"It's beginning to look a lot like Christmas!"

ok so i wanted to make an awesome team (since my others were basically, how can i put this?, Crap) and this is what i came up with me and my mate in school think it is quite good now i just need your feedback.
In Depth:

Anti Lead: Banette @ Focus Sash
Lonely
Insomnia
252 HP/252 Spd/6 Atk
Sucker Punch
Thunderbolt
Taunt
Thunder Wave
this is my anti lead. Sucker Punch for gengar since gengar cant put him to sleep. thunderbolt for gyara leads. taunt for bronzong leads. thunder wave to cripple sweeper leads.


Physical Sweeper: Heracross @ Choice Scarf
Adamant
Guts
252 Atk/252 Spd/6 HP
Night Slash
Close Combat
Megahorn
Stone edge
standard sweeper. night slash for genger. CC for STAB. megahorn for STAB and psychics. Stone Edge for flyings.


Physical Wall: Foretress @ Leftovers
Relaxed
Sturdy
252 Def/230 HP/28 Atk
Stealth Rock
Gyro Ball
Rapid Spin
Explosion
Standard. spikes/stealth rock for entry hazard. gyro ball STAB. rapid spin for entry hazards. explosion = BOOM!


Special Sweeper: Gengar @ Focus Sash?
Timid
Levitate
252 Sp.Atk/252 Spd/6 HP
Shadow Ball
Destiny Bond
Thunderbolt
Focus Blast
Standard. shadow ball STAB. Destiny bond to take out others when he dies. T-Bolt for gyara. Focus Blast for ghosts. Hypnosis for sleep.


Mixed Sweeper: Salamence @ Life Orb
Mild
Intimidate
252 Spd/120 Atk/136 Sp.atk
Hydro Pump
Earthquake/Brick Break/Crunch
Flamethrower
Dragon Claw/Draco Meteor
i know what your thinking why flamethrower? well coz it awesome. hydro pump is for fire types. earthquake for steels. Brick Break for light screen and reflect. crunch for ghosts. dragon moves fr STAB.


Special Wall: Umbreon @ Leftovers
Ability: Synchronize
Nature: Careful (+SpDef -SpAtk)
EVs: 252 HP 164 Spe 92 SpDef
-Wish
-Mean Look
-Baton Pass
-Taunt/Yawn/Toxic
Wish for healing. Mean look for trap passing against other walls. batton pass = trap passing. Taunt walls. Yawn sleep. Toxic stall.
well thats my team please rate it i really want this too be a successful team thanks.



Moltres @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 188 HP/164 Def/156 Spd
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Will-o-wisp
- Flamethrower
- Hidden Power [Ground]/Air Slash
- Roost
this is to counter infernape and/or heatran. will-o-wisp for infernape to half attack. flamethrower STAB. HP ground for heatran aswell as infernape. Air Slash for infernape. Roost to heal.


Charizard @ Salac Berry
Adamant
Blaze
252 HP/252 Atk/6 Spd
Substitute
Earthquake
Dragon Claw/Crunch
Fire Fang/Flare Blitz/Swords Dance
this can also counter heatran and infernape. i liked this set a lot when i saw it going around so i considered it. Sub while getting HP down and using Swords Dance. Earthquake for heatran and infernape. dragon calw for dragons. crunch for gengar.

OR i tried to make a special varient. does it look ok?


Charizard @ Salac Berry
Naive/Rash
152 HP/252 Sp.Atk/53 Spd/53 Atk
Substitute
Flamethrower
Dragon Pulse/Focus Blast
Earthquake
Same idea as the physical 1 but this is special. since its special attack is higher than attack im leaning towards this more. Sub and Salac obvious. Flamethrower STAB. Dragon Pulse dragons. Focus Blast coverage maybe? Earthquake for heatran and infernape.
so tell me what you think, I think charizard is a better counter for infernape but what do you think?

You need to look at the RMT rules, specifically:

Rule #3 said:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

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Just stating the effects of your attacks is not enough. If you make a revised version then PM me and I will unlock this thread.