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Chien-Pao @ Focus Sash
Ability: Sword of Ruin
Level: 50
Tera Type: Ice / Ghost
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Icicle Crash / Ice Spinner
- Sucker Punch
- Icy Wind
- Protect

Chien-Pao breezes through Regulation F, using Icy Wind to let allies outpace foes. Ice Spinner and Icicle Crash threaten Raging Bolt and Rillaboom; Icicle Crash can OHKO Amoonguss, while Ice Spinner has better accuracy. Sucker Punch pressures Gholdengo and low-HP foes, while Icy Wind allows partners like Urshifu-R and Raging Bolt to outspeed Ogerpon-H. Focus Sash makes up for Chien-Pao's fragility, allowing it to support its team without fear of being OHKOed. 4 Defense EVs allow Chien-Pao to survive Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, and a Naive nature allows it to outspeed Choice Specs Flutter Mane while 2HKOing Landorus with Icy Wind. Tera Ice pushes Chien-Pao's damage to the limit, OHKOing the likes of Raging Bolt and Flutter Mane with Icicle Crash. Tera Ghost gives it an immunity to Rillaboom's and Incineroar's Fake Out, as well as to Dragonite's Extreme Speed. Urshifu-R and Iron Crown are huge threats to Chien-Pao, as both can KO it immediately with their multi-hit moves. Chien-Pao also struggles to damage Incineroar and Chi-Yu. Rillaboom pressures Urshifu-R, while Incineroar can deal with Iron Crown, (AC) and both provide Fake Out support. Urshifu-R threatens Fire-types and appreciates Sword of Ruin.
 
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Hi, I've got a bunch of changes so would like to see these get made first before continuing to help with condensing and cutting stuff. Let me know when it's done!

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Chien-Pao @ Focus Sash
Ability: Sword of Ruin
Level: 50
Tera Type: Ice / Ghost
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Icicle Crash / Ice Spinner
- Sucker Punch
- Icy Wind
- Protect

Chien-Pao is a powerhouse in Regulation F, able to knock out meta staples like Rillaboom and Landorus in one attack, while simultaneously supporting allies with Icy Wind. I am not a fan of this opening line, try to make a witty sentence to describe the set otherwise shorten this to only mention Chien-Pao using Icy Wind to support its teammates Ice Spinner and Icicle Crash are used to threaten common Pokemon like Raging Bolt, Rillaboom, Landorus, and Amoonguss You don't need this many examples, drop whichever two you like. Ice Spinner offers a better matchup into Indeedee-F, while Icicle Crash allows Chien-Pao to synergize better with Rillaboom. These points are true but I would rather this be a damage/accuracy comparison rather than effects, if you can fit damage comparisons in with these points though then great! Sucker Punch allows Chien-Pao to pressure Tera Ghost Pokemon Rather than mentioning Tera Ghost as a whole, I'd rather just see one natural Ghost-type mentioned instead and pick off low HP foes, while Icy Wind allows partner Urshifu-R and Raging Bolt to outspeed the Ogerpon formes. The given EV spread allows Chien-Pao to survive a Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R and outspeed Chouce Choice Specs Flutter Mane without sacrificing offensive power. You also should make some sort of mention about the Naive nature since this is typically an uncommon choice in VGC Tera Ice pushes Chien-Pao's Ice-Type moves to the limit, allowing it to OHKO the likes of Raging Bolt and Flutter Mane. With? Tera Ghost gives Chien-Pao and immunity to Rillaboom and Incineroar's Fake Out. Try to mention immunity to Extreme Speed too As Chien-Pao is very frail, it can struggle against the cycle of Fake Out and Intimidate from Incineroar, as well as bulkier threats like Urshifu-R and Entei. Probably remove this sentence, I don't feel it adds much and cuts some characters for you Urshifu-R is Chien-Pao's best partner, as it benefits from its Sword of Ruin Ability and pressures an OHKO on Incineroar with its Surging Strikes. This doesn't particularly explain why Urshifu-R is a good partner for Chien-Pao since it OHKOs Incineroar without Sword of Ruin Rillaboom, Raging Bolt, and Incineroar are also great teammates for Chien-Pao, allowing it to switch in and out safer, Remove the Raging Bolt mention here, this reads like Raging Bolt helps Chien-Pao with pivoting and Rillaboom and Raging Bolt have the added benefit of check opposing Urshifu-R.

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Chien-Pao @ Focus Sash
Ability: Sword of Ruin
Level: 50
Tera Type: Ice / Ghost
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Icicle Crash / Ice Spinner
- Sucker Punch
- Icy Wind
- Protect

Chien-Pao breezes through the Regulation F meta, using its Icy Wind to allow its allies to outpace and sweep through opponents, while simultaneously pressuring its own huge damage with its strong STAB attacks. Ice Spinner and Icicle Crash are used to threaten common Pokemon like Raging Bolt and Rillaboom. Icicle Crash is used for its power to OHKO Amoonguss, while Ice Spinner is used for its better accuracy. Sucker Punch allows Chien-Pao to pressure Gholdengo and low HP foes, while Icy Wind allows partner Urshifu-R and Raging Bolt to outspeed the Ogerpon formes. The given EV spread allows Chien-Pao to survive a Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, and the Naive Nature allows it to outspeed Choice Specs Flutter Mane without sacrificing its offensive power. Tera Ice pushes Chien-Pao's Ice-Type moves to the limit, allowing it to OHKO the likes of Raging Bolt and Flutter Mane with Icicle Crash. Tera Ghost gives Chien-Pao an immunity to Rillaboom and Incineroar's Fake Out, as well as to Dragonite and Entei's Extreme Speed. Urshifu-R is Chien-Pao's best partner, as it's STABs threaten checks such as Incineroar, Entei, and Chi-Yu. Rillaboom, and Incineroar are also great teammates for Chien-Pao, allowing it to switch in and out safer, Rillaboom and Raging Bolt have the added benefit of checking opposing Urshifu-R.

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RauSakura Implemented, sorry this is so late, was a bit busy. I'll try to get the next phase done ASAP.
 
I will need to look over this again. Upon rereading this, it felt like you were pretty much just writing an analysis which you should avoid doing since that can easily lead to using too many characters. Ping me once you've made these edits and if the character count is still above 1050ish I'll try to help cut down more!

Edit: in the last few sentences you don't really mention any checks to this set besides a few Fire-types, you need to make a clear mention of Urshifu and Iron Crown if you can fit it and that should let you easily link Chien-Pao's partners to them

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Chien-Pao @ Focus Sash
Ability: Sword of Ruin
Level: 50
Tera Type: Ice / Ghost
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Icicle Crash / Ice Spinner
- Sucker Punch
- Icy Wind
- Protect

Chien-Pao breezes through the Regulation F metagame, using its Icy Wind to allow its allies to outpace and sweep through opponents, while simultaneously pressuring its own huge damage with its strong STAB attacks. Ice Spinner and Icicle Crash are used to threaten common Pokemon like Raging Bolt and Rillaboom. Icicle Crash is used for its power to OHKO Amoonguss, while Ice Spinner is used for its better accuracy. Sucker Punch allows Chien-Pao to pressure Gholdengo and low HP foes, while Icy Wind allows partner Urshifu-R and Raging Bolt to outspeed the Ogerpon formes. You haven't touched on Focus Sash at all, you need to include a line about it The given EV spread 4 Defense EVs allows Chien-Pao to survive a Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, and the Naive Nature allows it to outspeed Choice Specs Flutter Mane without sacrificing its offensive power This isn't specific enough, with a Naive nature Icy Wind can 2HKO most Landorus before they tera. Tera Ice pushes Chien-Pao's Ice-Type moves Could cut this down a bit by replacing it with "damage" but if you want to keep this word choice you can to the limit, allowing it to OHKO the likes of Raging Bolt and Flutter Mane with Icicle Crash. Tera Ghost gives Chien-Pao an immunity to Rillaboom and Incineroar's Fake Out, as well as to Dragonite and Entei's Hisuian Arcanine is the much more common Extreme Speed user next to Dragonite in the meta right now but mentioning it uses more characters Extreme Speed. Urshifu-R is Chien-Pao's best partner, as it's STABs threaten checks such as Incineroar, Entei, and Chi-Yu. Rillaboom, and Incineroar are also great teammates for Chien-Pao, allowing it to switch in and out safer, Rillaboom and Raging Bolt This is a random mention since you haven't talked about Raging Bolt as a partner at all here have the added benefit of checking opposing Urshifu-R.

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Chien-Pao @ Focus Sash
Ability: Sword of Ruin
Level: 50
Tera Type: Ice / Ghost
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Icicle Crash / Ice Spinner
- Sucker Punch
- Icy Wind
- Protect

Chien-Pao breezes through the Regulation F metagame, using Icy Wind to allow its allies to outpace and sweep through opponents, while pressuring huge damage with its STAB attacks. Ice Spinner and Icicle Crash are used to threaten Raging Bolt and Rillaboom. Icicle Crash is used for its power to OHKO Amoonguss, while Ice Spinner is used for its better accuracy. Sucker Punch allows Chien-Pao to pressure Gholdengo and low HP foes, while Icy Wind allows partner Urshifu-R and Raging Bolt to outspeed the Ogerpon formes. The Focus Sash helps Chien-Pao to make up for its poor defenses, allowing it to support its team without fear of being easily defeated. 4 Defense EVs allows Chien-Pao to survive a Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, and the Naive Nature allows it to outspeed Choice Specs Flutter Mane without sacrificing its offensive power, allowing it to still KO Landorus with 2 Icy Winds. Tera Ice pushes Chien-Pao's damage to the limit, allowing it to OHKO the likes of Raging Bolt and Flutter Mane with Icicle Crash. Tera Ghost gives Chien-Pao an immunity to Rillaboom and Incineroar's Fake Out, as well as to Arcanine-Hisui's Extreme Speed. Urshifu-R and Iron Crown are huges threats to Chien-Pao, as they are both able to KO it immediately with their multi-hit moves. Urshifu-R is Chien-Pao's best partner, as it's STABs threaten checks such as Incineroar, Entei, and Chi-Yu. Rillaboom, and Incineroar are also great teammates for Chien-Pao, allowing it to switch in and out safer. Rillaboom also works as a counter to Urshifu-R, while Incineroar can deal with Iron Crown.

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RauSakura After adding the changes, it's way too long. I feel like if anything needs to be trimmed/removed, its the ending.
 
I'm happy with this now from a QC stand point, you may send to GP even if you can't get the character limit close to the ideal 1050ish count! 1/1

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Chien-Pao @ Focus Sash
Ability: Sword of Ruin
Level: 50
Tera Type: Ice / Ghost
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Icicle Crash / Ice Spinner
- Sucker Punch
- Icy Wind
- Protect

Chien-Pao breezes through the Regulation F metagame, using Icy Wind to allow its allies to outpace and sweep through opponents foes, while pressuring huge damage with its STAB attacks. Ice Spinner and Icicle Crash are used to threaten Raging Bolt and Rillaboom. Icicle Crash is used for its power to can OHKO Amoonguss, while Ice Spinner is used for its better accuracy. Sucker Punch allows Chien-Pao to pressure Gholdengo and low HP foes, while Icy Wind allows partner Urshifu-R and Raging Bolt to outspeed the Ogerpon-H formes. The Focus Sash helps Chien-Pao to make up for its poor defenses, allowing it to support its team without fear of being easily defeated OHKOed. 4 Defense EVs allows Chien-Pao to survive a Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, and the Naive Nature allows it to outspeed Choice Specs Flutter Mane without sacrificing its offensive power, allowing it to while still 2HKOing Landorus with 2 Icy Winds. Tera Ice pushes Chien-Pao's damage to the limit, allowing it to OHKO the likes of Raging Bolt and Flutter Mane with Icicle Crash. Tera Ghost gives Chien-Pao an immunity to Rillaboom and Incineroar's Fake Out, as well as to Arcanine-Hisui's Extreme Speed. Urshifu-R and Iron Crown are huges threats to Chien-Pao, as they are both able to KO it immediately with their multi-hit moves. Urshifu-R is Chien-Pao's best partner, as it's STABs threaten checks such as Incineroar, Entei, and Chi-Yu. This sentence should be reworded, start with mentioning that Chien-Pao is threatened by Fire-types and can't damage them very well, then introduce Urshifu-R as a partner Rillaboom, and Incineroar are also great teammates for Chien-Pao, allowing it to switch in and out safer. This line could be cut if this spotlight is still too long, if you want to keep it I feel it is more suitable after the following sentence Rillaboom also works as a counter to Urshifu-R, while Incineroar can deal with Iron Crown.

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reduced characters a little but great work otherwise
1/1 GP Team done
Chien-Pao @ Focus Sash
Ability: Sword of Ruin
Level: 50
Tera Type: Ice / Ghost
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Naive Nature
- Icicle Crash / Ice Spinner
- Sucker Punch
- Icy Wind
- Protect

Chien-Pao breezes through Regulation F, using Icy Wind to allow its let allies to outpace foes. Ice Spinner and Icicle Crash are used to threaten Raging Bolt and Rillaboom (RP); (ASC) Icicle Crash can OHKO Amoonguss, while Ice Spinner has better accuracy. Sucker Punch pressures Gholdengo and low HP low-HP foes, while Icy Wind allows partner partners like Urshifu-R and Raging Bolt to outspeed Ogerpon-H. Focus Sash makes up for Chien-Pao's fragility, allowing it to support its team without fear of being OHKOed. 4 Defense EVs allow Chien-Pao to survive a Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, and the a Naive nature allow allows it to outspeed Choice Specs Flutter Mane while 2HKOing Landorus with Icy Wind. Tera Ice pushes Chien-Pao's damage to the limit, OHKOing the likes of Raging Bolt and Flutter Mane with Icicle Crash. Tera Ghost gives Chien-Pao it an immunity to Rillaboom Rillaboom's and Incineroar's Fake Out, as well as to Dragonite's Extreme Speed. Urshifu-R and Iron Crown are huges huge threats to Chien-Pao, as they are both able to can KO it immediately with their multi-hit moves. Chien-Pao also struggles to damage Incineroar and Chi-Yu. Rillaboom pressures Urshifu-R, while Incineroar can deal with Iron Crown, (AC) and they both provide Fake Out support. Urshifu-R threatens the Fire-types and appreciates Sword of Ruin.
 
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