Vegeta, what does the scouter say about his power level?

IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAND!!!

I designed my team to counter and destroy other teams and to hit HARD. Everyone is a team player and is benificial to each other. After a long time planning out and researching this is what I came up with. Criticism is appriciated.

My team at a glance:
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Fear Me!
a.k.a. Weavile
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@Choice Band

Jolly / Pressure
36 HP / 252 Atk / 220 Spe
-Pursuit
-Ice Punch
-Brick Break
-Night Slash

The stndard Weavile but with 1 extra speed to outrun other standard Weaviles. This thing clears the path for Donphan to lay stealth rocks and it comes in handy later for revenge kills.
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Get That Shit Off My Turf!
a.k.a. Donphan
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@Leftovers

Impish / Sturdy
252 HP / 6 Atk / 252 Def
-Rapid Spin
-Earthquake
-Ice Shard
-Stealth Rock

My stealth rocker and rapid spinner. Gets in easy due to high defense and has power to pack a punch.
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Don't Let This Baton Pass OR ELSE!
a.k.a. Gliscor
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@Leftovers

Impish / Hyper Cutter
252 HP / 156 Atk / 96 Spe
-Agility
-Baton Pass
-Taunt
-Arial Ace

My baton passer. He opens doors for my whole team. Arial Ace over Earthquake for protection against Heracross and Breloom.
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OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAND!!!
a.k.a. Heracross
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@Flame Orb

Adamant / Guts
6 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
-Swords Dance
-Mega Horn
-Close Combat
-Facade

Wow. This thing is a beast. As soon as he sword dances he posesses over 1,100 attack! This thing can 1 hit a Skarmory with max defense and HP. Baton Pass speed to this and the battle is over. The only chance the enemy has against this is to kill it before it gains momentum or use a Focus Sash.
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You WILL Regret Not Having a Shed Shell!
a.k.a. Magnezone
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@Leftovers

Modest / Magnet Pull
168 HP / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
-Thunderbolt
-Hidden Power Ice
-Substitute
-Magnet Rise

The special attacker and steel trapper. Gets rid of Skarmory and friends for me and with a little speed for Gliscore this thing can sweep easily.
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Not Another Blissey!
a.k.a. Blissey
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@Leftovers

Calm / Natural Cure
252 Def / 80 SpA / 176 SpD
-Wish
-Protect
-Flamethrower
-Toxic

Blissey is a necessity in my team. It's my sponge, my staller, and my Wish suporter.
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So what do you think? Do you notice any flaws or anything my team can improve in? Please give me advice if needed and tell me what you think.
 
i wish people would stop making that their title, its getting really gay.
huge mixape weak. try changing donphan to cresslia. rest, sleep talk, charge beam/calm mind, icebeam/psychic. you lose a spinner but gain a status absorber.
 
or you could just go with Tentacruel/Starmie therefore you dont lose the spinner and have Mixape covered, using tentacruel means you can use toxic spikes then you can replace toxic on blissey with seismic toss so random CMers such as Raikou won't also sweep your team.
 
Actually, I would refrain from adding more things that get raped by another Weavile (Brick Break, Ice Punch, Ice Punch, Aerial Ace, Brick Break, Brick Break) who would just pick the whole team apart. If we're going to use Gliscor as an Agility passer, then we'll get rid of Donphan for Forretress. Forretress can stand up to Weavile easily enough, set up SR itself, and still Rapid Spin.

I also don't know why you have a Magnezone in there. Once Skarmory gets Taunt'd, it's most likely switching out, so it's not like it'll be there as you BP to Heracross. After Skarmory comes back in, you'll be doing:

383 attack vs 400 defense, 120 power(*1.5 *2 *1.5), 334 max HP: 111.98% - 132.04%

Is that an issue at all?

Weavile, Forretress, Heracross, Gliscor, Blissey, the team seems to be lacking in a water type. You could have like a Gyarados in there as extra help for Garchomp, other Gyaradoses, and Lucarios, who all could be troublesome.
 
This looks like a somewhat competitive team.

EVs, Movesets, Natures, and Items: If you want Weavile to outspeed other Weavile, your probaly want max speed. Otherwise, just stick with 252/216/40.

Donphan may want enough Attack to 2HKO Garchomp, but still enough to take repeated Outrages from it, so you can beat Garchomp easier as you're using Gliscor as a BPer.

Gliscor can run a bit more speed just to outspeed Lucario so it can actually counter it. Switch in on CC and EQ it to death. It really seems worth running a little bit speed for Lucario.

Heracross looks fine. Megahorn is one word.

Magnozone may want more defense and just enough speed to beat Skarmory so you can maximize it's walling potential (BoltBeam resist).

Blissey may want those EVs put in HP instead so you can actually take a few more hits.

Type Weakness: You have 3 Fire Weaks and no resists. You have 3 Fighting weaks, and 2 resists, so that's a 1x weak to Fighting. Fighting + Fire Pokemon destroy this team because of those two weaks.

Threats: Since Gliscor is a BPer, you have somewhat of a Lucario weak, especially with HP Ice. SubSalac Garchomp can give you huge problems too. You have a somewhat Raikou weak, and MixApe DESTROYS this team. Deoxys-e also can potential 6-0 this team. Ironically, RestTalk Machamp can beat this team too, as can (If it has Ice Punch). Rare DD Gyarados with EQ also hurt this team extremely badly. You also have a weak to opposing Weavile (To an extent).

How to cover team problems: First of all, Weavile leads are outdated, so replace that. Then, you already have Gliscor doing a lot of the walling, so replace Donphan too. Then, Magnzone isn't really doing anything. Now you still have a lead and a slot for type coverage. Try adding a Gyarados, Starmie, or Vaporeon. I suggest Vaporeon for Wish support for Foretress, but it's up to you. As for your lead, I would try a Stealth Rock / U-Turn / Ice Beam / Thunderbolt Mespirit with enough SpAtk to OHKO Garchomp (266). You also can help with Gyarados. Give it a Bold Nature and put the rest in Defense and HP. Right now, you have Vaporeon/Mespirit. They do some of the same jobs, and Starmie does the same thing as Foreteress, and Weavile is covered by Vaporeon to an extent. You have somewhat of a weakness to Garchomp still, and A still a somewhat Weavile weak. Try Bronzong in the third slot for overall coverage. (Hypnosis/Gyro Ball/SR/Explosion)
 
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