Nah you good. I like Scolipede. I have no idea how I could possibly improve the analysis "to standards" then to pointlessly extend obvious descriptions (why did you choose choice band for the choice band set?) or add amusing generic filler which seems pretty common in written up analyses, but if you'd throw pointers, it'd be mildly appreciated. Meh. Scolipede is my baby, and getting stuck with doing 3 sets for him was a motherfucker. But I did it. And I'd like to keep what I've done, as subpar as it may seem to the community. I understand you may be a much better writer then me, and have a more liberal schedule, but shit, I'm not letting anyone have him.