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Dr Ciel · Jan 11th, 2013, 9:17:10 AM

Hello.

Nice balanced team you have going on here. This team seems to be very well put together, so I want to give you some props there. But as with every team, this one has it's flaws. Hopefully my rate can fix these flaws in one way or another. So without further adu, let's get to the rate! Up first, on your Forretress, Red Card isn't that good of an item choice, so I suggest changing it to Leftovers or Shed Shell. If you choose to go with Leftovers, your walling ability is dramatically increased, as you gain 1/8 of your health at the end of each turn. If you go with Shed Shell, you can escape from Magnezone, who likes to switch in to Forry. Staying on Forry, I would suggest using Gyro Ball in favour of Explosion, as Gyro Ball gives you a way to hit Rock types, which are always troublesome. Moving on, I think your Dragonite should have Substitute in favour of Extremespeed. Substitute aids you in helping Dragonite prevent status on it's own, while spreading it's own to the other team. Next up, you say that Status destroys this team, so a Support Blissey would work perfectly in Vaporeons spot, as she provides Wish support like no other and can help cure status that your team my suffer in the forme of Aromatherapy. Well, that's all I have to say for now. I hope my advice helped. Have fun and good luck with your team!

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~Dr Ciel~ (The doctor is OUT)

Jan 11th, 2013, 9:17:10 AM	#2
Dr Ciel When I walk these streets, A loaded six string on my back, I play for keeps, 'Cause I might not make it back Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 642 Brooklyn, New York	Hello. Nice balanced team you have going on here. This team seems to be very well put together, so I want to give you some props there. But as with every team, this one has it's flaws. Hopefully my rate can fix these flaws in one way or another. So without further adu, let's get to the rate! Up first, on your Forretress, Red Card isn't that good of an item choice, so I suggest changing it to Leftovers or Shed Shell. If you choose to go with Leftovers, your walling ability is dramatically increased, as you gain 1/8 of your health at the end of each turn. If you go with Shed Shell, you can escape from Magnezone, who likes to switch in to Forry. Staying on Forry, I would suggest using Gyro Ball in favour of Explosion, as Gyro Ball gives you a way to hit Rock types, which are always troublesome. Moving on, I think your Dragonite should have Substitute in favour of Extremespeed. Substitute aids you in helping Dragonite prevent status on it's own, while spreading it's own to the other team. Next up, you say that Status destroys this team, so a Support Blissey would work perfectly in Vaporeons spot, as she provides Wish support like no other and can help cure status that your team my suffer in the forme of Aromatherapy. Well, that's all I have to say for now. I hope my advice helped. Have fun and good luck with your team! Set Blissey @ Leftovers Lv. 100 -- Natural Cure Nature: Calm - EVs: 4 HP / 252 Def / 252 SDef - Seismic Toss - Toxic - Wish - Aromatherapy ~Dr Ciel~ (The doctor is OUT) __________________ PM or VM me for an OU rate! Last edited by Dr Ciel; Jan 11th, 2013 at 9:51:32 AM.