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MY first competitive pokemon team. Help!

Discussion in 'Past Gen Teams' started by Arturx, Aug 14, 2012.

  1. Arturx

    Arturx

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    Hello everyone! This is my first attempt at making a competitive team. Since this is my first competitive Pokemon team I tried to stick to the basic, 1 lead, 2 sweepers, 2 walls , 1 support.

    so my Pokemon are:

    Omastar
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    Shell armor
    focus sash

    toxic spikes ( thinking of switching for a non hazard move)
    spikes
    stealth rocks
    surf

    Omastar would be my lead, I would try to set up the most hazards possible, before I die, the focus sash would allow me to set up at least 1 hazard.

    Milotic
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    leftovers
    Marvel Scale

    Toxic
    Recover
    Surf
    Ice beam

    Milotic would be my special wall, She would hit foes hard due to her high special attack, and she could also toxic then stall the other Pokemon to death with recover.

    Rhyperior
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    leftovers
    Rock head

    Toxic
    Dig
    Stone Egde
    Protect

    Rhyperior would be my physical wall, He would hit hard with Stone Edge due to its STAB and high attack, he could also Toxic then stall with protect and dig.

    Alakazam
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    Life orb
    Syncronize

    Psychic
    Shadow ball
    Recover
    Energy ball

    Alakazam would be my special sweeper, he can out speed most things and has a high Special attack and the life orb would boost that even more and he could recover his health lost by the life orb with recover.

    Ursaring
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    Flame orb
    Guts

    Close Combat
    Facade
    Crunch
    Swords Dance

    Ursaring would be my physical sweeper, he has a high attack, Guts + Flame orb + Facade would hit anything really hard and swords dance would increase his attack even further.

    Clefable
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    Leftovers
    Magic Guard

    Wish
    Thunder wave
    Seismic Toss
    Encore

    Clefable would be my support, she could paralyze Pokemon my sweepers cannot out speed, she could wish pass if one of my Pokemon have low health, she could also Encore the enemy in a move that does not deal damaged so I can have a same switch.

    Thanks for reading!!! All harsh criticism is welcome.
    :G
  2. morningsun

    morningsun

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    Your team is grass and fighting weak. I recommend using the Marriland Team Builder. As far as the team is concerned, dig can be taken advantage of. Use Earthquake on Rhyperior instead. Milotic unnecessarily creates a grass weakness and therefore should be replaced with Regice in my opinion. Try using this set:

    Regice@Leftovers
    Nature: Bold
    EVs: 252 HP, 252 Def, 4 SpD
    Moves:
    Ice Beam
    Thunderbolt
    Thunder Wave/ Toxic
    Seismic Toss/ Protect

    BoltBeam coverage hits everything in the game neutrally. Thunder wave for crippling effects and seismic toss for consistent damage or classic toxic stall.
  3. Arturx

    Arturx

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    Thanks for the feedback, Ill try all your suggestions :)

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