VGC10 Team

[LB31]

Hello, I'm this Saturday on the VGC in Germany/Cologne and not sure if my Team is good... I hope you can help me a little bit.



Pokemon 1:

@Focus Sash
Jolly
4 HP | 252 ATK | 252 SPEED
- Fake Out
- Much Punch
- Protect
- Encore

I want to use Encore for foes who had used protect.


Pokemon 2:

@Lum Berry
Timid
4 HP | 252 SPATK | 252 SPEED
- Protect
- Substitute
- Thunder
- Special Rend

I think Substitute is good against Smeargle etc.


Pokemon 3:

@Lefttovers
Brave
176 HP | 100 ATK | 232 SPDEF
- Bullet Punch
- Roost
- U-Turn
- Brick Break

It's Brave because in that way I can use ist against some Trick Room Pokemon. And I choose it because I think in the VGC10 Mode are many ice and dragon moves.


Pokemon 3:

@Choice Scarf
Modest
196 HP | 252 SPATK | 60 SPEED
- Gras Knot
- Blizzard
- Flamethrower
- Shadow Ball

With that Speed IVs it's faster than scarfed Kyogre.



So I hope you can rate it and give me some tips. And exuse please my Englisch mistaces. =)
By the way the starters weren't my idea, a frindly guy in Pokemon Online told me about that.

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

You need to improve on your descriptions. As of right now, your descriptions are too short. Try to lengthen them more please. Have a look at some of the teams in the RMT archive to see what is expected. Explain why you chose a Pokemon, what it does, how it contributes to the success of the team, etc. If you fix the descriptions properly, PM me the changes; if they are sufficient enough I will unlock your thread with the edited descriptions.