National Dex UU Would be the Best Soccer Player (Bulky Pivot Cinderace)

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Bulky Pivot (Cinderace) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Blaze
Evs: 188 HP / 112 Atk / 208 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Pyro Ball
- U-turn
- Will-O-Wisp
- Court Change

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to its good Speed, outspeeding foes like Serperior, Iron Treads, and Enamorus, good Attack, and valuable utility like Court Change, which can be helpful for entry hazard-weak teammates, Cinderace is a good bulky pivot that can help bring in its teammates safely against faster foes. Pyro Ball deals with Steel- and Grass-types, 2HKOing defensive Celesteela, Iron Treads, Tangrowth, and Amoonguss; it is also Cinderace's best move, due to its general usability, power, ablilty to OHKO targets like Enamorus, Mega Heracross, and Thundurus-T when Blaze boosted. Will-O-Wisp can cripple physical attackers, notably setup Pokemon such as Iron Hands, Hawlucha, and Okidogi. This given EV spread allows Cinderace to be as bulky as possible, letting it survive an Earthquake from Salamence, while still outspeeding Serperior and being able able to OHKO Enamorus after Stealth Rock chip damage. Cinderace can pair well with other pivots like Meowscarada, Thundurus-T, and Galarian Zapdos, forming a VoltTurn core, being able to pivot each other in to threaten Pokemon that can check each other. Offensive Pokemon like Iron Moth, Galarian Zapdos, and Serperior can be good teammates for Cinderace, being able to threaten its common checks like Tapu Fini, Mega Tyranitar, Slowbro, and other Water-types, that generally wall it. In return, Cinderace can keep off hazards, helping them not get chipped, and pivot them in against faster targets like Meowscarda safely. Cinderace can be threatened out by targets like Keldeo, Volcanion, and Sandy Shocks, due to their typing and super effective moves, making it appreciate teammates that can offer a backbone against them like Mega Latias, Latios, and Blissey. Skeledirge is also another Pokemon that can wall Cinderace, forcing it out and using it as an opportunity to setup, making Cinderace pair well with partners like Keldeo, Hydreigon, and Sandy Shocks, which can threaten it. Even though Cinderace can help to keep off hazards, it can still appreciate secondary hazard removers like Tapu Fini, Excadrill, and Iron Treads.

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Good work QC 1/1 when implemented

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[SET]
Bulky Pivot (Cinderace) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 180 HP / 120 Atk / 208 Spe 188 HP / 112 Atk / 208 Spe Always OHKOes Enam with Pyro Ball after Rocks
Jolly Nature
- Pyro Ball
- U-turn
- Will-O-Wisp
- Court Change

[SET COMMENTS]
Cinderace is a valuable bulky pivot that can outspeed foes like Serperior, Iron Treads, and Enamorus, and paired with its good Attack and supporting movepool it can especially be hard to deal with. Reword this sentence to state that Cinderace's good Speed, Attack, and utility make it a good bulky pivot. Your info here is good, but it's a bit hard to follow given how the points are ordered. This section is also good to note Cinderace's pivoting abilities. Pyro Ball helps to deal with Steel- and Grass-types, 2HKOing bulky Pokemon like defensive Celesteela, Iron Treads, Tangrowth lacking Earthquake, and Amoonguss. Mention its general spamability and power before going into targets it notably hits hard. Talk about KOes you can achieve with Blaze here too Will-O-Wisp cripples set up Pokemon such as Iron Hands, Hawlucha, and Okidogi. Mention physical attackers in general, and then talk about setup sweepers Court Change can help temporarily keep off entry hazards and dual screens. Self-explanatory This given EV spread allows Cinderace to be as bulky as possible, (Remove comma) while still Outspeeding outspeeding Serperior. Mention calcs where the extra bulk matters, and mention that the Attack OHKOes Enamorus after Rocks Cinderace can pair well with other pivots like Meowscarada, Thundurus-T, and Galarian Zapdos, forming a VoltTurn core, being able to pivot each other in to threaten Pokemon that can wall it check each other. Offensive Pokemon like Iron Moth, Galarian Zapdos, and Serperior, (Remove comma) can be good teammates for Cinderace, being able to threaten its common checks like Tapu Fini, Mega Tyranitar, and Slowbro. Mention that Cinderace is generally walled by Water-types here In return, Cinderace can help to keep off hazards, helping them not get chipped, and pivot them in against faster targets like Meowscarda safely. Cinderace can be threatened out by targets like Keldeo, Volcanion, and Sandy Shocks, Mention that makes these Pokemon do so well vs Cinderace, mainly their typing making it appreciate teammates that can offer a backbone against them like Mega Latias, Latios, and Blissey.

Mention answers to Skeledirge, which dominates this set. While you talk about it a bit in the teammates section, I would emphasize Cinderace's ability to keep out hazards being a solid selling point for hazard-weak teammates. Also talk about alternate hazard control as Cinderace itself isn't enough.

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Gangsta Spongebob said:
Good work QC 1/1 when implemented

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[SET]
Bulky Pivot (Cinderace) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 180 HP / 120 Atk / 208 Spe 188 HP / 112 Atk / 208 Spe Always OHKOes Enam with Pyro Ball after Rocks
Jolly Nature
- Pyro Ball
- U-turn
- Will-O-Wisp
- Court Change

[SET COMMENTS]
Cinderace is a valuable bulky pivot that can outspeed foes like Serperior, Iron Treads, and Enamorus, and paired with its good Attack and supporting movepool it can especially be hard to deal with. Reword this sentence to state that Cinderace's good Speed, Attack, and utility make it a good bulky pivot. Your info here is good, but it's a bit hard to follow given how the points are ordered. This section is also good to note Cinderace's pivoting abilities. Pyro Ball helps to deal with Steel- and Grass-types, 2HKOing bulky Pokemon like defensive Celesteela, Iron Treads, Tangrowth lacking Earthquake, and Amoonguss. Mention its general spamability and power before going into targets it notably hits hard. Talk about KOes you can achieve with Blaze here too Will-O-Wisp cripples set up Pokemon such as Iron Hands, Hawlucha, and Okidogi. Mention physical attackers in general, and then talk about setup sweepers Court Change can help temporarily keep off entry hazards and dual screens. Self-explanatory This given EV spread allows Cinderace to be as bulky as possible, (Remove comma) while still Outspeeding outspeeding Serperior. Mention calcs where the extra bulk matters, and mention that the Attack OHKOes Enamorus after Rocks Cinderace can pair well with other pivots like Meowscarada, Thundurus-T, and Galarian Zapdos, forming a VoltTurn core, being able to pivot each other in to threaten Pokemon that can wall it check each other. Offensive Pokemon like Iron Moth, Galarian Zapdos, and Serperior, (Remove comma) can be good teammates for Cinderace, being able to threaten its common checks like Tapu Fini, Mega Tyranitar, and Slowbro. Mention that Cinderace is generally walled by Water-types here In return, Cinderace can help to keep off hazards, helping them not get chipped, and pivot them in against faster targets like Meowscarda safely. Cinderace can be threatened out by targets like Keldeo, Volcanion, and Sandy Shocks, Mention that makes these Pokemon do so well vs Cinderace, mainly their typing making it appreciate teammates that can offer a backbone against them like Mega Latias, Latios, and Blissey.

Mention answers to Skeledirge, which dominates this set. While you talk about it a bit in the teammates section, I would emphasize Cinderace's ability to keep out hazards being a solid selling point for hazard-weak teammates. Also talk about alternate hazard control as Cinderace itself isn't enough.

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implemented tysm now like my post in the reversation thread so i can do more!
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GP 1/1
[SET]
Bulky Pivot (Cinderace) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Blaze
Evs: 188 HP / 112 Atk / 208 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Pyro Ball
- U-turn
- Will-O-Wisp
- Court Change

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to its good Speed, outspeeding foes like Serperior, Iron Treads, and Enamorus, good Attack, and valuable utility like Court Change, which can be helpful for entry hazard-weak teammates, Cinderace is a good bulky pivot (rc) that who can help to bring in its teammates safely against faster foes. Pyro Ball deals helps to deal with Steel- and Grass-types, (ac) 2HKOing defensive Celesteela, Iron Treads, Tangrowth, and Amoonguss; add semicolon it is also Cinderace's best move, (ac) due to its general usability, (ac) spamability if you can find a better word to describe the degree it can be used to, then feel free and power, ability to and with its ablilty it can OHKO targets like Enamorus, Mega Heracross, and Thundurus-T when Blaze boosted. Will-O-Wisp can cripple physical attackers, notably setup Pokemon such as Iron Hands, Hawlucha, and Okidogi. This given EV spread allows Cinderace to be as bulky as possible, letting it survive an Earthquake from Salamence, while still outspeeding Serperior (rc) and being able able to OHKO Enamorus after Stealth Rock chip damage. Cinderace can pair well with other pivots like Meowscarada, Thundurus-T, and Galarian Zapdos, forming a VoltTurn core, being able to pivot each other in to threaten Pokemon that can check each other. Offensive Pokemon like Iron Moth, Galarian Zapdos, and Serperior can be good teammates for Cinderace, being able to threaten its common checks like Tapu Fini, Mega Tyranitar, and Slowbro, and also other Water-types, (ac) which generally wall it. if you meant everything in this list generally walls it, keep "which", but if you only meant the Water-types, use "that" and remove the comma In return, Cinderace can help to keep off hazards, helping them not get chipped, and pivot them in against faster targets like Meowscarda safely. Cinderace can be threatened out by targets like Keldeo, Volcanion, and Sandy Shocks, due to their typing and super effective moves, making it appreciate teammates that can offer a backbone against them like Mega Latias, Latios, and Blissey. Skeledirge is also another Pokemon that can wall Cinderace, forcing it out and using it as an giving Skeledirge an opportunity to setup, making Cinderace pair well with partners like Keldeo, Hydreigon, and Sandy Shocks, which can threaten it. Even though Cinderace can help to keep off hazards, it can still appreciate secondary hazard removers like Tapu Fini, Excadrill, and Iron Treads.

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Sulo said:
GP 1/1
[SET]
Bulky Pivot (Cinderace) @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Blaze
Evs: 188 HP / 112 Atk / 208 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Pyro Ball
- U-turn
- Will-O-Wisp
- Court Change

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to its good Speed, outspeeding foes like Serperior, Iron Treads, and Enamorus, good Attack, and valuable utility like Court Change, which can be helpful for entry hazard-weak teammates, Cinderace is a good bulky pivot (rc) that who can help to bring in its teammates safely against faster foes. Pyro Ball deals helps to deal with Steel- and Grass-types, (ac) 2HKOing defensive Celesteela, Iron Treads, Tangrowth, and Amoonguss; add semicolon it is also Cinderace's best move, (ac) due to its general usability, (ac) spamability if you can find a better word to describe the degree it can be used to, then feel free and power, ability to and with its ablilty it can OHKO targets like Enamorus, Mega Heracross, and Thundurus-T when Blaze boosted. Will-O-Wisp can cripple physical attackers, notably setup Pokemon such as Iron Hands, Hawlucha, and Okidogi. This given EV spread allows Cinderace to be as bulky as possible, letting it survive an Earthquake from Salamence, while still outspeeding Serperior (rc) and being able able to OHKO Enamorus after Stealth Rock chip damage. Cinderace can pair well with other pivots like Meowscarada, Thundurus-T, and Galarian Zapdos, forming a VoltTurn core, being able to pivot each other in to threaten Pokemon that can check each other. Offensive Pokemon like Iron Moth, Galarian Zapdos, and Serperior can be good teammates for Cinderace, being able to threaten its common checks like Tapu Fini, Mega Tyranitar, and Slowbro, and also other Water-types, (ac) which generally wall it. if you meant everything in this list generally walls it, keep "which", but if you only meant the Water-types, use "that" and remove the comma In return, Cinderace can help to keep off hazards, helping them not get chipped, and pivot them in against faster targets like Meowscarda safely. Cinderace can be threatened out by targets like Keldeo, Volcanion, and Sandy Shocks, due to their typing and super effective moves, making it appreciate teammates that can offer a backbone against them like Mega Latias, Latios, and Blissey. Skeledirge is also another Pokemon that can wall Cinderace, forcing it out and using it as an giving Skeledirge an opportunity to setup, making Cinderace pair well with partners like Keldeo, Hydreigon, and Sandy Shocks, which can threaten it. Even though Cinderace can help to keep off hazards, it can still appreciate secondary hazard removers like Tapu Fini, Excadrill, and Iron Treads.

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