Lure 2: Heatran is a guaranteed switch in for Talonflame, so there's no reason Talonflame would wanna switch into Heatran to come right back out.
Lure 3: Similar to above, with Talonflame not really wanting to switch into Garchomp due to the recoil damage. They won't really know you're not a Tank Garchomp, so they'll still avoid switching into Garchomp.
Lure 4: Only problem is that Talonflame can just use Taunt to prevent Altaria from setting up or using Roost to stay alive while Talonflame can spam Roost to let the burn kill Altaria.
Lure 6: Same reasoning as Lure 3, with Talonflame not wanting to switch intro Garchomp.
Lure 7: Taunt could work, but it'll have to be a killer prediction, since Talonflame doesn't really wanna switch into Bisharp in general.
Lure 8: Ancient Power won't kill and gets easily PP stalled by Roost
Lure 9: Mega Scizor is more of a bulky sweeper, and giving up SD for Toxic won't really help much, since Talonflame can just burn Scizor and then eat any attack easily.
Lure 12: Thunderbolt honestly doesn't do much, and even then, Talonflame has Roost to keep surviving while it shuts down Clefable with Taunt