Warstory - Q vs. A Wobbuffet user *Shoddy battle*

[Qyyu]

I decided to keep a log of this to mark the fact that wobbuffet is not invincible. And also cuz the guy who I fought d/c'd, which on shoddy I would figure the person who d/c's is the person facing wobby not the wobby user SO I'm putting this up also to say haha I have you on my record *embarrisment*
P.S this is my first warstory....so I don't know if this was the right place to put up a warstory to even beging with...if you correct me please.

Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause

silen sent out I got lazy with naming (lvl 100 Relicanth ?).
ambf sent out Wobbuffet (lvl 100 Wobbuffet ?).

By this time I was saying in my head "O great wobbuffet, well time to lose some pokes. Might as well use Headsmash to hit this wobby as hard as I can".

I got lazy with naming used Head Smash.
Wobbuffet lost 50% of its health.
Wobbuffet used Encore.
I got lazy with naming got an encore!
Wobbuffet's leftovers restored its health a little!
Wobbuffet restored 6% of its health.
---
ambf switched in Gyarados (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Gyarados's intimidate cut I got lazy with naming's attack!
I got lazy with naming used Head Smash.
It's super effective!
Gyarados lost 100% of its health.
ambf's Gyarados fainted.

Here's were I wondered why? This guy coulda switched in with something much better, why gyarados? Or did this guy just not know Head Smash was rock type?
---
silen: huzzah
ambf switched in Wobbuffet (lvl 100 Wobbuffet ?).
I got lazy with naming used Head Smash.
Wobbuffet lost 35% of its health.
Wobbuffet used Counter.

Generally this guy was out to kill my relicanth now for a revenge kill that was obvious. I'm pretty sure he didn't expect Gyarados to die from Head smash so now this guy has probably gotten pretty frustrated with the fishy.

I got lazy with naming lost 100% of its health.
silen's I got lazy with naming fainted.
Wobbuffet's leftovers restored its health a little!
Wobbuffet restored 6% of its health.
---
silen switched in Skywalker (lvl 100 Lucario ?).

Time to kill off Wobbuffet.

Skywalker used Dark Pulse.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!

lawl critical hit that has to suck for a finishing on wobbuffet, idk why this guy didn't switch out.....

Wobbuffet lost 28% of its health.
ambf's Wobbuffet fainted.
---
ambf switched in Electivire (lvl 100 Electivire ?).
silen switched in Deathnote (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).

When he pulled out a Electivire I obviously knew it was time to switch out lucario before it gets killed off. So it was between dusknoir and cress, I went to use Dusknoir because then I could have been able to come in on a cross chop.

Deathnote is exerting its pressure!
Electivire used Earthquake.
Deathnote lost 38% of its health.
Electivire lost 10% of its health.
Deathnote's leftovers restored its health a little!
Deathnote restored 6% of its health.

It's not a fairly good predicament for my dusknoir since he only has pain split and doesn't have will-o-wisp for cresselia's reason. I knew Dusknoir might not be able to get the kill in.
---
silen switched in SliceNdicE (lvl 100 Cresselia ?).
Electivire used Thunderpunch.
SliceNdicE lost 27% of its health.
Electivire lost 10% of its health.
SliceNdicE was burned!
---
Electivire used Thunderpunch.
SliceNdicE lost 30% of its health.
Electivire lost 10% of its health.
SliceNdicE used Psycho Shift.
Electivire was burned!

Sure I only had half my health left with burns ruining me with only moonlight to heal me, but come on psycho shift is such an abusable move for cresselia. Probably pissed him off with ruining his electivire's attack.

Electivire was hurt by its burn!
Electivire lost 12% of its health.
SliceNdicE was burned!
---
ambf switched in Forretress (lvl 100 Forretress ?).
SliceNdicE used Moonlight.
SliceNdicE restored 50% of its health.
SliceNdicE was hurt by its burn!
SliceNdicE lost 12% of its health.
---
SliceNdicE used Psycho Shift.
Forretress was burned!
Forretress used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered everywhere!
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
SliceNdicE was burned!
Forretress was hurt by its burn!
Forretress lost 12% of its health.
---
silen switched in Tentafool (lvl 100 Tentacruel ?).
Tentafool was hurt by Spikes!
Tentafool lost 12% of its health.
Forretress used Explosion.
Tentafool lost 78% of its health.

haha didn't even kill a tentacruel with that explosion, that's another nail for the frustration coffin.

ambf's Forretress fainted.
Tentafool's leftovers restored its health a little!
Tentafool restored 6% of its health.
---
ambf switched in Skarmory (lvl 100 Skarmory ?).
Tentafool used Rapid Spin.
Tentafool blew away the spikes!
It's not very effective...
Skarmory lost 1% of its health.
Skarmory used Stealth Rock.

Basic rapid spinning to get rid of some spikes obv.

Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
Tentafool's leftovers restored its health a little!
Tentafool restored 6% of its health.
---
Tentafool used Rapid Spin.
Tentafool blew away the spikes!
It's not very effective...
Skarmory lost 1% of its health.
Skarmory used Whirlwind.
silen switched in Deathnote (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
Deathnote is exerting its pressure!
Deathnote's leftovers restored its health a little!
Deathnote restored 6% of its health.
---
Skarmory used Drill Peck.
Deathnote lost 19% of its health.
Deathnote used Thunderpunch.
It's super effective!
Skarmory lost 19% of its health.
Deathnote's leftovers restored its health a little!
Deathnote restored 6% of its health.
---
ambf has left the room.
silen wins!

I'd have to guess this guy probably got frustrated about his loss of wobbuffet and the fact that his wobby didn't really kill off as much as he woulda expected. He also lost his gyarados which was probably his setup pokemon for encoring. Burning his attacker with psycho shift and ruining his suicidal kill with a burn also made his attempts at killing pretty piddy.

^and there ya go a technical win, I'm the pro wobby user and as far as I have seen from battling a few wobbies I believe wobbuffet can be in OU but still can be quite annoying non the less.

Also I have no idea why the guy would pull out a gyarados other than to lower my relicanth's atk so he counter counter kill it after. If anything I can say the person using Wobbuffet was very inexperienced with using it....

*I'm probably not going to make another thread like this for a while....or until I get more experience reading more warstory threads......even getting a better game*

 

[the Lexx]

The wobbuffet user was retarded, it was only a few turns, and this isn't even a warstory as there are no comments. >_>

 

[Qyyu]

ok thanks I needed to know how a warstory is written down...thanks

 

[Little Green Yoda]

It's not a close battle and it doesn't have any good predictions so it's not worthy of a warstory. Even you admitted the opponent was a noob, so it's not going to convince the anti-Wobby crowd. So what's the purpose of this thread again?

 

[Draco Meteor]

Honestly, you have never read another war story to know what you are supposed to do and add in your comments?

 

[Qyyu]

Ya I'm gonna have to improve on this definetely. My bad if this was a horribly shitty warstory which doesn't even count as one. O well let this thread fall into the oblivion of which it deserves :p

 

[Blue Harvest]

I don't care what the others say, anyone who uses Relincanth is my hero.

 

[Jiggy-Ninja]

Leading with Wobbuffet is pretty dumb, and underestimating Relicanth's Rock Head isn't the smartest.

This wouldn't convince anyone that Wobbuffet isn't Uber because Rayquaza could seem bad if used incompetently.

That being said, it's always fun to see Pokemon like Wobby get smashed.

 

[Holden]

That guy was retarded, and this war story was very meh.

Wobbo is pretty good in the right hands.

 

[Lord Alchemy]

Stopped reading after he switched in a Gyarados into a headsmash. Just because you face an idiot that uses Wobby doesn't prove anything about his tier status.

 

[Taylor]

I don't think this was a warstory. It's just a few lines of Blue text after each turn. It's not as if the battle was anything to remember.

Try and add more things to the match. Things like:

1) A story, something with inspiration. Something that isn't just about making the move.

2) Pictures of the Pokemon for a better read

3) (Baring in mind the battle wasn't too long), but adding down a score when a Pokemon faints.

4) A good battle in the long-run.


Goodluck!

 

[merubin]

Wasn't going to post in this--and really, people should stop. It's bad. We know. Stop bumping it--but the requirement to have warstories mod-approved has been removed for some time, and that misinformation should really stop being spread.

 

[eric the espeon]

Oh, and make sure you get permission from a mod to post one.

you dont need to do this anymore, the mods got board with haveing to read every warstory that anyone wated to post. now they just lock bad warstorys.

 

[Taylor]

You could generally tell by glancing at a warstory if it's going to be good/bad. The way the thread is layed out can give you an indication on whether it's good/bad.

I will take that out then.

 

[Yggdrasil]

A Wobbuffet lead and the Gyarados getting killed after the encore was really bleh. Not the best of warstories and not even pokemon pictures, check shiny_oddish's and cynthia's warstories out