throughout an opposing team, as this enables its Wrap antics. Thunder Wave variants of Mew and Mewtwo are great teammates for Victreebel, since their high damage output often forces the opponent's Mew or Mewtwo in, which they can then paralyze. Zapdos is also an effective paralysis spreader, making it a good teammate. Victreebel helps Zapdos against Rhydon; although Victreebel cannot directly switch in, its Razor Leaf threatens Rhydon immensely. Chansey is able to switch into Alakazam, Starmie, and unboosted Mewtwo and threaten paralysis, while Slowbro can switch into Mewtwo sets that lack Thunderbolt. Dragonite can be used with Victreebel for a more Wrap-dedicated teamstyle, allowing Victreebel and Dragonite to enable each other and tear apart paralyzed teams. However, it is important to note that using Victreebel and Dragonite together stacks weaknesses to Ice-type moves, so having teammates that alleviate this is important.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Victreebel has seen fringe use as a lead, as it outspeeds Exeggutor and Hypno leads while still having access to a reliable way to spread paralysis in Stun Spore, which other fast sleep leads like Jynx and Gengar don't have. However, Victreebel struggles against faster leads such as Jynx, Gengar, Zapdos, and Mewtwo, making this quite niche.

Victreebel can opt for a Swords Dance set, generally forgoing Wrap and Razor Leaf for Swords Dance and one of Body Slam or Hyper Beam. This set is able to put a foe to sleep then set up Swords Dance the next turn. If a faster foe, such as Mewtwo, tries to revenge kill this Victreebel set, it can sacrifice itself and use Stun Spore. However, this set is walled by Rhydon and Gengar, and Wrap is a huge part of Victreebel's viability, so it is difficult to justify dropping.


Checks and Counters
===================
**Mewtwo**: Mewtwo gives Victreebel immense trouble, dealing a minimum of 73.5% with Psychic and only being 5HKOed in return with Razor Leaf. Many Mewtwo sets also carry Thunder Wave, which ruins Victreebel. Although trading status with Mewtwo is generally a good trade for Victreebel, Mewtwo's 25.39% critical-hit rate as well as Sleep Powder and Stun Spore's poor accuracy means Victreebel can easily be KOed without landing a status move.

**Paralysis**: Once paralyzed, Victreebel is generally deadweight, as Wrap relies heavily on it outspeeding foes. This makes a Wrap miss fatal against foes with Thunder Wave, such as Chansey. Even if the foe is also paralyzed, a paralyzed Victreebel's Wrap accuracy is effectively 63.75%, which is extremely unreliable considering Wrap needs to hit multiple times in a row.

**Faster Pokemon**: Since Wrap relies heavily on Victreebel outspeeding a foe, faster Pokemon such as Zapdos, Alakazam, Jynx, Mewtwo, and Mew give Victreebel trouble. Although Victreebel can threaten them with Stun Spore, many faster Pokemon can paralyze Victreebel back, preventing it from taking advantage of Wrap. Although uncommon, Articuno deserves a special mention, as it is great not only against Victreebel but also its common teammates, such as Dragonite and mono-Earthquake Thunder Wave Mew.

**Gengar**: Gengar is immune to Wrap and takes pitiful damage from Razor Leaf, making it a hard counter to Victreebel. However, Gengar hates getting paralyzed by Stun Spore, and Victreebel can still use Wrap to pivot on Gengar.

**Ice-type Coverage**: Ice-type moves run rampant in RBY Ubers, which Victreebel does not enjoy. Although it can comfortably wrap foes like Chansey, it has trouble switching in due to the threat of Ice Beam. This also makes Victreebel's matchup with Cloyster quite swingy. Although Victreebel 2HKOes it with Razor Leaf, Cloyster Speed ties with and 2HKOes it in return with Blizzard. Using Wrap on a paralyzed Pokemon like Articuno is also risky, since Victreebel gets hit hard by Blizzard if it misses.

**Rhydon**: If Victreebel is running a Swords Dance set that lacks Razor Leaf, it is walled by Rhydon. However, the threat of Razor Leaf means the opponent will not send Rhydon in on Victreebel until all of its moves are revealed. Rhydon can also help PP stall Wrap if necessary thanks to its resistance to the move, though a Wrap miss is bad for Rhydon, since Victreebel can follow up with Razor Leaf.

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[OVERVIEW]

Victreebel is able to carve out a niche in RBY Ubers thanks to its decent Speed and movepool—notably having access to Wrap, dual status in Sleep Powder and Stun Spore, a strong Razor Leaf, and Swords Dance. Wrap allows Victrebel to push Sleep past paralyzed Pokemon, and can also make Victreebel dangerous in endgames, heavily punishing teams that allow paralysis to spread throughout their Pokemon. (indicate which Pokemon do you punish exactly) Victreebel's Speed lets it outpace many tier staples, such as Snorlax, Chansey, Exeggutor, and Rhydon. Victreebel also enjoys the lower usage Alakazam and Starmie have compared to OU, as outspeeding and paralyzing it is one of the most consistent ways to take it out.

However, Victreebel has several flaws that prevent it from being one of the top threats in the metagame. Wrap is only 85% accurate, making Victreebel somewhat unreliable, and one Wrap miss can get it paralyzed, effectively making it useless. Although its Speed is decent, it is still outsped by Mewtwo, Mew, Tauros, and Zapdos. This generally means Victreebel needs heavy paralysis support to function. Unparalyzed Mewtwo in particular is a terrible matchup for Victreebel as it threatens both Thunder Wave and STAB Psychic. Mew also carries Thunder Wave often, and Tauros threatens Body Slam paralysis (I'm unsure if this is really a problem. Paralyzing / Sleeping Tauros is a net positive for Vic, even if Vic is paralyzed). Victreebel is also completely blanked by Gengar which is immune to Wrap and has a 4x resistance to Razor Leaf. However, Victreebel still is able to threaten all of the aforementioned Pokemon with status moves. Victreebel also faces competition with Dragonite for a Wrap user. Dragonite lacks a sleep-inducing move but has Agility and a valuable immunity to Ground-type moves, allowing it to completely wall certian certain Mew sets (you can also mention that Dragonite have access to Thunder Wave, which is an accurate paralysis spreading tool, compare to Stun Spore's unreliable accuracy). Victreebel and Dragonite can also work together on dedicated Wrap teams, as they can both spread paralysis and benefit from paralysis support. (First, you're stating that both are in competition, but now you're saying that they can work together? Something is unclear here. I'd rather say that, compare to Dragonite, Vic lacks certain tools, but saying that they're in competition, while I'd not run any of them outside of Wrap teams don't make sense to me.)

[SET]
name: Wrap
move 1: Sleep Powder
move 2: Wrap
move 3: Stun Spore (You mention Swords Dance in the overview, only having it as an OO sounds weird)
move 4: Razor Leaf

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Description
=========
Sleep Powder in conjunction with Wrap makes Victreebel effective at forcing sleep onto a foe. If a paralyzed Pokemon attempts to block Victreebel's Sleep Powder, Victreebel can use Wrap, chipping and forcing out the paralyzed foe, allowing it to threaten sleep again. Stun Spore allows Victreebel to spread paralysis after landing sleep, which is useful on faster foes such as Tauros and Mew. Razor Leaf is Victreebel's strongest STAB move, letting it OHKO the Normal-resistant Rhydon and deal massive damage to Water-types, such as Starmie, Cloyster, and Slowbro. Razor Leaf's near-guaranteed critical hit chance means it can bypass the Special boost from Amnesia Mewtwo and Slowbro as well, although Victreebel should only generally do this if Mewtwo is already paralyzed and at low HP. (You can also mention that it's its most reliable tool to damage Snorlax. I want a mention of Swords Dance there with a mention of its cleaning potential if everything is paralyzed if you decide to keep the move in the overview.)

Victreebel can also use Wrap as a pivoting tool, where it uses Wrap on a foe and switches out as the foe is still immobilized. This allows Pokemon with good offensive potential but trouble switching into moves, such as Tauros and Rhydon, to hit the field safely. (I would reword that sentence to mention that it allows a safe pivoting in general, and particularly on Tauros / Rhydon. But the thing is, this applies to numerous Pokemon) Victreebel can also use Wrap's chip damage to get Pokemon into certain ranges for its teammates. For example, Snorlax's Self-Destruct misses out on a KO on Mewtwo, doing a maximum of 92%. However, if Victreebel uses Wrap to chip Mewtwo's HP, then pivot to Snorlax, Mewtwo is now in Self-Destruct KO range. (this needs to be reworded to be a bit more general, yes this is a good example, but you can expand this to other calcs. For example, Victreebel's own Razor Leaf against Waters, or +4 M2's Psychic vs. Snorlax)

Victreebel's best teammates are those that can spread paralysis throughout an opposing team, as this enables Victreebel's Wrap antics. Thunder Wave variants of Mew and Mewtwo are great teammates for Victreebel as they are fantastic at spreading paralysis, since their high damage output often forces the opponent's Mew or Mewtwo in, which they can then paralyze. Zapdos is also an effective paralysis spreader, making it a good teammate. Victreebel also helps Zapdos against Rhydon; although Victreebel cannot directly switch in, its Razor Leaf threatens Rhydon immensely. Dragonite can also be used with Victreebel for a more Wrap-dedicated teamstyle, allowing Victreebel and Dragonite to enable each other and tear apart paralyzed teams.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Victreebel has seen fringe use as a lead, as it outspeeds Exeggutor and Hypno leads while still having access to a reliable way to spread paralysis in Stun Spore, which other fast sleep leads like Jynx and Gengar don't have. However, Victreebel struggles against faster leads such as Jynx, Gengar, Zapdos, and Mewtwo, making this quite Niche.

Victreebel can also opt for a Swords Dance set, generally forgoing Wrap and Razor Leaf for Swords Dance and one of Body Slam or Hyper Beam. This set is able to land Sleep on a foe, and then set up Swords Dance the next turn. It a faster foe, such as Mewtwo, tries to revenge kill it, it can then sacrifice itself and use Stun Spore. However, this set is walled by Rhydon and Gengar, and Wrap is a huge part of Victreebel's viability so it is difficult to justify dropping. (this needs to be either its own set, or completely forgo Swords Dance in the overview.)


Checks and Counters
===================
**Paralysis**: Once paralyzed, Victreebel is generally deadweight, as Wrap relies heavily on outspeeding the opponent. Even if the foe is also paralyzed, a paralyzed Victreebel's Wrap accuracy is effectively 63.75%, which is extremely unreliable considering Wrap needs to hit multiple times. This also makes a Wrap miss fatal against foes with Thunder Wave, such as Chansey.

**Faster Pokemon**: Since Wrap relies heavily on outspeeding a foe, faster Pokemon such as Zapdos, Mewtwo, and Mew give Victreebel trouble. Although Victreebel can threaten them with Stun Spore, many faster Pokemon (RC) such as Zapdos, Mewtwo, and Mew (RC) can paralyze Victreebel back, prevening it from taking advantage of Wrap. Even if Mewtwo is not using Thunder Wave, a critical hit or boosted Psychic OHKOes Victreebel outright (RP) (Mewtwo needs its own bullet point, it's one of the most threatening Pokemon for Vic as long as it's not paralyzed.)

(I want a bullet on Ice-type coverage there. Many mons run them to fish freeze, and Vic is a subsequent victim of that.)

**Gengar**: Gengar is immune to Wrap and takes up to 17.6% pitiful damage ( the exact damage calc is irrelevant here) from Razor Leaf, making it a hard counter to Victreebel. Gengar does hate getting paralyed by Stun Spore, though, and Victreebel can still use Wrap to pivot on Gengar.

**Rhydon**: If Victreebel is running a Swords Dance set that lacks Razor Leaf, it is walled by Rhydon. However, the threat of Razor leaf means the opponent will not send Rhydon in on Victreebel until all of its moves are revealed. Rhydon can also help PP stall Wrap if nessecary due necessary thanks to its resistance to the move, though a Wrap miss is bad for Rhydon since Victreebel can follow up with Razor Leaf. (AP)

(I want a bullet on Alakazam there. It's rare but it makes your life miserable. You could also mention Articuno, which is terrible for Vic, but also its common teammates in Wrap teams.)

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implemented tho i have a couple comments

Tauros threatens Body Slam paralysis (I'm unsure if this is really a problem. Paralyzing / Sleeping Tauros is a net positive for Vic, even if Vic is paralyzed).
I think this is important since if Vic's plan is to use wrap lategame, and its paralyzed, it can no longer sweep. Trading tauros for vic is generally good for the vic user yes but if ur plan is to win with vic then the plan no longer works once u take para.

Victreebel and Dragonite can also work together on dedicated Wrap teams, as they can both spread paralysis and benefit from paralysis support. (First, you're stating that both are in competition, but now you're saying that they can work together? Something is unclear here. I'd rather say that, compare to Dragonite, Vic lacks certain tools, but saying that they're in competition, while I'd not run any of them outside of Wrap teams don't make sense to me.)
Diff teambuilding styles probably but I run solo-vic and solo-nite a good amount, probably more than I run both together ngl, so my idea here was to mention that they both compete for a teamslot, but can also be used together. If I need to word this point better lmk

(You can also mention that it's its most reliable tool to damage Snorlax. I want a mention of Swords Dance there with a mention of its cleaning potential if everything is paralyzed if you decide to keep the move in the overview.)
Rleaf is Vic's most reliable tool to damage 80% of the tier so I don't see why Snorlax has to be singled out in particular here.

(I want a bullet on Alakazam there. It's rare but it makes your life miserable. You could also mention Articuno, which is terrible for Vic, but also its common teammates in Wrap teams.)
I added Zam and Cuno both to Faster Pokemon

(I want a bullet on Ice-type coverage there. Many mons run them to fish freeze, and Vic is a subsequent victim of that.)
I'm not sure if this is necessary. Half of Pokemon with that typically run Ice-type moves (mewtwo, cuno, tauros, starmie) have been mentioned in other categories and the other half (Chansey, Amnelax, Cloyster) I feel weird calling Victreebel checks since they are slower and just get wrapped by it, or in cloys case ties and gets destroyed by rleaf

I also decided to keep SD in OOs, it's much more niche compared to the standard wrapper, and I removed it from the overview accordingly.
 
Diff teambuilding styles probably but I run solo-vic and solo-nite a good amount, probably more than I run both together ngl, so my idea here was to mention that they both compete for a teamslot, but can also be used together. If I need to word this point better lmk
Yeah, I think this needs a little bit of rephrasing. I see what you mean, but I'd like to be sure that the reader will understand that they can work together, but if run as solo wrap, they're in competition.

Rleaf is Vic's most reliable tool to damage 80% of the tier so I don't see why Snorlax has to be singled out in particular here.
Snorlax is 2-3rd best mon of the tier, so mentioning it as a thing Vic threatens with Razor Leaf felt appropriate to me (esp since, altho rare, rest lax will try to use wrap to wake up). But you can let it that way otherwise, it's only a detail.

I'm not sure if this is necessary. Half of Pokemon with that typically run Ice-type moves (mewtwo, cuno, tauros, starmie) have been mentioned in other categories and the other half (Chansey, Amnelax, Cloyster) I feel weird calling Victreebel checks since they are slower and just get wrapped by it, or in cloys case ties and gets destroyed by rleaf
This can be added as a last CC point. Go into the way of "Ice moves deals massive damage, so be careful when hard switching Vic on stuff like Chansey / Lax and don't go hard on m2 / cuno etc.". Given the prevalence of the coverage, I still think it's important to have it mentioned.

Rest is good! QC 1/2 when implemented, excellent job gastlies :tyke:

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It's nice that they let me on the Ubers QC Team.

Victreebel is able to carve out a niche in RBY Ubers thanks to its decent Speed and movepool—notably having access to Wrap, dual status in Sleep Powder and Stun Spore and a strong Razor Leaf.
No need for em dash here. Just a comma makes a lot more sense. You also should have a comma after Stun Spore.

Wrap allows Victrebel to push Sleep past paralyzed Pokemon, and can also make Victreebel dangerous in endgames, heavily punishing teams that allow paralysis to spread throughout their Pokemon, as well as slow Pokemon, such as Snorlax, Exeggutor, and Rhydon.
I'm pretty sure I know what "push Sleep past paralyzed Pokemon" means, but that is an admittedly very opaque phrase to a new or even experienced player. Also, the first "Victreebel" is misspelled.

Victreebel's Speed lets it outpace many tier staples, such as Snorlax, Chansey, Exeggutor, and Rhydon.
You basically just said all this in the last sentence. Just add Chansey to the last sentence and you're good.

However, Victreebel still is able to threaten all of the aforementioned Pokemon with status moves.
I'm not going to harp on grammar here (there are a lot of missing commas in the previous sentences), but "all of the aforementioned" can really just be "these," and no meaning is lost.

On traditional teams, Victreebel faces competition with Dragonite for a team slot. Dragonite lacks a sleep-inducing move but has Agility and a valuable immunity to Ground-type moves, allowing it to completely wall certain Mew sets. Dragonite also has Thunder Wave, making it more reliable at spreading paralysis than Victreebel, which has to rely on Stun Spore. There are also teams that opt to use Victreebel and Dragonite together; these teams opt to spread paralysis throughout the opposing team, then use Victreebel and Dragonite to clean up from Wrap. Victreebel and Dragonite work very well together on these dedicated Wrap teams, as they can both spread paralysis and benefit from paralysis support.
I'm so lost here. This paragraph starts as a typical drawbacks paragraph, as many final introduction paragraphs do, and then abruptly transitions into a specific team analysis. What the heck is a "traditional team?" To me, by running Victreebel or Dragonite, your team is already nonstandard. And even so, I think Victreebel is a much more natural inclusion on a so-called traditional team, assuming I'm thinking of the same thing as you, because it is still a sleep-inducer, which most teams will simply need. Meanwhile, Dragonite is being used for Wrap or a hard callout on a certain Mew set, both of which are not exactly automatic requirements for an Ubers team. Why does the Introduction have a whole section on multi-Wrap builds? We haven't even covered these "traditional teams" yet. And, in truth, team structure doesn't really belong in this part of the analysis. Unless a Pokemon's ability to function is completely reliant on a certain teammate, I really think this sort of information is better discussed in the Set Description, or even Other Options. If you want to point something out at all, then I think the most reasonable thing to say at this point is that Victreebel faces competition from other Pokemon, like Exeggutor as a sleep-inducer and Dragonite (and Cloyster, I guess) as a partial-trapper.

Sleep Powder in conjunction with Wrap makes Victreebel effective at forcing sleep onto a foe. If a paralyzed Pokemon attempts to block Victreebel's Sleep Powder, Victreebel can use Wrap, chipping and forcing out the paralyzed foe, allowing it to threaten sleep again.
So I see you explain "push Sleep past paralyzed Pokemon" here.

[SET COMMENTS]
Here's some other Team Options stuff that I think could be worth meshing in. Mostly up to you though, because I think you'll know the meta in this regard better than me.
Swords Dance Thunder Wave Mew has a pretty symbiotic relationship with Victreebel, as both really want Mewtwo paralyzed and are pretty good at getting it done for one another, ideally at the cost of at most one of them actually taking a Thunder Wave from Mewtwo. Though this structure could make certain matchups like Gengar or Zapdos a little tricky.
I think Slowbro has fallen off quite a bit, but I do maintain that it is very good at paralyzing key targets, as it is can muscle through a lot of Pokemon that like to absorb paralysis. This might end up being a somewhat awkward build though, and again, Zapdos exists.
Also, I don't think it would hurt to give a little more detail on Victreebel's common entry points (when and against what), as getting Victreebel in to actually do something is kind of the hardest part of the user manual. Also explaining its appeal over other sleep-inducers like Exeggutor and even Sing Chansey might be nice. From the analysis, I understand what Victreebel has going for it, but I'm not sure if it's totally clear when and why I want it's strengths. Perhaps that's a little extra-curricular though.

**Rhydon**: If Victreebel is running a Swords Dance set that lacks Razor Leaf, it is walled by Rhydon. However, the threat of Razor leaf means the opponent will not send Rhydon in on Victreebel until all of its moves are revealed. Rhydon can also help PP stall Wrap if necessary thanks to its resistance to the move, though a Wrap miss is bad for Rhydon since Victreebel can follow up with Razor Leaf.
This should probably be the last entry.

This analysis has a lot of typos, misused punctuation, improper capitalization, and needlessly verbose sentences. I'd really recommend giving it another quick pass for that too.

We can talk on Discord about any disagreements and finer points. Just ping me when you're all done and I'll probably approve. The clarity and order of the information comprise the biggest issue. The actual content seems largely okay, especially for a relatively uncommon and straight-forward Pokemon like Victreebel.
 
Little stuff.

Victreebel finds a niche
Tsk tsk.

Wrap makes it tricky for paralyzed pokemon to block Sleep, as Victreebel outspeeds the paralyzed foe, letting it use Wrap for free chip damage. Wrap can also make Victreebel dangerous in endgames, heavily punishing teams that allow paralysis to spread throughout their Pokemon, as well as slow Pokemon, such as Snorlax, Chansey, Exeggutor, and Rhydon.
"Wrap makes it tricky for paralyzed Pokemon to block Sleep, as Victreebel can use Wrap to immobilize the foe and accrue free chip damage. Wrap can also make Victreebel dangerous in endgames, heavily punishing teams that allow paralysis to spread throughout their Pokemon, as well as those that rely on slow Pokemon, such as Snorlax, Chansey, Exeggutor, and Rhydon."

If a paralyzed Pokemon attempts to block Victreebel's Sleep Powder, Victreebel can use Wrap, chipping and forcing out the paralyzed foe, allowing it to threaten sleep again.
"If a paralyzed Pokemon attempts to block Victreebel's Sleep Powder, then it can use Wrap to chip and force out the paralyzed foe and threaten sleep again."
The commas and oscillation between active and passive voice is absolutely killing me, I'm sorry. "It can" is so much easier to follow than "this enables it to," especially when the subject of the clause is the Pokemon (Victreebel), not the move (Wrap).

Victreebel generally has trouble switching in due to a poor defensive typing and fear of getting paralyzed. It most commonly finds entry on a double switch or predicted recovery turn from Chansey, Mew, or paralyzed Mewtwo. This is still risky, though, as a missed prediction can result in Victreebel taking paralysis or heavy damage. Victreebel's easiest entry point is on a Pokemon using Rest, such as Snorlax or Slowbro. However, Rest on Snorlax is uncommon in Ubers, making this hard to come by. In dire situations, Victreebel can switch directly into Body Slam from Snorlax or Earthquake from Rhydon, but the paralysis chance of the former and heavy damage of the latter make this option a last resort.
Very good additions. This could arguably be a standalone paragraph.

Victreebel can also use Wrap as a pivoting tool, where it uses Wrap on a foe and switches out as the foe is still immobilized, allowing Victreebel's teammates to hit the field safely.
"Victreebel can use Wrap as a pivoting tool, switching out while the foe is immobilized so Victreebel's teammates can hit the field safely."
Same thing. No need for "also" at the start because your previous section is no longer about Wrap and this is a new paragraph.

**Ice-Type Coverage**: Ice-Type moves run rampant in RBY Ubers, which Victreebel does not enjoy. Although Victreebel can comfortably use Wrap on foes like Chansey, it has trouble switching in due to the threat of Ice Beam. This also makes Victreebel's matchup with Cloyster quite swingy. Although Victreebel 2HKOes with Razor Leaf, Cloyster speed ties and 2HKOes in return with Blizzard. Clicking Wrap on a paralyzed Pokemon like Articuno is also risky since it gets hit hard by Blizzard if it misses.
Not sure if this necessarily belongs here, but Jynx is also a tricky Pokemon for Victreebel on virtually all fronts but isn't really present in this analysis.

I think all the content issues are fixed, so this is a QC 2/2 from me. Very nice.
 
Victreebel finds a niche in RBY Ubers thanks to its decent Speed and movepool, having access to Wrap, dual status in Sleep Powder and Stun Spore, and a strong STAB Razor Leaf. Wrap makes it tricky for paralyzed pokemon Pokemon to block Sleep, as Victreebel can use Wrap on paralyzed pokemon them for free chip damage. Wrap can also make Victreebel dangerous in endgames late-game, heavily punishing teams that allow paralysis to spread throughout their Pokemon, as well as slow slowing Pokemon, such as Snorlax, Chansey, Exeggutor, and Rhydon. Victreebel also enjoys the lower usage Alakazam and Starmie have compared to OU, as outspeeding and paralyzing it is one of the most consistent ways to take it out.

However, Victreebel has several flaws that prevent it from being one of the top threats in the metagame. Wrap is only 85% accurate, which is troublesome, (AC) since Victreebel often needs to hit Wrap multiple times in a row, and one miss can get Victreebel paralyzed, effectively making it useless. Although Victreebel's its Speed is decent, it is still outsped by Mewtwo, Mew, Tauros, and Zapdos. This generally means Victreebel needs heavy paralysis support to function. Unparalyzed Mewtwo in particular is a terrible matchup for Victreebel, (AC) as it threatens both Thunder Wave and STAB Psychic. Mew also carries Thunder Wave often, and Tauros threatens Body Slam paralysis. Victreebel is also completely blanked by Gengar, which is immune to Wrap and has a resistance to Razor Leaf. However, Victreebel still is able to threaten all of these Pokemon with status moves. Lastly, Victreebel faces competition from Pokemon like Exeggutor and Chansey as sleepers and from Dragonite as a Wrap user. you can user "wrapper" or "wrap" (verb) in rby analyses if you want


[SET]
name: Wrap
move 1: Sleep Powder
move 2: Wrap
move 3: Stun Spore
move 4: Razor Leaf

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Description
=========
Sleep Powder in conjunction with Wrap makes Victreebel effective at forcing sleep onto a foe. If a paralyzed Pokemon attempts to block Victreebel's Sleep Powder, then it Victreebel can use Wrap to chip and force out the paralyzed foe and threaten sleep again. Victreebel's ability to push sleep past paralyzed Pokemon allows its teammates to spread paralysis before Victreebel lands sleep. Stun Spore allows Victreebel to spread paralysis after landing sleep, which is useful on faster foes such as Tauros and Mew. Razor Leaf is lets Victreebel's strongest STAB move, letting it OHKO the Normal-resistant Rhydon and deal massive damage to Water-types, such as Starmie, Cloyster, and Slowbro. It is also a great tool at damaging neutral targets like Snorlax. Razor Leaf's near-guaranteed critical hit critical-hit chance means it can bypass the Special boost from Amnesia Mewtwo and Slowbro Slowbro's Amnesia as well, although Victreebel should usually only generally do this if Mewtwo is already paralyzed and at low HP.

Victreebel generally has trouble switching in due to a poor defensive typing and fear of getting paralyzed. It most commonly finds entry on a double switch or predicted recovery turn from Chansey, Mew, or paralyzed Mewtwo. This is still risky, though, as a missed prediction can result in Victreebel taking paralysis or heavy damage. Victreebel's easiest entry point is on a Pokemon using Rest, such as Snorlax or Slowbro. However, Rest on Snorlax is uncommon in Ubers, making this hard to come by. In dire situations, Victreebel can switch directly into Body Slam from Snorlax or Earthquake from Rhydon, but the paralysis chance of the former and heavy damage of the latter make this option a last resort.

Victreebel can use Wrap as a pivoting tool, switching out while the foe is immobilized so Victreebel's teammates can hit the field safely. Though all of Victreebel's teammates appreciate being able to switch for free, those with good offensive potential but trouble switching into moves, such as Tauros and Rhydon, benefit most heavily from this. Victreebel can also use Wrap's chip damage to get Pokemon into certain ranges for its teammates, such as getting Mewtwo into KO range of Snorlax's Self-Destruct, Water-types such as Starmie and Slowbro into KO range of Victreebel's own Razor Leaf, or Snorlax into a KO range of +4 Mewtwo's Psychic from Mewtwo.

Victreebel's best teammates are those that can spread paralysis throughout an opposing team, as this enables Victreebel's its Wrap antics. Thunder Wave variants of Mew and Mewtwo are great teammates for Victreebel, (AC) since their high damage output often forces the opponent's Mew or Mewtwo in, which they can then paralyze. Zapdos is also an effective paralysis spreader, making it a good teammate. Victreebel also helps Zapdos against Rhydon; although Victreebel cannot directly switch in, its Razor Leaf threatens Rhydon immensely. Chansey is able to switch into Alakazam, Starmie, and unboosted Mewtwo and threaten paralysis, while Slowbro can switch into Mewtwo sets that lack Thunderbolt. Dragonite can also be used with Victreebel for a more Wrap-dedicated teamstyle, allowing Victreebel and Dragonite to enable each other and tear apart paralyzed teams. However, it is important to note that using Victreebel and Dragonite together stacks weaknesses to Ice-type moves, so having teammates that alleviate this is important.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Victreebel has seen fringe use as a lead, as it outspeeds Exeggutor and Hypno leads while still having access to a reliable way to spread paralysis in Stun Spore, which other fast sleep leads like Jynx and Gengar don't have. However, Victreebel struggles against faster leads such as Jynx, Gengar, Zapdos, and Mewtwo, making this quite niche.

Victreebel can also opt for a Swords Dance set, generally forgoing Wrap and Razor Leaf for Swords Dance and one of Body Slam or Hyper Beam. This set is able to land sleep on a foe, and then set up Swords Dance the next turn. It If a faster foe, such as Mewtwo, tries to revenge kill it this Victreebel set, it can then sacrifice itself and use Stun Spore. However, this set is walled by Rhydon and Gengar, and Wrap is a huge part of Victreebel's viability, (AC) so it is difficult to justify dropping.


Checks and Counters
===================
**Mewtwo**: Mewtwo gives Victreebel immense trouble, dealing a minimum of 73.5% with Psychic and only being 5HKOed in return with Razor Leaf. Many Mewtwo sets also carry Thunder Wave, (AC) which ruin ruins Victreebel. Although trading status with Mewtwo is generally a good trade for Victreebel, Mewtwo's 25.39% critical hit critical-hit rate as well as Sleep Powder and Stun Spore's poor accuracy mean means Victreebel can easily be KOed without landing a status move.

**Paralysis**: Once paralyzed, Victreebel is generally deadweight, as Wrap relies heavily on it outspeeding the opponent foes. This makes a Wrap miss fatal against foes with Thunder Wave, such as Chansey. Even if the foe is also paralyzed, a paralyzed Victreebel's Wrap accuracy is effectively 63.75%, which is extremely unreliable considering Wrap needs to hit multiple times in a row.

**Faster Pokemon**: Since Wrap relies heavily on Victreebel outspeeding a foe, faster Pokemon such as Zapdos, Alakazam, Jynx, Mewtwo, and Mew give Victreebel trouble. Although Victreebel can threaten them with Stun Spore, many faster Pokemon can paralyze Victreebel back, preventing it from taking advantage of Wrap. Although uncommon, Articuno deserves a special mention, (AC) as it is great not only great against Victreebel but also its common teammates, such as Dragonite and mono-Earthquake Thunder Wave Mew.

**Gengar**: Gengar is immune to Wrap and takes pitiful damage from Razor Leaf, making it a hard counter to Victreebel. However, Gengar hates getting paralyzed by Stun Spore, and Victreebel can still use Wrap to pivot on Gengar.

**Ice-type lowercase t Coverage**: Ice-type moves run rampant in RBY Ubers, which Victreebel does not enjoy. Although Victreebel it can comfortably use Wrap on wrap foes like Chansey, it has trouble switching in due to the threat of Ice Beam. This also makes Victreebel's matchup with Cloyster quite swingy. Although Victreebel 2HKOes it with Razor Leaf, Cloyster speed ties and 2HKOes in return with Blizzard. Clicking Using Wrap on a paralyzed Pokemon like Articuno is also risky, (AC) since it Victreebel gets hit hard by Blizzard if it misses.

**Rhydon**: If Victreebel is running a Swords Dance set that lacks Razor Leaf, it is walled by Rhydon. However, the threat of Razor leaf means the opponent will not send Rhydon in on Victreebel until all of its moves are revealed. Rhydon can also help PP stall Wrap if necessary thanks to its resistance to the move, though a Wrap miss is bad for Rhydon, (AC) since Victreebel can follow up with Razor Leaf.

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[OVERVIEW]
Victreebel finds a niche in RBY Ubers thanks to its decent Speed and movepool, having access to Wrap, dual status moves in Sleep Powder and Stun Spore, and a strong STAB Razor Leaf. Wrap makes it tricky for paralyzed Pokemon to block sleep, as Victreebel can use Wrap on them for free chip damage. Wrap can also make Victreebel dangerous late-game, heavily punishing teams that allow paralysis to spread throughout their Pokemon, as well as teams with many slow Pokemon, such as Snorlax, Chansey, Exeggutor, and Rhydon. Victreebel also enjoys the lower usage Alakazam and Starmie have compared to OU, as outspeeding and paralyzing it is one of the most consistent ways to take it out.

However, Victreebel has several flaws that prevent it from being one of the top threats in the metagame. Wrap is only 85% accurate, which is troublesome, since Victreebel often needs to hit Wrap multiple times in a row, and one miss can get Victreebel paralyzed, effectively making it useless. Although its Speed is decent, it is still outsped by Mewtwo, Mew, Tauros, and Zapdos. This generally means Victreebel needs heavy paralysis support to function. Unparalyzed Mewtwo in particular is a terrible matchup for Victreebel, as it threatens both Thunder Wave and STAB Psychic. Mew carries Thunder Wave often, and Tauros threatens Body Slam paralysis. Victreebel is also completely blanked by Gengar, which is immune to Wrap and has a resistance to Razor Leaf. However, Victreebel still is able to threaten all of these Pokemon with status moves. Lastly, Victreebel faces competition from Pokemon like Exeggutor and Chansey as sleepers and from Dragonite as a wrapper.


[SET]
name: Wrap
move 1: Sleep Powder
move 2: Wrap
move 3: Stun Spore
move 4: Razor Leaf

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Description
=========
Sleep Powder in conjunction with Wrap makes Victreebel effective at forcing sleep onto a foe a foe to sleep. If a paralyzed Pokemon attempts to block Victreebel's Sleep Powder, then Victreebel can use Wrap to chip and force out the paralyzed foe and threaten sleep again. Victreebel's ability to push sleep past paralyzed Pokemon allows its teammates to spread paralysis before Victreebel lands Sleep Powder. (changed to move instead of the status because it's the thing that needs to hit before it inflicts the status) Stun Spore allows Victreebel to spread paralysis after landing Sleep Powder, which is useful on faster foes such as Tauros and Mew. Razor Leaf lets Victreebel's Victreebel OHKO the Normal-resistant Rhydon and deal massive damage to Water-types, such as Starmie, Cloyster, and Slowbro. It is also a great tool at damaging neutral targets like Snorlax. Razor Leaf's near-guaranteed critical-hit critical hit chance means it can bypass the Special boost from Mewtwo and Slowbro's Amnesia as well, although Victreebel should usually only do this if Mewtwo is already paralyzed and at low HP.

Victreebel generally has trouble switching in due to a poor defensive typing and fear of getting paralyzed. It most commonly finds entry on a double switch or a predicted recovery turn from Chansey, Mew, or paralyzed Mewtwo. This is still risky, though, as a missed prediction can result in Victreebel taking paralysis or heavy damage. Victreebel's easiest entry point is on a Pokemon using Rest, such as Snorlax or Slowbro. However, Rest on Snorlax is uncommon in Ubers, making this hard to come by. In dire situations, Victreebel can switch directly into Body Slam from Snorlax or Earthquake from Rhydon, but the paralysis chance of the former and heavy damage of the latter make this option a last resort.

Victreebel can use Wrap as a pivoting tool, switching out while the foe is immobilized so that Victreebel's teammates can hit the field safely. Though all of Victreebel's teammates appreciate being able to switch for free, those with that have good offensive potential but trouble switching into moves, such as Tauros and Rhydon, benefit most heavily from this. Victreebel can also use Wrap's chip damage to get Pokemon into certain ranges for its teammates, such as getting Mewtwo into KO range of Snorlax's Self-Destruct, Water-types such as Starmie and Slowbro into KO range of Victreebel's own Razor Leaf, or Snorlax into KO range of +4 Mewtwo's Psychic.

Victreebel's best teammates are those that can spread paralysis throughout an opposing team, as this enables its Wrap antics. Thunder Wave variants of Mew and Mewtwo are great teammates for Victreebel, since their high damage output often forces the opponent's Mew or Mewtwo in, which they can then paralyze. Zapdos is also an effective paralysis spreader, making it a good teammate. Victreebel helps Zapdos against Rhydon; although Victreebel cannot directly switch in, its Razor Leaf threatens Rhydon immensely. Chansey is able to switch into Alakazam, Starmie, and unboosted Mewtwo and threaten paralysis, while Slowbro can switch into Mewtwo sets that lack Thunderbolt. Dragonite can be used with Victreebel for a more Wrap-dedicated teamstyle, allowing Victreebel and Dragonite to enable each other and tear apart paralyzed teams. However, it is important to note that using Victreebel and Dragonite together stacks weaknesses to Ice-type moves, so having teammates that alleviate this is important.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Victreebel has seen fringe use as a lead, as it outspeeds Exeggutor and Hypno leads while still having access to a reliable way to spread paralysis in Stun Spore, which other fast sleep leads like Jynx and Gengar don't have. However, Victreebel struggles against faster leads such as Jynx, Gengar, Zapdos, and Mewtwo, making this quite niche.

Victreebel can opt for a Swords Dance set, generally forgoing Wrap and Razor Leaf for Swords Dance and one of Body Slam or Hyper Beam. This set is able to land sleep on put a foe (RC) to sleep then set up Swords Dance the next turn. If a faster foe, such as Mewtwo, tries to revenge kill this Victreebel set, it can sacrifice itself and use Stun Spore. However, this set is walled by Rhydon and Gengar, and Wrap is a huge part of Victreebel's viability, so it is difficult to justify dropping.


Checks and Counters
===================
**Mewtwo**: Mewtwo gives Victreebel immense trouble, dealing a minimum of 73.5% with Psychic and only being 5HKOed in return with Razor Leaf. Many Mewtwo sets also carry Thunder Wave, which ruins Victreebel. Although trading status with Mewtwo is generally a good trade for Victreebel, Mewtwo's 25.39% critical-hit rate as well as Sleep Powder and Stun Spore's poor accuracy means Victreebel can easily be KOed without landing a status move.

**Paralysis**: Once paralyzed, Victreebel is generally deadweight, as Wrap relies heavily on it outspeeding foes. This makes a Wrap miss fatal against foes with Thunder Wave, such as Chansey. Even if the foe is also paralyzed, a paralyzed Victreebel's Wrap accuracy is effectively 63.75%, which is extremely unreliable considering Wrap needs to hit multiple times in a row.

**Faster Pokemon**: Since Wrap relies heavily on Victreebel outspeeding a foe, faster Pokemon such as Zapdos, Alakazam, Jynx, Mewtwo, and Mew give Victreebel trouble. Although Victreebel can threaten them with Stun Spore, many faster Pokemon can paralyze Victreebel back, preventing it from taking advantage of Wrap. Although uncommon, Articuno deserves a special mention, as it is great not only against Victreebel but also its common teammates, such as Dragonite and mono-Earthquake Thunder Wave Mew.

**Gengar**: Gengar is immune to Wrap and takes pitiful damage from Razor Leaf, making it a hard counter to Victreebel. However, Gengar hates getting paralyzed by Stun Spore, and Victreebel can still use Wrap to pivot on Gengar.

**Ice-type Coverage**: Ice-type moves run rampant in RBY Ubers, which Victreebel does not enjoy. Although it can comfortably wrap foes like Chansey, it has trouble switching in due to the threat of Ice Beam. This also makes Victreebel's matchup with Cloyster quite swingy. Although Victreebel 2HKOes it with Razor Leaf, Cloyster Speed ties with and 2HKOes it in return with Blizzard. Using Wrap on a paralyzed Pokemon like Articuno is also risky, since Victreebel gets hit hard by Blizzard if it misses.

**Rhydon**: If Victreebel is running a Swords Dance set that lacks Razor Leaf, it is walled by Rhydon. However, the threat of Razor Leaf means the opponent will not send Rhydon in on Victreebel until all of its moves are revealed. Rhydon can also help PP stall Wrap if necessary thanks to its resistance to the move, though a Wrap miss is bad for Rhydon, since Victreebel can follow up with Razor Leaf.

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