Lets take a Crack at a D/P Warstory:

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Me VS Some dude Named YOOOOOOOOOOOO Aka L O ST
Don't ask I met him randomly in SPP.
Anyways I was itching for battles when he said he'd agree to a match.
Skiks' Team:

YOOOOO's Team:


So the match starts as usual and I'm Not sure what to expect. First comes out My Weavile Sikes VS TTar. So I do what any sane Trainer would do. Attack.
Sikes Used Brick Break.
About 95% Damage To TTar
TTar Used Stone Edge.
Sikes Fainted.

5-6

Crap thats what I get for using a 0 IV Weavile
Next I send out Pastel my Azelf:

Azelf is sent out.
Azelf uses Grass knot.
TTar Fainted.

5-5

Wooo now that thats over with I was breathing easier. Or was I gonna get a break?
Gliscor is sent out!
Feck Speed, Attack, and Sandstorm. Anyways better hope my EV spread pays off or hope for a critical Hax.
Pastel Used Psychic.
69% damage
Gliscor used X Scissor.
80% Damage
WHY DIDN'T I USE NASTY PLOT?!!!!11 Anyways I made due with what I could do.

YOOOO Switched to Metagross.
Pastel USED Psychic
10% Damage.
Kudos on his part. Damage from Sanstorm was gonna kill me soon or Metagross would gg Pastel. I needed to attack no choice.
Pastel used Flamethrower.
75% Damage
Metgross used Meteor Mash.
Pastel Fainted.

4-5

Not looking good. Although I have two of his pokes damaged fairly well I don't have many speedsters left. What to Do. Then I remembered I had a pokemon with the Balls to take his heavy hitters on. No not Cressy but....
Skiks Sent out Tangrowth.
Go Mojo. He should do well.
Metagross used Meteor Mash
Mojo used Sleep Powder. It's a hit.
Yay things look Great now to Knock Off.
Metagross Switched to Swampert.
Tangrowth Used Knock Off
10% Damage. Leftovers were taken off
YIKES! I was scared at that point. My Mojo was a Physical Wall but I usually had Speciall attacker to take this thing down. Well At Least I can Leech Seed but then I thought might as well take a Risk. BTW Leftovers was healing my Tangrowth's sandstorm damage.
Tangrowth Used Power Whip
Swampert Fainted.

4-4

Go Mojo you're the man now. Let see what he does next.
YOOOO sent out Gliscor.
Ahhhh I hate this thing. Haet. Yes Haet. Anyways I just did wht I guessed I could do with it's more then half health already gone for this thing.
Gliscor Used X Scissor
45% Damage
Tangrowth Used Sleep Powder.
Gliscor Went To Sleep.
Mojo I love you now to annoy.
Tangrowth used Leech Seed.
Gliscor was seeded.
Now I'm not only surviving the sandstorm I'm healing. Next was just incase move
Mojo Used Knock Off.
10% Damage. Some item fell.
Sorry my memory was fuzzy here. Anyways here comes the finish which became Awesomer.
Gliscor was Switched to Rhypherior.
YIKES!!11 I was scared. My heart was Racing. So I hoped my move would turn out well.
Tangrowth used Power Whip.
65% Damage.
Score. Mojo pwns. Anyways I decided to try and make it sleep because I didn't wanna risk a power whip miss.
Tangrowth USed Sleep Powder.
Rhypherior went to sleep.
Things are looking up. I procceded to Leech Seed Knock off and they all hit making my opponent switch. The Raperior was at low health by this time.
Gliscor was sent out.
Uggggh Anyways.
Mojo used Power Whip
Miss
Gliscor used Toxic
Mojo Used Power Whip
Gliscor Fainted

4-3

Feckkk bad luck right there. Anyways.
Metagross was sent out.
Tangrowth was poisned which negated lefties and sandstorm made it worse.
at this point Mojo was running out of juic it only had 33% left. I made the most logical Move.
Metagross Used Thunder Punch
11% left on Mojo
Mojo used Power Whip
9% for Metagross
Damn Mojo fainted after this turn so

3-3

My next move was obvious but not to him.
Skiks sent out Momotaros.
My infernape. Ready to rape with wide lens.
Momo used Flare Blitz
Metagross went down.

3-2

It's getting close.
Magnezone appeared.
Momo Used Flare Blitz.
Magnezone Used Thunder Wave.
Momo was at 65% health thanks to Flare Blitz.
Well with any luck this next move will work and it did.
Momo Was switched to Kinataros.
Magnezone used Thunderbolt.
Kinataros Speed went up 2 stages.
You guessed it Electvire anyways time to end things
Kinataros used Cross Chop
Magnezone Fainted.

3-1

Guess I win.
Rhypherior appeared.
Kin used Earthquake
Rhypherior Fainted.

3-0

Woot I win

Before the Match

(22:32:03) (LOSTIE) 2 rules: I catch a hint of cheating and I'm gone. You disconnect when you're losing and I will make sure everyone knows what a sore loser you are.
(22:32:15) (LOSTIE) Got that?
(22:32:23) (Skiks) yeah yeah
(22:33:39) (LOSTIE) waiting for you
After the match
(22:55:51) (LOSTIE) Goddamn Tangrpwth. I gotta get myself one of those. Never fouhgt opne before, Assumed they were useless. This game is yours
(22:56:02) (Skiks) heh it awesome isn't it
(22:56:12) (Skiks) great suprise
(22:56:15) (LOSTIE) Nobody ever sees that thing coming
(22:56:38) (Skiks) that was exciting match
(22:56:40) (Skiks) gg

As you can see it was a fun match so time to look at the results.

Pros:
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Tangrowth Ownage
-I won with 3 pokes left
-Momo and Kin made great late game sweepers
-I messed up on some predictions
Cons:
-bad predictions-this shows I need more battle experience

Guess my team is decided for now :>
 
Sorry to say, but this was poorly done. There are a number of things that make people say damnit...... after they read this so called warstory, and here are some: You didn't take any time to type it out, bad format, no sleep clause appereantly but w/e, and it was just plain hard to read.

Please either redo this or do a much better job if you decide to make another warstory. I know you're trying to entertain the community with this, but I don't think you tried hard on it.

I think you should check out some of the other wartstories and use the format or a similar one on yours.

I'm sorry if I sound like I'm minimodding, which I don't mean to be doing, really. I'm just trying to show you that this was hard to read, and not worked on well. Sorry if you took any offense to that.
 
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