Huntail [Analysis] (GP 2/2)

[RitterCat]

Very good check Engi, also my first official stamp!

GP 2/2

 

[Complications]

OK, thanks. I'll do the editing ASAP.

 

[sirndpt]

title the set Mixed Shell Smash - that's what the QC members proposed and I see no good reason for the words to be merged

by many scarfed Choice Scarf revenge killers, such as Jolly Archeops

It is also outsped by non-Choice Scarf positive natured base 130s

but this is risky as you Huntail will most likely take damage when Huntail on the turn it uses Shell Smash in fact, re-look at the first few sentences of this part, there are several instances you refer to Huntail with the pronoun 'you' - which should only be used to refer to the trainer.

Water Veil prevents Huntail from being burned and therefore is makes it harder to cripple

Even if it isn't burned, Thunder Wave cripples it. rephrase - if it IS burned, you can't thunder wave it..?

 

[Sayonara]

I believe Huntail does fairly well in RU, as it can SmashPass into Sharpedo, who can literally destroy a team from there. I'd recommend Substitute > Crunch | Return, to be able to safely pass the Shell Smash, which is crucial for a successful pass. Other than that, nice sets. Well done.

 

[Complications]

Smashpassing is banned.

Once I figure out what —(em-dash) means I will be finished.

 

[Oglemi]

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