I did this too. Listed pokemonshowdown.com while I was at it lol. I also wrote about Pokémon in essays for Cornell and Harvey Mudd.
alright so how do i write good essays? i have no problem structuring my essays or expressing my ideas well; in fact, i'd say that i excel at that. the problem that i run into is twofold.
1) my essay topics sound trite and uninteresting
2) when you elaborate on trite and uninteresting essay topics, the result is trite and uninteresting.
like...i'm 17. i haven't had some mind expanding spiritual experience. i haven't gotten an internship at a fortune 500. i haven't really done anything that i would consider interesting enough to not bore an admissions officer to death. i have good enough stats to not be auto-rejected to any school; but as we all know, there are tens of thousands of students with a 4.0 and 2200+, so what should set one apart from the other is the personality or passion conveyed in essays.
help
I was in a similar place last year. Great stats, decent extracurriculars, but feeling very disillusioned when it came to the essay process. It didn't help that my parents basically forced me to go to a college essay writing class, which I fucking hated. What they teach you to do, and what most students
actually do, is write very concrete, cookie-cutter essays that basically serve as an addendum to your list of extracurriculars. It's fake, it's stupid, it's dishonest, to deceive yourself into thinking an experience was more important than it actually was. So many people have written about how their one-week community service trip to (insert 3rd world country here) has changed them as a person, making them appreciate what they have. While this may be true to some extent, this tells the admission officer little to nothing about YOU. If a different person went through the exact same experience as you did, they'd be slightly changed in the same exact way, and produce the same exact essay. So either write about a truly unique experience, or do what I did. Well, after dropping out from the essay class, that is. Like you, I haven't had any of those kinds of "truly unique" life-changing experiences, so instead I took mildly-interesting experiences, and
wrote them in a way that showed my character. In other words, it's not the experience that teaches the reader who you are, it's your personal interpretation and self-reflection of that experience. I think I did that particularly well in my Common App essay, and my Stanford "What matters to you and why?" essay. In the former I talked about zip-lining through thick fog, and drew a metaphor basically relating it to coming-of-age. In the latter I wrote about the merits of daydreaming, in a stream-of-consciousness style that parallels day-dreaming (one of my "five words" was "daydreamer").
As cliche as it may sound, be yourself. Don't be a fake bitch, don't delude yourself; write with a clear mind. And if the result isn't interesting, you're not being yourself hard enough. Because most reasonably intelligent people are genuinely
interesting, especially in the way they
think. So all you have to do is make sure your
thinking guides your
writing, not some misguided preconception of what an admission officer wants to read. For the prompts that allow for more creative license, you can almost write stream-of-consciousness once you have the initial idea secured. And although writing isn't always fun, the finished product should be something gratifying, that you're proud of, that you
want people to read.
I took longer than I should have to follow my own advice, but once I did it served me well. Although I was waitlisted/rejected to all the East Coast schools I applied to, I got into all of my West Coast schools, which included my top two (Stanford and Mudd) and UCs. To all who will be/are applying to colleges: please take my advice. Hopefully it will serve you as well as it served me.
Bad Ass or anyone else, feel free to PM me with other questions or advice, I'd be happy to help whenever I have free time :]
On a related note, any Stanford people? I'm an incoming freshman myself, but would love to talk to some current students or alumni as well. So hmu!