Done [Monotype] Kommo-o (Dragon) [QC 1/1] [GP 1/1]

[Murphy Lawden]

Kommo-o @ Choice Specs
Ability: Soundproof
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Aura Sphere
- Clanging Scales
- Vacuum Wave
- Flamethrower

The ancient dragon warrior clangs a deafening roar, striking fear in hearts of its enemies! Aura Sphere threatens foes like Archaludon and Heatran, while Clanging Scales breaks through defensive staples such as Toxapex, Sableye, and Gliscor. Vacuum Wave is an excellent tool for picking off weakened threats like Meowscarada, Greninja, and Mamoswine that would otherwise force Kommo-o out. Flamethrower covers Pokemon that can comfortably switch into Kommo-o's STAB moves like Gholdengo and Corviknight. Hisuian Goodra and Archaludon form a much-needed defensive backbone. Hisuian Goodra can switch into special attackers such as Flutter Mane and Dragapult. Archaludon checks physical attackers like Roaring Moon and Azumarill. Choice Scarf Roaring Moon and Latias provide valuable speed control; both teammates eliminate key threats like Latios and Iron Valiant, with Roaring Moon also removing Flutter Mane and Choice Scarf Enamorus after Stealth Rock damage. Furthermore, Roaring Moon can use U-turn to pivot out against switch-ins like Skarmory and Archaludon, bringing in Kommo-o to pressure them, while Latias provides a second chance with Healing Wish.

 

[boomp]

- I would remove treads from v wave targets as we dont die to nothing it throws at us (even band Ice Spinner doesnt ko it), It doesnt force us out like the other targets.
- i would take out Weavile for an arch check as we already check it with kommo-o's V wave. +2 shard doesnt ko us from full. Lets put azumarill instead.
"Archaludon also provides Stealth Rock and Thunder Wave support."
- I feel like this doesnt get us no where, why is this important for kommo-o? what are we t waving that would benefit kommo-o If the line count is high already i would just remove that sentence tbh

Everything else looks good. QC 1/1 well done fam

 

[Murphy Lawden]

- I would remove treads from v wave targets as we dont die to nothing it throws at us (even band Ice Spinner doesnt ko it), It doesnt force us out like the other targets.
- i would take out Weavile for an arch check as we already check it with kommo-o's V wave. +2 shard doesnt ko us from full. Lets put azumarill instead.
"Archaludon also provides Stealth Rock and Thunder Wave support."
- I feel like this doesnt get us no where, why is this important for kommo-o? what are we t waving that would benefit kommo-o If the line count is high already i would just remove that sentence tbh

Everything else looks good. QC 1/1 well done fam

Implemented! Thankie!

GP Team

 

[boomp]

Murphy Lawden i totally forgot one last thing, can you just say aura sphere eliminates archaludon while Clangerous Souls...... (combine the sentence...)

"with Roaring Moon also removing Flutter Mane and Choice Scarf Enamorus." put after Stealth Rock damage after you mentioned enamorus Since its a guaranteed OHKO (252 Atk Roaring Moon Iron Head vs. 0 HP / 0 Def Enamorus: 246-290 (85.1 - 100.3%) -- guaranteed OHKO after Stealth Rock. )

my bad fam

 

[adorluigi]

Copyedit

Kommo-o @ Choice Specs
Ability: Soundproof
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Aura Sphere
- Clanging Scales
- Vacuum Wave
- Flamethrower

The ancient dragon warrior clangs a deafening roar, striking fear in hearts of its enemy enemies! Aura Sphere threatens foes like Archaludon and Heatran, while Clanging Scales breaks through defensive staples such as Toxapex, Sableye, and Gliscor. Vacuum Wave is an excellent tool for picking off weakened threats like Meowscarada, Greninja, and Mamoswine that would otherwise force Kommo-o out. Flamethrower covers Pokemon that can comfortably switch into Kommo-o's STAB moves like Gholdengo and Corviknight. Hisuian Goodra and Archaludon form a much-needed defensive backbone. Hisuian Goodra can switch into special attackers such as Flutter Mane and Dragapult. Archaludon checks physical attackers like Roaring Moon and Azumarill. Choice Scarf Roaring Moon and Latias provide valuable speed control; both teammates eliminates eliminate key threats like Latios and Iron Valiant, with Roaring Moon also removing Flutter Mane and Choice Scarf Enamorus after Stealth Rock damage. Furthermore, Roaring Moon can use U-turn to pivot out against switch-ins like Skarmory and Archaludon, bringing in Kommo-o to pressure them, while Latias provides a second chance with Healing Wish.

GP Team done