My first actual team! Please help!

[Incisions]

Swampert, Impish @ Leftovers
Avalanche
Stone Edge
Stealth Rock
Earthquake
240hp/18atk/252def

I usually always lead with this since so many people lead with Gyarados and can do nothing. I'm also thinking about put Roar on there to get rid of Gyarados and Ninjask...
Roar over Avalanche?

Weavile, Jolly @ Expert Belt
Pursuit/Night Slash
Ice Punch
Brick Break
Aerial Ace/ Fake Out
6hp/252atk/252speed

I can't decide if I like Aerial Ace or Fake Out more. Aerial Ace I really have for Infernapes and Heracrosses...So you know

Jirachi, Modest @ leftovers
Energy Ball/Grass Knot
Thunderbolt
Psychic
Shadow Ball
6hp/252spatk/252speed

Great coverage and can take a hit. also I can't bring it in on a Will-O-Wisp if I absolutely have to.

Hitmontop, Adamant @ Life Orb
Fake Out
Bullet Punch
Mach Punch
Close Comat
252hp/252atk/6speed

The absolute greatest Pokemon. I love it so much.
It saves me so much it's ridiculous

Ninetales, Timid @ Wide Lens
Hypnosis
Nasty Plot
Fire Blast
Energy Ball
6hp/252spatk/252speed

I bring her in for Flash Fires since I have 2 fire weaknesses and then Hypnosis then and them sweep with a nasty Plot. Really unexpected and can honestly destroy teams with a Flash Fire Boost and one Nasty Plot.

Flygon, Naughty @ Choice Scarf
Draco Meteor
U-Turn
Earthquake
Stone Edge
252atk/122spatk/236speed

Revenge killer...comes in and just destroys with scarf. always kills Garchomps and kids then begin to piss their pants.
Can't take all the hits in the world. but I do like it.

I realize I have no spinners or phazers which isn't always good.
and I don't really like walls except Swampert.

So let me know what you think. =)

 

[DeLorean]

Swampert, Impish @ Leftovers
Avalanche
Stone Edge
Stealth Rock
Earthquake
240hp/18atk/252def

Sure gyara can't do much to you, but stone edge is a 3HKO without intimidate, which is pretty sad. Try pump some more attack EV's in there. You'll might pull off an 2HKO (I'd check, but I'm too lazy) with a choice band and a positive nature, just.

Also, avalanche? Anything that gets hit super effective by this can OHKO you first, except for CB mence, and thats a rare lead nowadays.

Weavile, Jolly @ Expert Belt
Pursuit/Night Slash
Ice Punch
Brick Break
Aerial Ace/ Fake Out
6hp/252atk/252speed

USE PURSUIT.

Gar and his psychic / dark cronies will tear you to pieces if you don't.

Also, I like ice shard on the last slot, to kill off scarfchomp.

Besides, if infernape and hera give you trouble, gliscor is only a team slot away.

Jirachi, Modest @ leftovers
Energy Ball/Grass Knot
Thunderbolt
Psychic
Shadow Ball
6hp/252spatk/252speed

Go for grass knot, and try a more defensive spread. I'm not sure what, whatever works for you.

Hitmontop, Adamant @ Life Orb
Fake Out
Bullet Punch
Mach Punch
Close Comat
252hp/252atk/6speed

Internet h5 for the love of hitmontop. :-D

Ninetales, Timid @ Wide Lens
Hypnosis
Nasty Plot
Fire Blast
Energy Ball
6hp/252spatk/252speed

It's all right, I guess. Try sash, so that you get a hypnosis in.

Flygon, Naughty @ Choice Scarf
Draco Meteor
U-Turn
Earthquake
Stone Edge
252atk/122spatk/236speed

Cool.

All I want you to do is pack another mixed wall.

And I will die a happy man.

=p

 

[Incisions]

Thanks for the help!
for this mixed wall, who do you recommend?

 

[dirtybirdy]

Your team is extremely offensive, so the weavile will probably do best as a revenge killer so go with the suggestions of the first poster (pursuit and ice shard), pursuit for ghosts and psychics, ice shard for scarfchomps and random reversal lucarios or anything of that nature.

Again I would agree that you need another tank of sorts, I had a similar offensive team with forretress along side swampert to set up spikes and stealth rock for my sweepers and the two tango'd rather well. If for whatever reason you add a forretress keep in mind this leaves you special wall-less so tread with caution.

 

[DeLorean]

Thanks for the help!
for this mixed wall, who do you recommend?

Hmm.

Mixed Wall.

I dunno, actually. Something like a celebi? Really, you can't go wrong with something that has a good reliable recovery move and good defences.

I really don't know, so sorry.

I'm looking for something now.

EDIT: A good porygon-2 perhaps? You'll need a ghost type in there though. =D

 

[Incisions]

What about I do both and get a Spiritomb?