UU B/W team! please rate!!

[jrbrunior]

Hi guys! me and two friends are playing UU/NU gen battles in the B/W games. I've chosen gen 3, so i can choose from all the UU/NU pokes from hoenn, but with the new abilities and moves. We're going after the D/P tiers from smogon university, and for my friend who has gen 5 we've discussed the banned ones (i won't be facing ferrothorn :naughty:). Also, Stealth rocks are banned from our battle. Here's what i've come up with:

Sableye @ Leftovers
Prankster
Careful 252hp/120def/136spd
~Will-O-Wisp
~Recover
~Taunt
~Night Shade/Knock Off

Chimecho @ Leftovers
Bold 252hp/4def/252spd
~Heal bell
~Wish
~Thunder wave
~Psychic

Dusclops @ Eviolite
Pressure
Calm 252hp/80def/176spd
~Night shade
~Pain split
~Torment
~Protect

Caturne @ Choice Scarf
Water Absorb
Jolly/Adamant 4hp/252atk/252spe
~Sucker punch
~Seed bomb
~Drain punch
~Switcheroo

Milotic @ Leftovers
Marvel scale
Bold 252hp/252def/4spd
~Recover
~Surf
~Ice beam
~Dragon tail

Camerupt @ Life Orb
Solid Rock
Mild 40atk/252spa/216spe
~Rock polish
~Fire blast
~Earth power
~Explosion

I lead with sableye, because of the priority taunt or WoW. Don't know if i want night shade or knock off, opinions would be great.

Chimecho is obviously for support, put all Ev's in hp and spd, would it be better with def? thunder wave could be slashed.

My tormenting dusclops is just there to wall choicers and setup sweepers. torment and protect to keep him alive. gets owned by toxic, but chimecho taxes care of that.

Cacturne is there as my physical sweeper and can switcheroo his scarf to a wall or something. drain punch and sucker punch are needed to protect my three first from ghost and dark attacks.

I use Milotic to phase sweepers, and still be able to hit pretty hard as a tank.

Now this camerupt is kinda a team slot filler, but serves some good purposes: He is there as a special sweeper, and since i can switch pretty freely with him without stelth rocks, i plan on using him to get some water attacks fired at me, so Cacturne can come in safely and attempt sweep. He can explode when he feels ready for it.

Please rate my team and i would be really happy for some feedback on some stuff, like sableye's moves and if i should run jolly or adamant on cacturne (or choice scarf or band for that matter).

Thanks!!

 

[jrbrunior]

please, i need advice. also other items for chimecho, sableye and milotic. Thanks!

 

[Faladran]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which puts you in violation of the rule above. Please elaborate more on each team member - about 3 or 4 solid sentences per member is a good goal to reach for. The RMT archive contains some examples of well-written RMTs. If you fix your descriptions, PM me with the updates and I'll be happy to unlock your thread.