Hypno

[ManOfMany]

Overview
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-Great Special Bulk
-Can support the team in wish
-Mostly outclassed by Lickilicky/Togetic
-Resistance to focus blast and neutrality to electric/ice type moves gives it a slight niche
-Reliable recovery differs it from Grumpig
-Insomnia allows it to switch in on sleep powder inducers
-Access to thunder wave allows it to cripple offensive pokemon

Special Wall
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name: Special Wall
move 1- Wish
move 2- Protect
move 3- Thunder wave/Toxic
move 4- Seismic Toss/Psychic/Zen Headbutt
item: leftovers
evs: 252 HP/ 4 Def/ 252 SpD
Nature: Calm/Careful

Set Details
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-Wish is the most essential part of the set. It heals Hypno and other pokemon on its team.
-Protect

 

[Anty]

You should do the format like you did with Golduck, Pokey-Man, ie this format. The moves should be capitalised and look like this:
SET NAME
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name: SET NAME
move 1: Wish
move 2: Protect
move 3:
move 4:
ability:
item:
evs:
nature:
Also the overview should be done in bullet point form till you get to 2 QC checks, then you may write it up.

Also heal bell deserves a mention as a slash in move three, and i dont see a need for zen headbutt, as psychic is stronger, and zen doesnt even hit ninetales for much more damage

 

[ManOfMany]

You should do the format like you did with Golduck, Pokey-Man, ie this format. The moves should be capitalised and look like this:
SET NAME
########
name: SET NAME
move 1: Wish
move 2: Protect
move 3:
move 4:
ability:
item:
evs:
nature:
Also the overview should be done in bullet point form till you get to 2 QC checks, then you may write it up.

Also heal bell deserves a mention as a slash in move three, and i dont see a need for zen headbutt, as psychic is stronger, and zen doesnt even hit ninetales for much more damage

Okay.
Hypno doesn't get heal bell unfortunately, and I only put zen headbutt because it can kind of paraflinch with thunder wave.

 

[Mcfreak]

physical attacker
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move 1- Power-Up Punch
move 2- Ice Punch
move 3- Fire Punch
move 4- Psycho Cut
Item: Assault Vest
evs: 4 HP/ 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Nature: Adamant
Abillity: Insomnia

 

[WhiteDMist]

no to the above set, it's too weak and doesn't really make the most of Hypno's assets. ManOfMany please finish this skeleton, or I will have to reassign. You have 48 hours of course.

 

[ManOfMany]

I finished Lapras, but you can reassign this

 

[WhiteDMist]

ok, will lock then.