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[SET]
Sword of Ruin (Ceruledge) @ Life Orb
Ability: Sword of Ruin
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Bitter Blade
- Poltergeist
- Shadow Sneak / Swords Dance
- Close Combat / Shadow Sneak

[SET COMMENTS]
Sword of Ruin Ceruledge is a potent wallbreaker, thanks to its excellent coverage hitting almost everything in the tier for neutral damage, a high Attack stat, and Bitter Blade offsetting Life Orb recoil. Shadow Sneak picks off faster foes like Gengar and weakened Iron Moth, Hisuian Electrode, and Barraskewda, while Swords Dance can be used to boost Ceruledge's already high damage, letting it OHKO defensive Kommo-o, physically defensive Garchomp, and Zapdos. Close Combat OHKOes Roaring Moon, Well-Baked Body Kingambit, and Garganacl. Fast Pokemon such as Sandy Shocks, Walking Wake, and Chien-Pao force Ceruledge out, so it pairs excellently with bulky Pokemon that can wall them like RegenVest Roaring Moon, Empoleon, and Quaquaval, respectively; in return, Ceruledge can threaten their checks such as Scream Tail and Heatran. Ceruledge can quicky be worn down by Life Orb and entry hazard chip damage, so it appreciates hazard removal from the likes of Great Tusk, Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. Due to Ceruledge's frail defenses and several weaknesses, it often struggles to switch in, so pivots like Corviknight, Zapdos, and Manaphy pair excellently with it, being able to pivot it in on Pokemon it threatens.

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:ceruledge:
[SET]
Sword of Ruin (Ceruledge) @ Life Orb
Ability: Sword of Ruin
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Bitter Blade
- Poltergeist
- Shadow Sneak / Swords Dance
- Close Combat / Shadow Sneak

[SET COMMENTS]
Sword of Ruin Ceruledge is a potent wallbreaker or setup sweeper i wouldn't really call ceru a sweeper, it's slow, thanks to its excellent coverage hitting almost everything in the tier for neutral damage, a high Attack stat, and HP recovery with Bitter Blade. Shadow Sneak lets Ceruledge pick off faster foes like Gengar or weakened foes like Iron Moth, Barraskewda, and opposing Ceruledge, while Swords Dance can be used to boost Ceruledge's already high damage. Close Combat hits Pokemon such as Roaring Moon, Well-Baked Body Kingambit, and Garganacl. Fast Pokemon like Azelf, Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon can threaten Ceruledge forcing it out, so it can pair excellently with Pokemon like RegenVest Roaring Moon, Scream Tail, and Great Tusk, respectively, who can wall these Pokemon, while in return; Ceruledge can help against their checks such as Scream Tail and Heatran. Ceruledge can be worn down by Life Orb and entry hazard chip, so it appreciates hazard removal from the likes of Great Tusk, Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. Mention how Ceruledge can struggle to switch in, so appreciates pivoting from teammates like corviknight, zapdos, manaphy, etc.

a lot of this is just the same info as the desoland analysis, change up some of the wording, teammate/foe examples, etc. for the fast pokemon line, you could mention any of Sandy Shocks, Chien-Pao, primsea Zap, Walking Wake, etc., and you can use other examples for the teammates depending on the offensive mons you list. even for the same mon with two sets that function similarly, two analyses shouldn't look near identical. you dont have to change every single mon here obviously, since the info is correct, but use a little more variety

most of the info here is correct, but i think it needs a bit of rewriting before i stamp 1/2, message/notify me when you're ready for recheck :3
 

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:ceruledge:
[SET]
Sword of Ruin (Ceruledge) @ Life Orb
Ability: Sword of Ruin
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Bitter Blade
- Poltergeist
- Shadow Sneak / Swords Dance
- Close Combat / Shadow Sneak

[SET COMMENTS]
Sword of Ruin Ceruledge is a potent wallbreaker, thanks to its excellent coverage hitting almost everything in the tier for neutral damage, a high Attack stat, and HP recovery with Bitter Blade offsetting Life Orb recoil. Shadow Sneak lets Ceruledge pick off faster foes like Gengar or weakened foes like Skeledirge, Hisuian Electrode, and Barraskewda, while Swords Dance can be used to boost Ceruledge's already high damage giving an example of something OHKOed at +2 would be nice. Close Combat hits Pokemon such as Roaring Moon, Well-Baked Body Kingambit, and Garganacl. Fast Pokemon like Sandy Shocks, Walking Wake, and Chien-Pao, can threaten Ceruledge forcing it out force Ceruledge out, so it can pair excellently with bulky Pokemon like RegenVest Roaring Moon, RegenVest Manaphy, and Scream Tail Quaquaval, respectively, who can wall these Pokemon, while in return; Ceruledge can help against their checks such as Scream Tail and Heatran. Ceruledge can be worn down by Life Orb and entry hazard chip, so it appreciates hazard removal from the likes of Great Tusk, Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. due Due to Ceruledge's frail defenses and several weaknesses it often struggles to switch in, so pivots like Corviknight, Zapdos, and Manaphy, pair excellently with it being able to pivot it in on Pokemon it threatens.

[SET CREDITS]
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:ceruledge:
[SET]
Sword of Ruin (Ceruledge) @ Life Orb
Ability: Sword of Ruin
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Bitter Blade
- Poltergeist
- Shadow Sneak / Swords Dance
- Close Combat / Shadow Sneak

[SET COMMENTS]
Sword of Ruin Ceruledge is a potent wallbreaker, thanks to its excellent coverage hitting almost everything in the tier for neutral damage, a high Attack stat, and HP recovery with Bitter Blade offsetting Life Orb recoil. Shadow Sneak lets Ceruledge pick off faster foes like Gengar or weakened foes like Skeledirge, Hisuian Electrode, and Barraskewda, while Swords Dance can be used to boost Ceruledge's already high damage giving an example of something OHKOed at +2 would be nice. Close Combat hits Pokemon such as Roaring Moon, Well-Baked Body Kingambit, and Garganacl. Fast Pokemon like Sandy Shocks, Walking Wake, and Chien-Pao, can threaten Ceruledge forcing it out force Ceruledge out, so it can pair excellently with bulky Pokemon like RegenVest Roaring Moon, RegenVest Manaphy, and Scream Tail Quaquaval, respectively, who can wall these Pokemon, while in return; Ceruledge can help against their checks such as Scream Tail and Heatran. Ceruledge can be worn down by Life Orb and entry hazard chip, so it appreciates hazard removal from the likes of Great Tusk, Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. due Due to Ceruledge's frail defenses and several weaknesses it often struggles to switch in, so pivots like Corviknight, Zapdos, and Manaphy, pair excellently with it being able to pivot it in on Pokemon it threatens.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yokoisop.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/gimmickyasitgets.540420/
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:ceruledge:
[SET]
Sword of Ruin (Ceruledge) @ Life Orb
Ability: Sword of Ruin
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Bitter Blade
- Poltergeist
- Shadow Sneak / Swords Dance
- Close Combat / Shadow Sneak

[SET COMMENTS]
Sword of Ruin Ceruledge is a potent wallbreaker, thanks to its excellent coverage hitting almost everything in the tier for neutral damage, a high Attack stat, and Bitter Blade offsetting Life Orb recoil. Shadow Sneak lets Ceruledge pick off faster foes like Gengar or weakened foes like Skeledirge poltergeist, Hisuian Electrode, and Barraskewda, while Swords Dance can be used to boost Ceruledge's already high damage, letting it OHKO defensive Kommo-o and physically defensive Garchomp and Zapdos. Close Combat hits Pokemon such as OHKOes Roaring Moon, Well-Baked Body Kingambit, and Garganacl. Fast Pokemon like Sandy Shocks, Walking Wake, and Chien-Pao,(RC) force Ceruledge out, so it can pair excellently with bulky Pokemon like RegenVest Roaring Moon, RegenVest Manaphy manaphy doesn't really wall wake; i think empoleon would be better to mention here, and Quaquaval, respectively, who can wall these Pokemon, while in return; Ceruledge can help against threaten their checks such as Scream Tail and Heatran. Ceruledge can be worn down by Life Orb and entry hazard chip, so it appreciates hazard removal from the likes of Great Tusk, Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. Due to Ceruledge's frail defenses and several weaknesses, it often struggles to switch in, so pivots like Corviknight, Zapdos, and Manaphy,(RC) pair excellently with it being able to pivot it in on Pokemon it threatens.

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[SET]
Sword of Ruin (Ceruledge) @ Life Orb
Ability: Sword of Ruin
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Bitter Blade
- Poltergeist
- Shadow Sneak / Swords Dance
- Close Combat / Shadow Sneak

[SET COMMENTS]
Sword of Ruin Ceruledge is a potent wallbreaker, thanks to its excellent coverage hitting almost everything in the tier for neutral damage, a high Attack stat, and Bitter Blade offsetting Life Orb recoil. Shadow Sneak picks off faster foes like Gengar or and weakened foes like Iron Moth, Hisuian Electrode, and Barraskewda, while Swords Dance can be used to boost Ceruledge's already high damage, letting it OHKO defensive Kommo-o, physically defensive Garchomp, and Zapdos. Close Combat OHKOes Roaring Moon, Well-Baked Body Kingambit, and Garganacl. Fast Pokemon such as Sandy Shocks, Walking Wake, and Chien-Pao force Ceruledge out, so it pairs excellently with bulky Pokemon that can wall them like RegenVest Roaring Moon, Empoleon, and Quaquaval, respectively, who can wall these Pokemon, while in return; respectively; in return, Ceruledge can threaten their checks such as Scream Tail and Heatran. Ceruledge can quickly be worn down by Life Orb and entry hazard chip damage, so it appreciates hazard removal from the likes of Great Tusk, Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. Due to Ceruledge's frail defenses and several weaknesses, it often struggles to switch in, so pivots like Corviknight, Zapdos, and Manaphy pair excellently with it, (comma) being able to pivot it in on Pokemon it threatens.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yokoisop.617542/
Quality checked by:
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[SET]
Sword of Ruin (Ceruledge) @ Life Orb
Ability: Sword of Ruin
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Bitter Blade
- Poltergeist
- Shadow Sneak / Swords Dance
- Close Combat / Shadow Sneak

[SET COMMENTS]
Sword of Ruin Ceruledge is a potent wallbreaker, thanks to its excellent coverage hitting almost everything in the tier for neutral damage, a high Attack stat, and Bitter Blade offsetting Life Orb recoil. Shadow Sneak picks off faster foes like Gengar or and weakened foes like Iron Moth, Hisuian Electrode, and Barraskewda, while Swords Dance can be used to boost Ceruledge's already high damage, letting it OHKO defensive Kommo-o, physically defensive Garchomp, and Zapdos. Close Combat OHKOes Roaring Moon, Well-Baked Body Kingambit, and Garganacl. Fast Pokemon such as Sandy Shocks, Walking Wake, and Chien-Pao force Ceruledge out, so it pairs excellently with bulky Pokemon that can wall them like RegenVest Roaring Moon, Empoleon, and Quaquaval, respectively, who can wall these Pokemon, while in return; respectively; in return, Ceruledge can threaten their checks such as Scream Tail and Heatran. Ceruledge can quickly be worn down by Life Orb and entry hazard chip damage, so it appreciates hazard removal from the likes of Great Tusk, Corviknight, and Mandibuzz. Due to Ceruledge's frail defenses and several weaknesses, it often struggles to switch in, so pivots like Corviknight, Zapdos, and Manaphy pair excellently with it, (comma) being able to pivot it in on Pokemon it threatens.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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GP Team done
ready for upload thanks friend!
 
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