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[SET]
name: Assault Vest
move 1: Bleakwind Storm / Hurricane
move 2: Heat Wave / Focus Blast
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: U-turn
item: Assault Vest
ability: Regenerator
nature: Timid
evs: 208 HP / 132 SpD / 168 Spe
tera type: Steel / Electric

[SET COMMENTS]

Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a very important pivot in the metagame, making use of its high Speed and Knock Off to help force progress against opposing teams and U-turn to pivot out on switch-ins like Zapdos and Rotom-W while remaining healthy with Regenerator. Assault Vest helps Tornadus-T sponge powerful special attacks from threats like Latios, Greninja, and Hydrapple. 168 Speed EVs and a Timid nature allow it to outspeed base 110 Speed Pokemon like Latios and Ogerpon-C, while 208 HP and 132 Special Defense EVs give it a good chance to withstand Choice Specs Latios's Draco Meteor from full HP, even if Assault Vest is removed. Hurricane is an option over Bleakwind Storm that can OHKO Kommo-o after Stealth Rock damage if one wants to sacrifice accuracy for power. Heat Wave provides coverage for Steel-types like Scizor, Excadrill, and Tinkaton, while Focus Blast is less accurate but is more powerful and hits Rock-types like Tyranitar and Hisuian Arcanine. Tera Steel allows Tornadus-T to more easily switch into Latios and Hydrapple, helps it sponge hits from Ogerpon-C, and gives it a resistance to Stealth Rock. Tera Electric allows Tornadus-T to switch into Flying-types like Zapdos and opposing Tornadus-T while protecting it from Zapdos's Static. However, it is important to note that using these Tera types makes Tornadus-T weak to Ground and susceptible to Spikes, so Terastallization generally shouldn't be used unless needed.

Assault Vest Tornadus-T fits on both offense and balance teams, utilizing its ability to force progress and its high Speed to help wear down the opposing team and bring in its teammates. However, having an Assault Vest means that it is susceptible to Stealth Rock damage, and thus, it appreciates having teammates that can remove entry hazards like Excadrill and Mandibuzz. It also appreciates other pivots like Zapdos and Lokix to help it switch in and out more to heal as well as additional Regenerator Pokemon for it to switch into like Hydrapple and Slowking. These Regenerator pivots make it easier for Tornadus-T to make use of its own Regenerator while also helping answer offensive threats it cannot handle like Rhyperior or Hisuian Arcanine. Hydrapple, as well as other Grass-types like Zarude and Sinistcha, also provides a second Ground-resistant team member should Tornadus-T be forced to Terastallize. Tornadus-T also appreciates Ground-types that can absorb Volt Switch from Zapdos such as Rhyperior, Hippowdon, and Sandy Shocks. Tornadus-T can be paired alongside fast offensive threats like Ogerpon to provide a team two fast progress-makers that can overwhelm defensive Pokemon like Hydrapple, Zapdos, and opposing Tornadus-T, and it also fits well alongside wallbreakers such as Mamoswine and Latios, which appreciate its ability to pivot them in.

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[SET]
Name: Assault Vest
Move 1: Bleakwind Storm / Hurricane
Move 2: Heat Wave / Focus Blast
Move 3: Knock Off
Move 4: U-Turn
Item: Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
Nature: Timid
Evs: 208 HP / 132 SpD / 168 Speed
Tera Type: Steel / Electric

[SET COMMENTS]

Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a very important pivot in the metagame, making use of its high speed and access to Knock Off to help force progress against opposing teams and using U-Turn to pivot out on switch-ins like Zapdos and Rotom-W while remaining healthy with Regenerator. The Assault Vest helps Tornadus-T sponge powerful special attacks from threats like Latios, Greninja, or Hydrapple. 168 Speed EVs alongside a Timid nature allows Tornadus-T to outspeed Pokemon with base 110 Speed like Latios and Ogerpon-C, while 208 HP and 132 SpD give it a good chance to withstand Choice Specs Latios Draco Meteor from full even should Assault Vest be removed. Heat Wave provides coverage for Steel-types like Scizor and Tinkaton (Excadrill too, Focus Blast also hits it but this is more reliable so I'd throw the mention here), while Focus Blast is less accurate but more powerful and hits Rock-types like Tyranitar and Arcanine-Hisui. Hurricane is an option over Bleakwind Storm if one wants to give up some accuracy for more power. (Move this up so the moves are mentioned in the order listed on the set) Tera Steel allows Tornadus-Therian to more easily switch into Latios and Hydrapple while also helping it sponge hits from Ogerpon-C and giving it a resist to Stealth Rock, while Tera Electric on the other hand allows it to switch into Flying types like Zapdos and opposing Tornadus-T. However, it is important to note that using these Tera types makes you weak to Ground and susceptible to Spikes, so Tera generally shouldn't use used unless needed.

Assault Vest Tornadus-T fits on both offense and balance teams, utilizing its ability to force progress and high speed to help wear down the opposing team and bring in its teammates. However, having Assault Vest means that Tornadus-T is susceptible to Stealth Rock damage, and thus it appreciates having teammates that can remove the hazards like Excadrill or Mandibuzz. It also appreciates other pivots like Zapdos or Lokix to help it pivot in and out more to heal, as well as additional Regenerator Pokemon for it to switch to like Hydrapple or Slowking that help make it easier for Tornadus-T to abuse its own Regenerator while also helping answer offensive threats it cannot handle like Rhyperior or Arcanine-Hisui. Hydrapple, as well as other Grass-types like Zarude (Would also mention TealPon here), also provides a second Ground resist should Tornadus-T be forced to use Tera. It also appreciates Ground-types that can absorb Volt Switches from Zapdos such as Rhyperior, Hippowdon, or Sandy Shocks. It can be paired alongside fast offensive threats like Ogerpon to provide a team two fast progress makers that can overwhelm defensive Pokemon like Hydrapple, Zapdos, or opposing Tornadus-T, while also fitting well alongside breakers such as Mamoswine or Latios who appreciate its ability to pivot them in.

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[SET]
Name: Assault Vest
Move 1: Bleakwind Storm / Hurricane
Move 2: Heat Wave / Focus Blast
Move 3: Knock Off
Move 4: U-Turn
Item: Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
Nature: Timid
Evs: 208 HP / 132 SpD / 168 Speed
Tera Type: Steel / Electric

[SET COMMENTS]

Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a very important pivot in the metagame, making use of its high speed and access to Knock Off to help force progress against opposing teams and using U-Turn to pivot out on switch-ins like Zapdos and Rotom-W while remaining healthy with Regenerator. The Assault Vest helps Tornadus-T sponge powerful special attacks from threats like Latios, Greninja, or Hydrapple. 168 Speed EVs alongside a Timid nature allows Tornadus-T to outspeed Pokemon with base 110 Speed like Latios and Ogerpon-C, while 208 HP and 132 SpD give it a good chance to withstand Choice Specs Latios Draco Meteor from full even should Assault Vest be removed. Heat Wave provides coverage for Steel-types like Scizor and Tinkaton (Excadrill too, Focus Blast also hits it but this is more reliable so I'd throw the mention here), while Focus Blast is less accurate but more powerful and hits Rock-types like Tyranitar and Arcanine-Hisui. Hurricane is an option over Bleakwind Storm if one wants to give up some accuracy for more power. (Move this up so the moves are mentioned in the order listed on the set) Tera Steel allows Tornadus-Therian to more easily switch into Latios and Hydrapple while also helping it sponge hits from Ogerpon-C and giving it a resist to Stealth Rock, while Tera Electric on the other hand allows it to switch into Flying types like Zapdos and opposing Tornadus-T. However, it is important to note that using these Tera types makes you weak to Ground and susceptible to Spikes, so Tera generally shouldn't use used unless needed.

Assault Vest Tornadus-T fits on both offense and balance teams, utilizing its ability to force progress and high speed to help wear down the opposing team and bring in its teammates. However, having Assault Vest means that Tornadus-T is susceptible to Stealth Rock damage, and thus it appreciates having teammates that can remove the hazards like Excadrill or Mandibuzz. It also appreciates other pivots like Zapdos or Lokix to help it pivot in and out more to heal, as well as additional Regenerator Pokemon for it to switch to like Hydrapple or Slowking that help make it easier for Tornadus-T to abuse its own Regenerator while also helping answer offensive threats it cannot handle like Rhyperior or Arcanine-Hisui. Hydrapple, as well as other Grass-types like Zarude (Would also mention TealPon here), also provides a second Ground resist should Tornadus-T be forced to use Tera. It also appreciates Ground-types that can absorb Volt Switches from Zapdos such as Rhyperior, Hippowdon, or Sandy Shocks. It can be paired alongside fast offensive threats like Ogerpon to provide a team two fast progress makers that can overwhelm defensive Pokemon like Hydrapple, Zapdos, or opposing Tornadus-T, while also fitting well alongside breakers such as Mamoswine or Latios who appreciate its ability to pivot them in.

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[SET]
Name: Assault Vest
Move 1: Bleakwind Storm / Hurricane
Move 2: Heat Wave / Focus Blast
Move 3: Knock Off
Move 4: U-turn
Item: Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
Nature: Timid
Evs: 208 HP / 132 SpD / 168 Speed
Tera Type: Steel / Electric

[SET COMMENTS]

Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a very important pivot in the metagame, making use of its high speed and access to Knock Off to help force progress against opposing teams and using U-turn to pivot out on switch-ins like Zapdos and Rotom-W while remaining healthy with Regenerator. Assault Vest helps Tornadus-T sponge powerful special attacks from threats like Latios, Greninja, or Hydrapple. 168 Speed Evs alongside a Timid nature allows Tornadus-T to outspeed Pokemon with base 110 speed like Latios and Ogerpon-C, while 208 HP and 132 SpD give it a good chance to withstand Choice Specs Latios Draco Meteor from full even should Assault Vest be removed. Hurricane is an option over Bleakwind Storm if one wants to give up some accuracy for more power. Notably garuantees the OHKO on Kommo-o after rocks Heat Wave provides coverage for Steel-types like Scizor, Excadrill, and Tinkaton, while Focus Blast is less accurate but more powerful and hits Rock-types like Tyranitar and Arcanine-Hisui. Tera Steel allows Tornadus-Therian to more easily switch into Latios and Hydrapple while also helping it sponge hits from Ogerpon-C and giving it a resist to Stealth Rock, while Tera Electric allows it to switch into Flying types like Zapdos and opposing Tornadus-T. However, it is important to note that using these Teras makes you weak to Ground and susceptible to Spikes, so Tera generally shouldn't use be used unless needed. I'd try to squeeze in a mention about tera elec avoiding the risk of static from Zapdos

Assault Vest Tornadus-T fits on both offense and balance teams, utilizing its ability to force progress and high speed to help wear down the opposing team and bring in its teammates. However, having Assault Vest means that Tornadus-T is susceptible to Stealth Rock damage, and this it appreciates having teammates that can remove hazards like Excadrill or Mandibuzz. It also appreciates other pivots like Zapdos or Lokix to help it pivot in and out more to heal, as well as additional Regenerator Pokemon for it to switch to like Hydrapple or Slowking that help make it easier for Tornadus-T to abuse its own Regenerator while also helping answer offensive threats it cannot handle like Rhyperior or Arcanine-Hisui. Hydrapple, as well as other Grass-types like Zarude and Ogerpon, also provides a second Ground resist should Tornadus-T be forced to use Tera. It also appreciates Ground-types that can absorb Volt Switches from Zapdos such as Rhyperior, Hippowdon, or Sandy Shocks. It can be paired alongside fast offensive threats like Ogerpon to provide a team two fast progress makers that can overwhelm defensive Pokemon like Hydrapple, Zapdos, or opposing Tornadus-T, while also fitting well alongside breakers such as Mamoswine or Latios who appreciate its ability to pivot them in.

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[SET]
Name: Assault Vest
Move 1: Bleakwind Storm / Hurricane
Move 2: Heat Wave / Focus Blast
Move 3: Knock Off
Move 4: U-turn
Item: Assault Vest
Ability: Regenerator
Nature: Timid
Evs: 208 HP / 132 SpD / 168 Speed
Tera Type: Steel / Electric

[SET COMMENTS]

Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a very important pivot in the metagame, making use of its high speed and access to Knock Off to help force progress against opposing teams and using U-turn to pivot out on switch-ins like Zapdos and Rotom-W while remaining healthy with Regenerator. Assault Vest helps Tornadus-T sponge powerful special attacks from threats like Latios, Greninja, or Hydrapple. 168 Speed Evs alongside a Timid nature allows Tornadus-T to outspeed Pokemon with base 110 speed like Latios and Ogerpon-C, while 208 HP and 132 SpD give it a good chance to withstand Choice Specs Latios Draco Meteor from full even should Assault Vest be removed. Hurricane is an option over Bleakwind Storm if one wants to give up some accuracy for more power. Notably garuantees the OHKO on Kommo-o after rocks Heat Wave provides coverage for Steel-types like Scizor, Excadrill, and Tinkaton, while Focus Blast is less accurate but more powerful and hits Rock-types like Tyranitar and Arcanine-Hisui. Tera Steel allows Tornadus-Therian to more easily switch into Latios and Hydrapple while also helping it sponge hits from Ogerpon-C and giving it a resist to Stealth Rock, while Tera Electric allows it to switch into Flying types like Zapdos and opposing Tornadus-T. However, it is important to note that using these Teras makes you weak to Ground and susceptible to Spikes, so Tera generally shouldn't use be used unless needed. I'd try to squeeze in a mention about tera elec avoiding the risk of static from Zapdos

Assault Vest Tornadus-T fits on both offense and balance teams, utilizing its ability to force progress and high speed to help wear down the opposing team and bring in its teammates. However, having Assault Vest means that Tornadus-T is susceptible to Stealth Rock damage, and this it appreciates having teammates that can remove hazards like Excadrill or Mandibuzz. It also appreciates other pivots like Zapdos or Lokix to help it pivot in and out more to heal, as well as additional Regenerator Pokemon for it to switch to like Hydrapple or Slowking that help make it easier for Tornadus-T to abuse its own Regenerator while also helping answer offensive threats it cannot handle like Rhyperior or Arcanine-Hisui. Hydrapple, as well as other Grass-types like Zarude and Ogerpon, also provides a second Ground resist should Tornadus-T be forced to use Tera. It also appreciates Ground-types that can absorb Volt Switches from Zapdos such as Rhyperior, Hippowdon, or Sandy Shocks. It can be paired alongside fast offensive threats like Ogerpon to provide a team two fast progress makers that can overwhelm defensive Pokemon like Hydrapple, Zapdos, or opposing Tornadus-T, while also fitting well alongside breakers such as Mamoswine or Latios who appreciate its ability to pivot them in.

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should be good to go, thanks for the check up!

 

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[ThatOneApple]

Tweaked to replace tealpon with sinistcha in the part about secondary ground resists, as you usually arent sending tealpon directly into attacks.

Just figured id point this out to avoid confusion

 

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[SET]
name: Assault Vest
move 1: Bleakwind Storm / Hurricane
move 2: Heat Wave / Focus Blast
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: U-turn
item: Assault Vest
ability: Regenerator
nature: Timid
evs: 208 HP / 132 SpD / 168 Speed
tera type: Steel / Electric

[SET COMMENTS]

Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a very important pivot in the metagame, making use of its high Speed speed and access to Knock Off to help force progress against opposing teams and using U-turn to pivot out on switch-ins like Zapdos and Rotom-W while remaining healthy with Regenerator. Assault Vest helps Tornadus-T sponge powerful special attacks from threats like Latios, Greninja, and or Hydrapple. 168 Speed Evs alongside EVs and a Timid nature allow it allows Tornadus-T to outspeed Base 110 Speed Pokemon with base 110 speed like Latios and Ogerpon-C, while 208 HP and 132 Special Defense EVs SpD give it a good chance to withstand Choice Specs Latios's Draco Meteor from full,(comma) even should if Assault Vest be is removed. Hurricane is an option over Bleakwind Storm that can OHKO Kommo-o after Stealth rock damage if one wants to sacrifices accuracy for power. if one wants to give up some accuracy for more power that can OHKO Kommo-o after Stealth Rocks. Heat Wave provides coverage for Steel-types like Scizor, Excadrill, and Tinkaton, while Focus Blast is less accurate but is more powerful and also hits Rock-types like Tyranitar and Hisuian Arcanine Arcanine-Hisui. Tera Steel allows Tornadus-Therian to more easily switch into Latios and Hydrapple while also helping,(comma) helps it sponge hits from Ogerpon-C,(comma) and giving gives it a resistance to Stealth Rock.(period), while Tera Electric allows it Tornadus-T to switch into Flying-types(add hyphen) like Zapdos and opposing Tornadus-T while protecting it from Zapdos's Static. However, it is important to note that using these Teras Tera types makes you Tornadus-T weak to Ground and susceptible to Spikes, so Terastallization generally shouldn't be used unless needed.

Assault Vest Tornadus-T fits on both offense and balance teams, utilizing its ability to force progress and its high Speed speed to help wear down the opposing team and bring in its teammates. However, having an Assault Vest means that Tornadus-T it is susceptible to Stealth Rock damage, and thus,(comma) it appreciates having teammates that can remove entry hazards like Excadrill or and Mandibuzz. It also appreciates other pivots like Zapdos or and Lokix to help it pivot in and out more to heal,(remove comma) as well as additional Regenerator Pokemon for it to switch into like Hydrapple or and Slowking.(period) that help These Regenerator pivots make it easier for Tornadus-T to abuse(to my knowledge, this word is prohibited in analyses) make use of its own Regenerator while also helping answer offensive threats it cannot handle like Rhyperior or Hisuian Arcanine Arcanine-Hisui. Hydrapple, Zarude, and Sinistcha as well as other Grass-types like Zarude and Sinistcha, also provides a second Ground resist Ground-resistant teammate,(comma) should Tornadus-T be forced to Terastallize use Tera. It also appreciates Ground-types that can absorb Volt Switches from Zapdos such as Rhyperior, Hippowdon, or and Sandy Shocks. It Tornadus-T can be paired alongside fast offensive threats like Ogerpon to provide a team with two fast progress-makers(<-hyphenated) that can overwhelm defensive Pokemon like Hydrapple, Zapdos, or and opposing Tornadus-T,(remove comma) while also fitting well alongside wallbreakers such as Mamoswine or and Latios,(comma) which who appreciate its ability to pivot them in.

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[SET]
name: Assault Vest
move 1: Bleakwind Storm / Hurricane
move 2: Heat Wave / Focus Blast
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: U-turn
item: Assault Vest
ability: Regenerator
nature: Timid
evs: 208 HP / 132 SpD / 168 Speed
tera type: Steel / Electric

[SET COMMENTS]

Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a very important pivot in the metagame, making use of its high Speed speed and access to Knock Off to help force progress against opposing teams and using U-turn to pivot out on switch-ins like Zapdos and Rotom-W while remaining healthy with Regenerator. Assault Vest helps Tornadus-T sponge powerful special attacks from threats like Latios, Greninja, and or Hydrapple. 168 Speed Evs alongside EVs and a Timid nature allow it allows Tornadus-T to outspeed base 110 Speed Pokemon with base 110 speed like Latios and Ogerpon-C, while 208 HP and 132 Special Defense EVs SpD give it a good chance to withstand Choice Specs Latios's Draco Meteor from full HP,(comma) even should if Assault Vest be is removed. Hurricane is an option over Bleakwind Storm that can OHKO Kommo-o after Stealth Rock damage if one wants to sacrifices accuracy for power. if one wants to give up some accuracy for more power that can OHKO Kommo-o after Stealth Rocks. Heat Wave provides coverage for Steel-types like Scizor, Excadrill, and Tinkaton, while Focus Blast is less accurate but is more powerful and also hits Rock-types like Tyranitar and Hisuian Arcanine Arcanine-Hisui. Tera Steel allows Tornadus-Therian to more easily switch into Latios and Hydrapple while also helping,(comma) helps it sponge hits from Ogerpon-C,(comma) and giving gives it a resistance to Stealth Rock.(period), while Tera Electric allows it Tornadus-T to switch into Flying-types(add hyphen) like Zapdos and opposing Tornadus-T while protecting it from Zapdos's Static. However, it is important to note that using these Teras Tera types makes you Tornadus-T weak to Ground and susceptible to Spikes, so Terastallization generally shouldn't be used unless needed.

Assault Vest Tornadus-T fits on both offense and balance teams, utilizing its ability to force progress and its high Speed speed to help wear down the opposing team and bring in its teammates. However, having Assault Vest means that Tornadus-T it is susceptible to Stealth Rock damage, and thus,(comma) it appreciates having teammates that can remove entry hazards like Excadrill or and Mandibuzz. It also appreciates other pivots like Zapdos or and Lokix to help it pivot switch in and out more to heal,(remove comma) as well as additional Regenerator Pokemon for it to switch into like Hydrapple or and Slowking.(period) that help These Regenerator pivots make it easier for Tornadus-T to abuse make use of its own Regenerator while also helping answer offensive threats it cannot handle like Rhyperior or Hisuian Arcanine Arcanine-Hisui. Hydrapple, as well as other Grass-types like Zarude and Sinistcha, also provides a second Ground resist Ground-resistant team member should Tornadus-T be forced to Terastallize use Tera. It Tornadus-T also appreciates Ground-types that can absorb Volt Switches Switch from Zapdos such as Rhyperior, Hippowdon, or and Sandy Shocks. It can be paired alongside fast offensive threats like Ogerpon to provide a team with two fast progress makers that can overwhelm defensive Pokemon like Hydrapple, Zapdos, or and opposing Tornadus-T, while also fitting and it also fits well alongside wallbreakers such as Mamoswine or and Latios,(comma) which who appreciate its ability to pivot them in.

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- The "base" in "base [stat]" is not capitalized.
- I'd specify "from full HP" rather than using the shortened "from full".
- The "rock" in "Stealth Rock" wasn't capitalized in the Hurricane Sentence
- In the sentence about Grass-type teammates, "a second Ground-resistant teammate" doesn't really work because Tornadus-T is the first one, and its not its own teammate. I would've also kept the part that specified there are other good Grass-type teammates than just the three examples.

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[SET]
name: Assault Vest
move 1: Bleakwind Storm / Hurricane
move 2: Heat Wave / Focus Blast
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: U-turn
item: Assault Vest
ability: Regenerator
nature: Timid
evs: 208 HP / 132 SpD / 168 Speed
tera type: Steel / Electric

[SET COMMENTS]

Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a very important pivot in the metagame, making use of its high Speed speed and access to Knock Off to help force progress against opposing teams and using U-turn to pivot out on switch-ins like Zapdos and Rotom-W while remaining healthy with Regenerator. Assault Vest helps Tornadus-T sponge powerful special attacks from threats like Latios, Greninja, and or Hydrapple. 168 Speed Evs alongside EVs and a Timid nature allow it allows Tornadus-T to outspeed Base 110 Speed Pokemon with base 110 speed like Latios and Ogerpon-C, while 208 HP and 132 Special Defense EVs SpD give it a good chance to withstand Choice Specs Latios's Draco Meteor from full,(comma) even should if Assault Vest be is removed. Hurricane is an option over Bleakwind Storm that can OHKO Kommo-o after Stealth rock damage if one wants to sacrifices accuracy for power. if one wants to give up some accuracy for more power that can OHKO Kommo-o after Stealth Rocks. Heat Wave provides coverage for Steel-types like Scizor, Excadrill, and Tinkaton, while Focus Blast is less accurate but is more powerful and also hits Rock-types like Tyranitar and Hisuian Arcanine Arcanine-Hisui. Tera Steel allows Tornadus-Therian to more easily switch into Latios and Hydrapple while also helping,(comma) helps it sponge hits from Ogerpon-C,(comma) and giving gives it a resistance to Stealth Rock.(period), while Tera Electric allows it Tornadus-T to switch into Flying-types(add hyphen) like Zapdos and opposing Tornadus-T while protecting it from Zapdos's Static. However, it is important to note that using these Teras Tera types makes you Tornadus-T weak to Ground and susceptible to Spikes, so Terastallization generally shouldn't be used unless needed.

Assault Vest Tornadus-T fits on both offense and balance teams, utilizing its ability to force progress and its high Speed speed to help wear down the opposing team and bring in its teammates. However, having an Assault Vest means that Tornadus-T it is susceptible to Stealth Rock damage, and thus,(comma) it appreciates having teammates that can remove entry hazards like Excadrill or and Mandibuzz. It also appreciates other pivots like Zapdos or and Lokix to help it pivot in and out more to heal,(remove comma) as well as additional Regenerator Pokemon for it to switch into like Hydrapple or and Slowking.(period) that help These Regenerator pivots make it easier for Tornadus-T to abuse(to my knowledge, this word is prohibited in analyses) make use of its own Regenerator while also helping answer offensive threats it cannot handle like Rhyperior or Hisuian Arcanine Arcanine-Hisui. Hydrapple, Zarude, and Sinistcha as well as other Grass-types like Zarude and Sinistcha, also provides a second Ground resist Ground-resistant teammate,(comma) should Tornadus-T be forced to Terastallize use Tera. It also appreciates Ground-types that can absorb Volt Switches from Zapdos such as Rhyperior, Hippowdon, or and Sandy Shocks. It Tornadus-T can be paired alongside fast offensive threats like Ogerpon to provide a team with two fast progress-makers(<-hyphenated) that can overwhelm defensive Pokemon like Hydrapple, Zapdos, or and opposing Tornadus-T,(remove comma) while also fitting well alongside wallbreakers such as Mamoswine or and Latios,(comma) which who appreciate its ability to pivot them in.

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[SET]
name: Assault Vest
move 1: Bleakwind Storm / Hurricane
move 2: Heat Wave / Focus Blast
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: U-turn
item: Assault Vest
ability: Regenerator
nature: Timid
evs: 208 HP / 132 SpD / 168 Speed
tera type: Steel / Electric

[SET COMMENTS]

Assault Vest Tornadus-T is a very important pivot in the metagame, making use of its high Speed speed and access to Knock Off to help force progress against opposing teams and using U-turn to pivot out on switch-ins like Zapdos and Rotom-W while remaining healthy with Regenerator. Assault Vest helps Tornadus-T sponge powerful special attacks from threats like Latios, Greninja, and or Hydrapple. 168 Speed Evs alongside EVs and a Timid nature allow it allows Tornadus-T to outspeed base 110 Speed Pokemon with base 110 speed like Latios and Ogerpon-C, while 208 HP and 132 Special Defense EVs SpD give it a good chance to withstand Choice Specs Latios's Draco Meteor from full HP,(comma) even should if Assault Vest be is removed. Hurricane is an option over Bleakwind Storm that can OHKO Kommo-o after Stealth Rock damage if one wants to sacrifices accuracy for power. if one wants to give up some accuracy for more power that can OHKO Kommo-o after Stealth Rocks. Heat Wave provides coverage for Steel-types like Scizor, Excadrill, and Tinkaton, while Focus Blast is less accurate but is more powerful and also hits Rock-types like Tyranitar and Hisuian Arcanine Arcanine-Hisui. Tera Steel allows Tornadus-Therian to more easily switch into Latios and Hydrapple while also helping,(comma) helps it sponge hits from Ogerpon-C,(comma) and giving gives it a resistance to Stealth Rock.(period), while Tera Electric allows it Tornadus-T to switch into Flying-types(add hyphen) like Zapdos and opposing Tornadus-T while protecting it from Zapdos's Static. However, it is important to note that using these Teras Tera types makes you Tornadus-T weak to Ground and susceptible to Spikes, so Terastallization generally shouldn't be used unless needed.

Assault Vest Tornadus-T fits on both offense and balance teams, utilizing its ability to force progress and its high Speed speed to help wear down the opposing team and bring in its teammates. However, having Assault Vest means that Tornadus-T it is susceptible to Stealth Rock damage, and thus,(comma) it appreciates having teammates that can remove entry hazards like Excadrill or and Mandibuzz. It also appreciates other pivots like Zapdos or and Lokix to help it pivot switch in and out more to heal,(remove comma) as well as additional Regenerator Pokemon for it to switch into like Hydrapple or and Slowking.(period) that help These Regenerator pivots make it easier for Tornadus-T to abuse make use of its own Regenerator while also helping answer offensive threats it cannot handle like Rhyperior or Hisuian Arcanine Arcanine-Hisui. Hydrapple, as well as other Grass-types like Zarude and Sinistcha, also provides a second Ground resist Ground-resistant team member should Tornadus-T be forced to Terastallize use Tera. It Tornadus-T also appreciates Ground-types that can absorb Volt Switches Switch from Zapdos such as Rhyperior, Hippowdon, or and Sandy Shocks. It can be paired alongside fast offensive threats like Ogerpon to provide a team with two fast progress makers that can overwhelm defensive Pokemon like Hydrapple, Zapdos, or and opposing Tornadus-T, while also fitting and it also fits well alongside wallbreakers such as Mamoswine or and Latios,(comma) which who appreciate its ability to pivot them in.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/thatoneapple.620325/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/melt-gibson.617840/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/twilight.344575/
Grammar checked by:

AM Check Feedback

- The "base" in "base [stat]" is not capitalized.
- I'd specify "from full HP" rather than using the shortened "from full".
- The "rock" in "Stealth Rock" wasn't capitalized in the Hurricane Sentence
- In the sentence about Grass-type teammates, "a second Ground-resistant teammate" doesn't really work because Tornadus-T is the first one, and its not its own teammate. I would've also kept the part that specified there are other good Grass-type teammates than just the three examples.

1/1 GP Team done
Credit adorluigi too

Should be all good to go, thanks!