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First attempt at a competitive team.

Discussion in 'BW OU Teams' started by Diaord, Jul 16, 2012.

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  1. Diaord

    Diaord

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    Hi. Before I begin, this team is currently in a Fourth Gen Soul Silver game. Once my White game has the E4 finished, I will be moving it onto fifth generation.

    Currently, the team is EV trained and nature/Ability picked. I have not attempted to use Pokemon with perfect IVs.

    All will be used at Lv 100.

    Dragonite @ ?
    252 HP / 206 Spe / 52 Atk
    Jolly, Inner Focus (Is it possible to change his ability in dream world or will I have to retrain to get multiscale?)

    Outrage, Dragon Dance, Thunder Punch - (Wing Attack) - Wing attack will be removed, maybe for Ice Punch or a more reliable Physical dragon move, maybe even fire punch in case of steel types like Scizor and perl.

    Dragonite is a bulky damage dealer (sweeper?) in this team. I know that against everything but steel he will do a decent amount of damage.

    Scizor @ ?
    252 Atk / 252 Spe / 4 HP
    Adamant Technician

    Swords Dance, Bug Bite, Uturn and Bullet punch

    I love both bug bite and Bullet punch for their STAB/Tech power of 135. Swords dance only helps to increase this. 252 Spe EVs help to allow the pokemon to outspeed things that bugs are good against, although I guess I must be wary of psychic/dark/fire/electric/water types with priority moves and bullet punchers, not that they should be using it against a steel type anyway.

    Staraptor @ Choice Scarf
    252 Atk / 252 Spe / 4 HP
    Adamant Intimidate

    Uturn, Brave bird, Close combat and fly (he is still my utility outside of competitive play.)

    Should be fairly obvious in role, it takes on a leadership position and runs ahead of the line, hopefully able to outspeed in uturn choice scarf and let me set up an opponent for the fight at hand. Being a staraptor, I wouldn't be afraid to throw it away, since in the end it will die rather quickly.

    Alakazam @ ?
    252 Sp Atk / 252 Spe / 4Def
    Modest, (Synchronise)

    Focus Blast, Psychic, Calm Mind and ?

    A Special coverage sweeper.

    Typhlosion @ ?
    252 Sp Atk / 252 Spe / 4 HP
    Rash/Mild (Blaze)

    Flamethrower, Eruption, (Earthquake) (Swift)

    A fire-type who's only here because I have him. I'd love to keep him on but he isn't the best fire type available. if you can give me a better firetype that's in OU or lower, I'll look into him.

    Tyranitar
    252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Def
    Adamant Sand stream

    Earthquake, Crunch, Stone edge and stealth rock

    I like the tyrant. I don't know if he's any good as he is.

    How is this list? I don't think it works well together. I've put together pokemon I like for themselves and haven't really thought about them as a team. if anyone's willing to help me understand what I'm doing wrong, it'd be greatly appreciated!
  2. superpokefan

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    it looks fine! there r a few things that could be changed, 2 get multiscale, u r goind 2 have 2 get a new dragonite, but once u get 1, try using fire punch over thunderpunch and roost over wing attack.
  3. Eleon

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    You need to rework how you've listed your team and add some better descriptions or the thread will be locked by a mod. Most people set up their Pokemon description like this:

    [​IMG]
    Dragonite (F) Lum Berry
    Ability - Multiscale
    Adamant Nature
    252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
    - Outrage
    - Fire Punch
    - Earthquake
    - Dragon Dance


    Even without the picture, that set-up is far easier on the eyes and easier to read.
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