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Cant think of a witty Team Name

Discussion in 'BW OU Teams' started by ProfessorNapalm, Sep 6, 2012.

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  1. ProfessorNapalm

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    Ok, heres my first team on smogon, so try to be nice. Just trying to figure out what works, what needs work and what doesnt work.

    Landorus w/ Expert Belt
    Naive Nature
    Sheer Force ability
    228 atk 28 SpAtk 252 Spe
    Earthquake/Stone Edge/ U-Turn/ HP Ice

    Reuniclus w/ Life Orb
    Bold Nature
    Magic Guard ability
    252 Hp 252 Def 4 SpD
    Calm Mind/Recover/Focus Blast/Psyshock

    Hitmontop w/ Life Orb
    Adamant Nature
    Technician Ability
    252 HP 252 Atk 4 Spe
    Fake Out/ Mach Punch/ Close Combat/ Sucker Punch

    Swampert w/ Leftovers
    Adamant Nature
    Torrent
    240 HP 252 Atk 16 Def
    Waterfall/ Earthquake/ Ice Punch/ Stealth Rock

    Chandelure w/ Choice Scarf
    Modest Nature
    Flash Fire
    252 SpAtk 252 Spe 4 spD
    Fire Blast/ Shadow Ball/ Energy Ball/ HP Fight

    Breloom w/ Toxic Orb
    Adamant
    Poison Heal
    12 HP 244 Atk 252 Spe
    Spore/ Substitute/ Focus Punch/ Seed Bomb

    Ok, Now you guys can tear it apart. I just need to know what to remove and add to make this team work. Thanks in advance
  2. TGMD

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    Hello ProfesserNapalm, your RMT needs descriptions for each pokemon describing their role in the team, why you chose their specific EVs / moveset etc. Please read the RMT Rules and then edit your RMT accordingly, otherwise a mod will lock this thread. It also may be a good idea to look around the forums at other OU Teams and how they are presented to get a better idea of what's an acceptable level of presentation.
  3. Delko

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    What Doom said. PM me your descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.

    Welcome to Smogon !
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